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七、书面表达(本大题共20分)
文明从点滴做起,城市因你我美丽。近期,无锡市蝉联"全国文明城市",无锡市民在日常生活中积极
弘扬"树文明之风、创文明之城"的精神。无锡教育电视台将于暑期举办以"How to be a civilized(文明
的) middle school student"为主题的英语口语大赛,请你为此写一篇演讲稿。内容应包含以下要点:
注意:1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;2. 文章须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥;3. 词
数90左右,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
How to be a civilized middle school student
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to
make Wuxi more civilized.
Let's start from small things and try to work together to be civilized students. I'm sure our city will
be better through our efforts!
Thank you!
文明从点滴做起,城市因你我美丽。近期,无锡市蝉联"全国文明城市",无锡市民在日常生活中积极
弘扬"树文明之风、创文明之城"的精神。无锡教育电视台将于暑期举办以"How to be a civilized(文明
的) middle school student"为主题的英语口语大赛,请你为此写一篇演讲稿。内容应包含以下要点:
注意:1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;2. 文章须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥;3. 词
数90左右,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
How to be a civilized middle school student
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to
make Wuxi more civilized.
Let's start from small things and try to work together to be civilized students. I'm sure our city will
be better through our efforts!
Thank you!
答案
七、One possible version:
How to be a civilized middle school student
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Wuxi more civilized.
First, we should mind our public behaviour. Always obey traffic rules, like waiting for the green light and using the zebra crossing. Don't push in before others when queuing. Also, don't speak loudly in public places. Second, we can take part in voluntary work like helping the elderly, or cleaning up parks and streets. These small acts bring warmth to others.
Third, it's important to live a green lifestyle. Remember to turn off lights when leaving rooms, save water by reusing it, and reduce waste by using less plastic.
During the summer holiday, I will read more books to improve myself and learn more about traditional Chinese culture. Besides, I will practise playing the piano to develop my hobby.
Let's start from small things and try to work together to be civilized students. I'm sure our city will be better through our efforts!
Thank you!
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿。②时态:一般现在时和一般将来时。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍公众行为、志愿服务和绿色生活方式;第二步,介绍暑假计划。
[亮点词汇]
①mind our public behaviour注意我们的公众行为
②obey traffic rules遵守交通规则
③take part in voluntary work参加志愿服务
④help the elderly帮助老年人
⑤bring warmth to others给别人带来温暖
⑥improve myself提升自我
⑦practise playing the piano练习弹钢琴
⑧develop my hobby发展我的爱好
[高分句型]
①Third, it's important to live a green lifestyle.(it作形式主语)
②I'm sure our city will be better through our efforts!
How to be a civilized middle school student
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Wuxi more civilized.
First, we should mind our public behaviour. Always obey traffic rules, like waiting for the green light and using the zebra crossing. Don't push in before others when queuing. Also, don't speak loudly in public places. Second, we can take part in voluntary work like helping the elderly, or cleaning up parks and streets. These small acts bring warmth to others.
Third, it's important to live a green lifestyle. Remember to turn off lights when leaving rooms, save water by reusing it, and reduce waste by using less plastic.
During the summer holiday, I will read more books to improve myself and learn more about traditional Chinese culture. Besides, I will practise playing the piano to develop my hobby.
Let's start from small things and try to work together to be civilized students. I'm sure our city will be better through our efforts!
Thank you!
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿。②时态:一般现在时和一般将来时。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍公众行为、志愿服务和绿色生活方式;第二步,介绍暑假计划。
[亮点词汇]
①mind our public behaviour注意我们的公众行为
②obey traffic rules遵守交通规则
③take part in voluntary work参加志愿服务
④help the elderly帮助老年人
⑤bring warmth to others给别人带来温暖
⑥improve myself提升自我
⑦practise playing the piano练习弹钢琴
⑧develop my hobby发展我的爱好
[高分句型]
①Third, it's important to live a green lifestyle.(it作形式主语)
②I'm sure our city will be better through our efforts!
