登录
第5课时 主题写作专项 练写作 答案D27
主题词网
优选词汇
位置 · north · south · east · west · location · province
气候 · warm · cold · hot · cool · rainy · dry
景点 · river · mountain · forest · waterfall(瀑布) · desert(沙漠)
感受 · happy · excited · pleased · interested · fun · tired
写作实例
审时态：一般现在时 审主题
为促进山东旅游业的发展，山东省文旅局正在招聘志愿者（volunteer），向海内外推荐山东的旅游景点。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示用英语写封邮件，应聘这一岗位。
要点：1.介绍自己的基本情况，包括年龄、性格、兴趣爱好等；
2.介绍山东著名景点泰山的地位、景观等。
要求：1.书写认真规范，语句通顺，表达正确，包含提示的内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2.不少于60词，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
写作支架
开头 — 介绍自己 I want to be a volunteer. I'm years old. I'm and . I'm good at and I often .（高分句式1）My favourite subject is because it makes me .
中间 — 介绍泰山 Mount Taishan is in . It's Five Great Mountains in China. We can see
. When the sun , the sky over the mountain and the clouds .（高分句式2）The top of the mountain is to enjoy the views.
结尾 — 期待回复 I'm looking forward to .
优秀范文
Dear Sir or Madam¹,
I want to be a volunteer. I'm 13 years old. I'm kind and friendly. I'm good at English and I often help my classmates with English. ² My favourite subject is music because it makes me happy.
Mount Taishan is in Shandong Province.³ It's one of the Five Great Mountains in China. We can see beautiful springs, trees, birds and flowers there. When the sun rises or sets, the sky over the mountain turns orange and the clouds turn pink and red. The top of the mountain is a wonderful place to enjoy the views.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,¹
Li Hua¹
主题词网
优选词汇
位置 · north · south · east · west · location · province
气候 · warm · cold · hot · cool · rainy · dry
景点 · river · mountain · forest · waterfall(瀑布) · desert(沙漠)
感受 · happy · excited · pleased · interested · fun · tired
写作实例
审时态：一般现在时 审主题
为促进山东旅游业的发展，山东省文旅局正在招聘志愿者（volunteer），向海内外推荐山东的旅游景点。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示用英语写封邮件，应聘这一岗位。
要点：1.介绍自己的基本情况，包括年龄、性格、兴趣爱好等；
2.介绍山东著名景点泰山的地位、景观等。
要求：1.书写认真规范，语句通顺，表达正确，包含提示的内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2.不少于60词，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
写作支架
开头 — 介绍自己 I want to be a volunteer. I'm years old. I'm and . I'm good at and I often .（高分句式1）My favourite subject is because it makes me .
中间 — 介绍泰山 Mount Taishan is in . It's Five Great Mountains in China. We can see
. When the sun , the sky over the mountain and the clouds .（高分句式2）The top of the mountain is to enjoy the views.结尾 — 期待回复 I'm looking forward to .
优秀范文
Dear Sir or Madam¹,
I want to be a volunteer. I'm 13 years old. I'm kind and friendly. I'm good at English and I often help my classmates with English. ² My favourite subject is music because it makes me happy.
Mount Taishan is in Shandong Province.³ It's one of the Five Great Mountains in China. We can see beautiful springs, trees, birds and flowers there. When the sun rises or sets, the sky over the mountain turns orange and the clouds turn pink and red. The top of the mountain is a wonderful place to enjoy the views.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,¹
Li Hua¹
答案
优秀范文
Dear Sir or Madam¹,
I want to be a volunteer. I'm 13 years old. I'm kind and friendly. I'm good at English and I often help my classmates with English. ² My favourite subject is music because it makes me happy.
Mount Taishan is in Shandong Province.³ It's one of the Five Great Mountains in China. We can see beautiful springs, trees, birds and flowers there. When the sun rises or sets, the sky over the mountain turns orange and the clouds turn pink and red. The top of the mountain is a wonderful place to enjoy the views.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,¹
Li Hua¹
亮点评析
①符合邮件的格式。
②并列复合句的使用使全文句式丰富。
③该句是总起句，引出下文对泰山的具体描述。
Dear Sir or Madam¹,
I want to be a volunteer. I'm 13 years old. I'm kind and friendly. I'm good at English and I often help my classmates with English. ² My favourite subject is music because it makes me happy.
Mount Taishan is in Shandong Province.³ It's one of the Five Great Mountains in China. We can see beautiful springs, trees, birds and flowers there. When the sun rises or sets, the sky over the mountain turns orange and the clouds turn pink and red. The top of the mountain is a wonderful place to enjoy the views.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,¹
Li Hua¹
亮点评析
①符合邮件的格式。
②并列复合句的使用使全文句式丰富。
③该句是总起句，引出下文对泰山的具体描述。
解析
【分析】本题要求写一封应聘志愿者的英语邮件，需遵循“介绍自己—介绍泰山—期待回复”的结构，时态为一般现在时，要涵盖年龄、性格、兴趣爱好，泰山的位置、地位、景观等要点，运用高分句式，符合邮件格式，保证语句通顺、内容连贯。
【解析】首先开头部分，按照支架填写内容：说明想当志愿者，年龄（如13岁），性格（如kind and friendly），擅长的科目（如English）及日常行为（如help my classmates with English），最喜欢的科目（如music）及原因（如makes me happy）；中间部分，介绍泰山位于山东省，是中国五岳之一，描述泰山的景观（如beautiful springs, trees, birds and flowers），太阳升起或落下时的景色（如the sky turns orange, the clouds turn pink and red），山顶是欣赏风景的好地方；结尾表达期待回复。
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I want to be a volunteer. I'm 13 years old. I'm kind and friendly. I'm good at English and I often help my classmates with English. My favourite subject is music because it makes me happy.
Mount Taishan is in Shandong Province. It's one of the Five Great Mountains in China. We can see beautiful springs, trees, birds and flowers there. When the sun rises or sets, the sky over the mountain turns orange and the clouds turn pink and red. The top of the mountain is a wonderful place to enjoy the views.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语邮件写作、一般现在时、景物描写
【点评】范文符合邮件格式，结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，运用并列复合句丰富句式，语言准确流畅，内容连贯，是一篇优秀的主题写作范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先开头部分，按照支架填写内容：说明想当志愿者，年龄（如13岁），性格（如kind and friendly），擅长的科目（如English）及日常行为（如help my classmates with English），最喜欢的科目（如music）及原因（如makes me happy）；中间部分，介绍泰山位于山东省，是中国五岳之一，描述泰山的景观（如beautiful springs, trees, birds and flowers），太阳升起或落下时的景色（如the sky turns orange, the clouds turn pink and red），山顶是欣赏风景的好地方；结尾表达期待回复。
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I want to be a volunteer. I'm 13 years old. I'm kind and friendly. I'm good at English and I often help my classmates with English. My favourite subject is music because it makes me happy.
Mount Taishan is in Shandong Province. It's one of the Five Great Mountains in China. We can see beautiful springs, trees, birds and flowers there. When the sun rises or sets, the sky over the mountain turns orange and the clouds turn pink and red. The top of the mountain is a wonderful place to enjoy the views.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语邮件写作、一般现在时、景物描写
【点评】范文符合邮件格式，结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，运用并列复合句丰富句式，语言准确流畅，内容连贯，是一篇优秀的主题写作范文。
【难度系数】0.5
