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审主题 审人称：第一、三人称
假设你将代表学校参加市里的对外宣传征文活动,主题为“你最喜爱哪个季节?”,请你用英文写一篇短文来表达你的观点,并具体描写该季节的特点和喜爱它的原因等。
审时态：一般现在时
要求:1)文章必须包含所有内容要点,并适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分;
3)词数不少于80(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
审要点
审词数
My Favourite Season
Each season brings its own charm. As for me, my favourite one is
写作支架
教材原文
P44 My favourite season is summer.
P37 It is a time of new life and new hope.
P44 I enjoy going swimming with my friends.
优秀范文
My Favourite Season
Each season brings its own charm. As for me, my favourite one is spring.①
The weather is mild and pleasant, making it ideal for outdoor activities. It is a time of new life and new hope.
Parks and gardens are filled with② blooming flowers and green trees. What’s more②, you can hear a number of birds singing in the trees happily. There are many different kinds of② cultural events in spring, such as the Kite Flying Festival. I enjoy flying a kite with my friends and family. People always get together and have a lot of fun②.
Spring is a season of beauty and joy, making it the most wonderful time of the year.③
亮点评析
①该句是总述句,引起下文。
②短语 be filled with、What’s more、different kinds of 的使用,提高了本篇书面表达的得分。
③该句是总结语,说出了自己对春天的感受。
假设你将代表学校参加市里的对外宣传征文活动,主题为“你最喜爱哪个季节?”,请你用英文写一篇短文来表达你的观点,并具体描写该季节的特点和喜爱它的原因等。
审时态：一般现在时
要求:1)文章必须包含所有内容要点,并适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分;
3)词数不少于80(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
审要点
审词数
My Favourite Season
Each season brings its own charm. As for me, my favourite one is
spring
写作支架
教材原文
P44 My favourite season is summer.
P37 It is a time of new life and new hope.
P44 I enjoy going swimming with my friends.
优秀范文
My Favourite Season
Each season brings its own charm. As for me, my favourite one is spring.①
The weather is mild and pleasant, making it ideal for outdoor activities. It is a time of new life and new hope.
Parks and gardens are filled with② blooming flowers and green trees. What’s more②, you can hear a number of birds singing in the trees happily. There are many different kinds of② cultural events in spring, such as the Kite Flying Festival. I enjoy flying a kite with my friends and family. People always get together and have a lot of fun②.
Spring is a season of beauty and joy, making it the most wonderful time of the year.③
亮点评析
①该句是总述句,引起下文。
②短语 be filled with、What’s more、different kinds of 的使用,提高了本篇书面表达的得分。
③该句是总结语,说出了自己对春天的感受。
答案
My Favourite Season
Each season brings its own charm. As for me, my favourite one is spring.
The weather is mild and pleasant, making it ideal for outdoor activities. It is a time of new life and new hope.
Parks and gardens are filled with blooming flowers and green trees. What’s more, you can hear a number of birds singing in the trees happily. There are many different kinds of cultural events in spring, such as the Kite Flying Festival. I enjoy flying a kite with my friends and family. People always get together and have a lot of fun.
Spring is a season of beauty and joy, making it the most wonderful time of the year.
亮点评析
①该句是总述句,引起下文。
②短语 be filled with、What’s more、different kinds of 的使用,提高了本篇书面表达的得分。
③该句是总结语,说出了自己对春天的感受。
Each season brings its own charm. As for me, my favourite one is spring.
The weather is mild and pleasant, making it ideal for outdoor activities. It is a time of new life and new hope.
Parks and gardens are filled with blooming flowers and green trees. What’s more, you can hear a number of birds singing in the trees happily. There are many different kinds of cultural events in spring, such as the Kite Flying Festival. I enjoy flying a kite with my friends and family. People always get together and have a lot of fun.
Spring is a season of beauty and joy, making it the most wonderful time of the year.