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达（演讲稿），主题为“How to be a civilized middle school student”，需覆盖给定的四个要点：公共行为、志愿工作、绿色生活、暑假计划，同时遵循写作要求：不出现真实信息、适当发挥、词数90左右、开头结尾已给出。解题思路：首先确定体裁为应用文（演讲稿），时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；接着将四个要点逐一展开，补充合理细节（如公共行为可加排队不插队、公共场所不大声说话；志愿工作可加清洁公园；绿色生活可加随手关灯、节水；暑假计划可加读书、练钢琴）；最后衔接开头结尾，运用合适的短语和句式，确保文章流畅、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定写作框架：开头已给出，中间分四段对应四个要点，结尾已给出。
2. 展开公共行为：用一般现在时，写遵守交通规则（等绿灯、走斑马线）、排队不插队、公共场所不大声喧哗，体现文明行为。
3. 展开志愿工作：写参加志愿活动，如帮助老人、清洁公园街道，传递温暖。
4. 展开绿色生活：用it作形式主语的句式，写绿色生活的做法，如随手关灯、节水、减少塑料使用。
5. 展开暑假计划：写暑假多读书提升自己、练习爱好（如钢琴），丰富内容。
6. 衔接开头结尾，确保逻辑连贯，用词准确，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
How to be a civilized middle school student
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Wuxi more civilized.
First, we should mind our public behaviour. Always obey traffic rules, like waiting for the green light and using the zebra crossing. Don't push in before others when queuing. Also, don't speak loudly in public places. Second, we can take part in voluntary work like helping the elderly, or cleaning up parks and streets. These small acts bring warmth to others.
Third, it's important to live a green lifestyle. Remember to turn off lights when leaving rooms, save water by reusing it, and reduce waste by using less plastic.
During the summer holiday, I will read more books to improve myself and learn more about traditional Chinese culture. Besides, I will practise playing the piano to develop my hobby.
Let's start from small things and try to work together to be civilized students. I'm sure our city will be better through our efforts!
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时与一般将来时运用、常用短语搭配
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖所有写作要点，适当补充细节使内容更充实；句式多样（如运用it作形式主语的句型），用词准确恰当，符合演讲稿的文体要求，是一篇优秀的范文，能为学生提供清晰的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语书面表达（演讲稿），主题为“How to be a civilized middle school student”，需覆盖给定的四个要点：公共行为、志愿工作、绿色生活、暑假计划，同时遵循写作要求：不出现真实信息、适当发挥、词数90左右、开头结尾已给出。解题思路：首先确定体裁为应用文（演讲稿），时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；接着将四个要点逐一展开，补充合理细节（如公共行为可加排队不插队、公共场所不大声说话；志愿工作可加清洁公园；绿色生活可加随手关灯、节水；暑假计划可加读书、练钢琴）；最后衔接开头结尾，运用合适的短语和句式，确保文章流畅、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定写作框架：开头已给出，中间分四段对应四个要点，结尾已给出。
2. 展开公共行为：用一般现在时，写遵守交通规则（等绿灯、走斑马线）、排队不插队、公共场所不大声喧哗，体现文明行为。
3. 展开志愿工作：写参加志愿活动，如帮助老人、清洁公园街道，传递温暖。
4. 展开绿色生活：用it作形式主语的句式，写绿色生活的做法，如随手关灯、节水、减少塑料使用。
5. 展开暑假计划：写暑假多读书提升自己、练习爱好（如钢琴），丰富内容。
6. 衔接开头结尾，确保逻辑连贯，用词准确，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
How to be a civilized middle school student
The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Wuxi more civilized.
First, we should mind our public behaviour. Always obey traffic rules, like waiting for the green light and using the zebra crossing. Don't push in before others when queuing. Also, don't speak loudly in public places. Second, we can take part in voluntary work like helping the elderly, or cleaning up parks and streets. These small acts bring warmth to others.
Third, it's important to live a green lifestyle. Remember to turn off lights when leaving rooms, save water by reusing it, and reduce waste by using less plastic.
During the summer holiday, I will read more books to improve myself and learn more about traditional Chinese culture. Besides, I will practise playing the piano to develop my hobby.
Let's start from small things and try to work together to be civilized students. I'm sure our city will be better through our efforts!
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时与一般将来时运用、常用短语搭配
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖所有写作要点，适当补充细节使内容更充实；句式多样（如运用it作形式主语的句型），用词准确恰当，符合演讲稿的文体要求，是一篇优秀的范文，能为学生提供清晰的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.5
