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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D27
假如你作为学校的代表,应邀前往加拿大某中学参观学习,在欢迎会上,你要用英文介绍中国的基本情况。请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇介绍中国的短文。
提示:
About China
Capital City: Beijing
Language: Chinese
Famous Places: the Palace Museum, the Great wall...
Holidays: the Spring Festival, National Day...
注意:(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得透露个人真实信息;
(3)词数70左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you something about China.
假如你作为学校的代表,应邀前往加拿大某中学参观学习,在欢迎会上,你要用英文介绍中国的基本情况。请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇介绍中国的短文。
提示:
About China
Capital City: Beijing
Language: Chinese
Famous Places: the Palace Museum, the Great wall...
Holidays: the Spring Festival, National Day...
注意:(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得透露个人真实信息;
(3)词数70左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you something about China.
China is in the east of Asia. It is very beautiful. China's national flag is red and yellow, and it has five stars. Beijing is the capital city of China. People speak Chinese in China.
China has many famous places, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, and the Great Wall. They are all beautiful and interesting.
The Spring Festival is a traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February.
China's National Day is on October 1st.
China is great. I love China.
进阶版参考：China is a wonderful country, full of history and culture in East Asia. The capital is Beijing and we speak Chinese there. There are plenty of exciting places of interest, such as the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. During the Spring Festival, we eat tasty meals and have fun together. When it snows heavily in winter, we wear warm scarves and gloves. China's National Day is on October 1st, and we always celebrate it happily. If you visit China, I'm sure you will all have a good time.
答案
第5课时 主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you something about China.
China is in the east of Asia. It is very beautiful. China's national flag is red and yellow, and it has five stars. Beijing is the capital city of China. People speak Chinese in China. China has many famous places, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, and the Great Wall. They are all beautiful and interesting. The Spring Festival is a traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. China's National Day is on October 1st.
China is great. I love China.
＞ 进阶版范文
Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you something about China.
China is a wonderful country, full of history and culture in East Asia. The capital is Beijing and we speak Chinese there. There are plenty of exciting places of interest, such as the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. During the Spring Festival, we eat tasty meals and have fun together. When it snows heavily in winter, we wear warm scarves and gloves. China's National Day is on October 1st, and we always celebrate it happily.
If you visit China, I'm sure you will all have a good time.
＞ 基础版范文
Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you something about China.
China is in the east of Asia. It is very beautiful. China's national flag is red and yellow, and it has five stars. Beijing is the capital city of China. People speak Chinese in China. China has many famous places, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, and the Great Wall. They are all beautiful and interesting. The Spring Festival is a traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. China's National Day is on October 1st.
China is great. I love China.
＞ 进阶版范文
Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you something about China.
China is a wonderful country, full of history and culture in East Asia. The capital is Beijing and we speak Chinese there. There are plenty of exciting places of interest, such as the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. During the Spring Festival, we eat tasty meals and have fun together. When it snows heavily in winter, we wear warm scarves and gloves. China's National Day is on October 1st, and we always celebrate it happily.
If you visit China, I'm sure you will all have a good time.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语提示性写作题，要求作为学校代表在欢迎会上用英文介绍中国，需涵盖所有提示内容（首都北京、语言汉语、著名景点故宫/长城、节日春节/国庆），同时满足词数70左右、不透露个人信息的要求。解题思路：①承接给定开头，依次介绍中国的首都、使用语言；②列举指定著名景点并补充简单描述；③介绍两个指定节日的基本情况；④适当收尾，确保语句通顺、符合欢迎会的语境。
【解析】
首先承接开头，介绍中国首都为北京，使用语言是汉语；接着列举著名景点如故宫、长城，说明其特点；再介绍传统节日春节和国庆的时间/意义；最后简单表达对中国的赞美，整合所有提示信息，控制词数在要求范围内，确保语句通顺自然。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you something about China.
China is in the east of Asia. It is very beautiful. China's national flag is red and yellow, and it has five stars. Beijing is the capital city of China. People speak Chinese in China. China has many famous places, such as the Palace Museum, and the Great Wall. They are all beautiful and interesting. The Spring Festival is a traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. China's National Day is on October 1st.
China is great. I love China.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，提示性短文写作
【点评】
本题结合实际交际场景，考查学生整合信息、用英语进行介绍的能力，要求涵盖指定内容，难度适中，能有效锻炼学生的英语表达和信息梳理能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语提示性写作题，要求作为学校代表在欢迎会上用英文介绍中国，需涵盖所有提示内容（首都北京、语言汉语、著名景点故宫/长城、节日春节/国庆），同时满足词数70左右、不透露个人信息的要求。解题思路：①承接给定开头，依次介绍中国的首都、使用语言；②列举指定著名景点并补充简单描述；③介绍两个指定节日的基本情况；④适当收尾，确保语句通顺、符合欢迎会的语境。
【解析】
首先承接开头，介绍中国首都为北京，使用语言是汉语；接着列举著名景点如故宫、长城，说明其特点；再介绍传统节日春节和国庆的时间/意义；最后简单表达对中国的赞美，整合所有提示信息，控制词数在要求范围内，确保语句通顺自然。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I'd like to tell you something about China.
China is in the east of Asia. It is very beautiful. China's national flag is red and yellow, and it has five stars. Beijing is the capital city of China. People speak Chinese in China. China has many famous places, such as the Palace Museum, and the Great Wall. They are all beautiful and interesting. The Spring Festival is a traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. China's National Day is on October 1st.
China is great. I love China.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，提示性短文写作
【点评】
本题结合实际交际场景，考查学生整合信息、用英语进行介绍的能力，要求涵盖指定内容，难度适中，能有效锻炼学生的英语表达和信息梳理能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
