Ⅴ. Think and write. (写作。)
春节是中国人最喜爱的传统节日之一。请结合下面的思维导图,以“My last Spring Festival”为题写一篇作文,和大家分享一下你的春节活动和感受。

My last Spring Festival
春节是中国人最喜爱的传统节日之一。请结合下面的思维导图,以“My last Spring Festival”为题写一篇作文,和大家分享一下你的春节活动和感受。
My last Spring Festival
答案
参考范文:
My last Spring Festival
I had a great Spring Festival last year.
Before the Spring Festival, my family and I were very busy. We went shopping to buy new clothes and delicious food. We also cleaned the house. On New Year's Eve, we had a big family dinner. After dinner, we watched TV together. We talked and laughed happily. Over the Spring Festival, I wore my new clothes and said "Happy Chinese New Year!" to my family. Everyone looked happy.
I love the Spring Festival very much!
My last Spring Festival
I had a great Spring Festival last year.
Before the Spring Festival, my family and I were very busy. We went shopping to buy new clothes and delicious food. We also cleaned the house. On New Year's Eve, we had a big family dinner. After dinner, we watched TV together. We talked and laughed happily. Over the Spring Festival, I wore my new clothes and said "Happy Chinese New Year!" to my family. Everyone looked happy.
I love the Spring Festival very much!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇以“My last Spring Festival”为题的节日话题写作,要求结合思维导图中春节不同阶段(节前、除夕夜、春节期间)的活动完成创作。首先确定时态为一般过去时(对应“last Spring Festival”),接着分三个阶段梳理内容:节前写购物、打扫房屋;除夕夜写家庭大餐、看电视;春节期间写穿新衣、送祝福,最后补充感受,让文章连贯自然。
【解析】
1. 确定时态:全文使用一般过去时,描述过去的春节活动。
2. 结构安排:
开头点明主题,说明去年春节过得愉快;
节前部分:结合思维导图写和家人购物、打扫房子的忙碌;
除夕夜部分:写吃团圆饭、一起看电视的温馨场景,补充细节(说笑);
春节期间部分:写穿新衣、对家人说祝福的活动;
结尾表达对春节的喜爱。
3. 语言衔接:用连接词(before, on New Year’s Eve, over)串联各阶段,使文章流畅。
【答案】
My last Spring Festival
I had a great Spring Festival last year.
Before the Spring Festival, my family and I were very busy. We went shopping to buy new clothes and delicious food. We also cleaned the house. On New Year's Eve, we had a big family dinner. After dinner, we watched TV together. We talked and laughed happily. Over the Spring Festival, I wore my new clothes and said "Happy Chinese New Year!" to my family. Everyone looked happy.
I love the Spring Festival very much!
【知识点】
英语节日话题写作;一般过去时运用
【点评】
本题借助思维导图降低写作难度,引导学生整合春节不同阶段的活动信息,锻炼书面表达能力,贴近生活实际,易于学生上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇以“My last Spring Festival”为题的节日话题写作,要求结合思维导图中春节不同阶段(节前、除夕夜、春节期间)的活动完成创作。首先确定时态为一般过去时(对应“last Spring Festival”),接着分三个阶段梳理内容:节前写购物、打扫房屋;除夕夜写家庭大餐、看电视;春节期间写穿新衣、送祝福,最后补充感受,让文章连贯自然。
【解析】
1. 确定时态:全文使用一般过去时,描述过去的春节活动。
2. 结构安排:
开头点明主题,说明去年春节过得愉快;
节前部分:结合思维导图写和家人购物、打扫房子的忙碌;
除夕夜部分:写吃团圆饭、一起看电视的温馨场景,补充细节(说笑);
春节期间部分:写穿新衣、对家人说祝福的活动;
结尾表达对春节的喜爱。
3. 语言衔接:用连接词(before, on New Year’s Eve, over)串联各阶段,使文章流畅。
【答案】
My last Spring Festival
I had a great Spring Festival last year.
Before the Spring Festival, my family and I were very busy. We went shopping to buy new clothes and delicious food. We also cleaned the house. On New Year's Eve, we had a big family dinner. After dinner, we watched TV together. We talked and laughed happily. Over the Spring Festival, I wore my new clothes and said "Happy Chinese New Year!" to my family. Everyone looked happy.
I love the Spring Festival very much!
【知识点】
英语节日话题写作;一般过去时运用
【点评】
本题借助思维导图降低写作难度,引导学生整合春节不同阶段的活动信息,锻炼书面表达能力,贴近生活实际,易于学生上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.5
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