亮点评析
①该句是总述句,引起下文。
②短语 be filled with、What’s more、different kinds of 的使用,提高了本篇书面表达的得分。
③该句是总结语,说出了自己对春天的感受。
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题，主题是“你最喜爱的季节”。解题思路：1. 确定最喜欢的季节（选春天，贴合写作支架示例）；2. 按支架结构写作：开头引出喜爱的季节，中间依次介绍季节的天气特点、象征意义、景物、可参与的活动、文化相关内容，结尾总结感受；3. 注意用一般现在时、第一人称，避免真实信息，运用高分短语和句式，确保要点齐全、词数达标。
【解析】
根据写作要求和支架内容，逐空组织语句：1. 开头引出：my favourite one is spring；2. 天气与适合的活动：The weather is mild and pleasant, making it ideal for outdoor activities；3. 季节象征：It is a time of new life and new hope；4. 景物描写：Parks and gardens are filled with blooming flowers and green trees；5. 补充活动：What’s more, you can hear a number of birds singing in the trees happily；6. 文化活动：There are many different kinds of cultural events in spring, such as the Kite Flying Festival；7. 个人爱好：I enjoy flying a kite with my friends and family；8. 群体活动：People always get together and have a lot of fun；9. 结尾总结：Spring is a season of beauty and joy, making it the most wonderful time of the year。
【答案】
My Favourite Season
Each season brings its own charm. As for me, my favourite one is spring.
The weather is mild and pleasant, making it ideal for outdoor activities. It is a time of new life and new hope.
Parks and gardens are filled with blooming flowers and green trees. What’s more, you can hear a number of birds singing in the trees happily. There are many different kinds of cultural events in spring, such as the Kite Flying Festival. I enjoy flying a kite with my friends and family. People always get together and have a lot of fun.
Spring is a season of beauty and joy, making it the most wonderful time of the year.
亮点评析
①该句是总述句,引起下文。
②短语 be filled with、What’s more、different kinds 的使用,提高了本篇书面表达的得分。
③该句是总结语,说出了自己对春天的感受。
【知识点】
英语写作（季节话题）、一般现在时运用、常用短语运用
【点评】
短文紧扣主题，结构清晰，按支架完成内容，运用高分句式和短语，要点齐全，符合征文要求，语言流畅自然。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语话题写作题，主题是“你最喜爱的季节”。解题思路：1. 确定最喜欢的季节（选春天，贴合写作支架示例）；2. 按支架结构写作：开头引出喜爱的季节，中间依次介绍季节的天气特点、象征意义、景物、可参与的活动、文化相关内容，结尾总结感受；3. 注意用一般现在时、第一人称，避免真实信息，运用高分短语和句式，确保要点齐全、词数达标。
【解析】
根据写作要求和支架内容，逐空组织语句：1. 开头引出：my favourite one is spring；2. 天气与适合的活动：The weather is mild and pleasant, making it ideal for outdoor activities；3. 季节象征：It is a time of new life and new hope；4. 景物描写：Parks and gardens are filled with blooming flowers and green trees；5. 补充活动：What’s more, you can hear a number of birds singing in the trees happily；6. 文化活动：There are many different kinds of cultural events in spring, such as the Kite Flying Festival；7. 个人爱好：I enjoy flying a kite with my friends and family；8. 群体活动：People always get together and have a lot of fun；9. 结尾总结：Spring is a season of beauty and joy, making it the most wonderful time of the year。
【答案】
My Favourite Season
Each season brings its own charm. As for me, my favourite one is spring.
The weather is mild and pleasant, making it ideal for outdoor activities. It is a time of new life and new hope.
Parks and gardens are filled with blooming flowers and green trees. What’s more, you can hear a number of birds singing in the trees happily. There are many different kinds of cultural events in spring, such as the Kite Flying Festival. I enjoy flying a kite with my friends and family. People always get together and have a lot of fun.
Spring is a season of beauty and joy, making it the most wonderful time of the year.
亮点评析
①该句是总述句,引起下文。
②短语 be filled with、What’s more、different kinds 的使用,提高了本篇书面表达的得分。
③该句是总结语,说出了自己对春天的感受。
【知识点】
英语写作（季节话题）、一般现在时运用、常用短语运用
【点评】
短文紧扣主题，结构清晰，按支架完成内容，运用高分句式和短语，要点齐全，符合征文要求，语言流畅自然。
【难度系数】
0.7
