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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D12
「2026广东深圳华附集团期中」
四季缤纷多彩，每个季节都有它独特的魅力。阳光明媚的春天、热情如火的夏天、天高云淡的秋天、白雪皑皑的冬天……你最喜欢哪个季节呢？假设你是李华，请结合以下要点给你的外国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的季节。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;4.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How’s everything going? I’d like to tell you about
What’s your favourite season? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
「2026广东深圳华附集团期中」
四季缤纷多彩，每个季节都有它独特的魅力。阳光明媚的春天、热情如火的夏天、天高云淡的秋天、白雪皑皑的冬天……你最喜欢哪个季节呢？假设你是李华，请结合以下要点给你的外国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的季节。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;4.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How’s everything going? I’d like to tell you about
my favourite season—autumn.
Autumn here is cool and nice. The sky is blue and clear. The wind is soft. Leaves become yellow and red. They fall like dancing butterflies. Birds fly to the south. Squirrels are busy getting nuts for winter.
I like hiking with my family best in autumn. We climb hills to see the colourful leaves. I also enjoy flying kites in the park. The wind is just right. It is so fun!
My favourite autumn festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. My family gets together on that day. We eat mooncakes and look at the full moon. It makes me feel warm and happy.
I love autumn because it is beautiful and fun. It is also a season of harvest. It teaches me to be thankful.
What’s your favourite season? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Tom,
How's everything going? I'd like to tell you about my favourite season—autumn.
Autumn here is cool and nice. The sky is blue and clear. The wind is soft. Leaves become yellow and red. They fall like dancing butterflies. Birds fly to the south. Squirrels are busy getting nuts for winter.
I like hiking with my family best in autumn. We climb hills to see the colourful leaves. I also enjoy flying kites in the park. The wind is just right. It is so fun!
My favourite autumn festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. My family gets together on that day. We eat mooncakes and look at the full moon. It makes me feel warm and happy.
I love autumn because it is beautiful and fun. It is also a season of harvest. It teaches me to be thankful.
What's your favourite season? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Tom,
How's everything going? I'd like to tell you about my favourite season—autumn.
Autumn in my city is cool and comfortable. The sky is clear and blue, and the wind is gentle. Leaves turn yellow and red, falling like dancing butterflies. You can see birds flying south, and squirrels are busy collecting nuts for winter.
What I enjoy most in autumn is going hiking with my family. We often climb mountains to see the colourful leaves. I also love flying kites in the park when the wind is just right. It's so much fun!
My favourite festival in autumn is the Mid-Autumn Festival. On that day, my family gets together to enjoy mooncakes and admire the full moon. It makes me feel warm and happy.
I love autumn not only because of the beautiful views and fun activities, but also because it's a season of harvest and gratitude. It reminds me to be thankful for what I have.
What's your favourite season? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Tom,
How's everything going? I'd like to tell you about my favourite season—autumn.
Autumn here is cool and nice. The sky is blue and clear. The wind is soft. Leaves become yellow and red. They fall like dancing butterflies. Birds fly to the south. Squirrels are busy getting nuts for winter.
I like hiking with my family best in autumn. We climb hills to see the colourful leaves. I also enjoy flying kites in the park. The wind is just right. It is so fun!
My favourite autumn festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. My family gets together on that day. We eat mooncakes and look at the full moon. It makes me feel warm and happy.
I love autumn because it is beautiful and fun. It is also a season of harvest. It teaches me to be thankful.
What's your favourite season? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Tom,
How's everything going? I'd like to tell you about my favourite season—autumn.
Autumn in my city is cool and comfortable. The sky is clear and blue, and the wind is gentle. Leaves turn yellow and red, falling like dancing butterflies. You can see birds flying south, and squirrels are busy collecting nuts for winter.
What I enjoy most in autumn is going hiking with my family. We often climb mountains to see the colourful leaves. I also love flying kites in the park when the wind is just right. It's so much fun!
My favourite festival in autumn is the Mid-Autumn Festival. On that day, my family gets together to enjoy mooncakes and admire the full moon. It makes me feel warm and happy.
I love autumn not only because of the beautiful views and fun activities, but also because it's a season of harvest and gratitude. It reminds me to be thankful for what I have.
What's your favourite season? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语话题写作题，要求以李华的身份给外国笔友Tom写邮件介绍最喜欢的季节，需结合图示给出的5个要点（季节的天气、动植物、喜欢做的事、节日/假期、补充感受），同时满足词数80左右、无真实信息、行文连贯等要求。解题时，先选定一个熟悉的季节（如秋天），再围绕图示要点依次展开描述，确保语言符合邮件语气，衔接自然。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇点明最喜欢的季节，引出主题；2. 描述季节的特征：天气（凉爽宜人）、动植物（树叶变色、松鼠备粮等）；3. 列举该季节喜欢的活动（和家人远足、放风筝）；4. 介绍对应节日（中秋节，家人团聚、吃月饼赏月）；5. 补充个人感受（温暖、感恩）；6. 调整语句使行文连贯，控制词数，完成邮件写作。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How's everything going? I'd like to tell you about my favourite season—autumn.
Autumn here is cool and nice. The sky is blue and clear. The wind is soft. Leaves become yellow and red. They fall like dancing butterflies. Birds fly to the south. Squirrels are busy getting nuts for winter.
I like hiking with my family best in autumn. We climb hills to see the colourful leaves. I also enjoy flying kites in the park. The wind is just right. It is so fun!
My favourite autumn festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. My family gets together on that day. We eat mooncakes and look at the full moon. It makes me feel warm and happy.
I love autumn because it is beautiful and fun. It is also a season of harvest. It teaches me to be thankful.
What's your favourite season? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、季节话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本题围绕“最喜欢的季节”话题，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求结合给定要点组织内容，语言通顺连贯，符合邮件格式，是初中英语常见写作题型，注重基础表达与要点落实。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语话题写作题，要求以李华的身份给外国笔友Tom写邮件介绍最喜欢的季节，需结合图示给出的5个要点（季节的天气、动植物、喜欢做的事、节日/假期、补充感受），同时满足词数80左右、无真实信息、行文连贯等要求。解题时，先选定一个熟悉的季节（如秋天），再围绕图示要点依次展开描述，确保语言符合邮件语气，衔接自然。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇点明最喜欢的季节，引出主题；2. 描述季节的特征：天气（凉爽宜人）、动植物（树叶变色、松鼠备粮等）；3. 列举该季节喜欢的活动（和家人远足、放风筝）；4. 介绍对应节日（中秋节，家人团聚、吃月饼赏月）；5. 补充个人感受（温暖、感恩）；6. 调整语句使行文连贯，控制词数，完成邮件写作。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How's everything going? I'd like to tell you about my favourite season—autumn.
Autumn here is cool and nice. The sky is blue and clear. The wind is soft. Leaves become yellow and red. They fall like dancing butterflies. Birds fly to the south. Squirrels are busy getting nuts for winter.
I like hiking with my family best in autumn. We climb hills to see the colourful leaves. I also enjoy flying kites in the park. The wind is just right. It is so fun!
My favourite autumn festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. My family gets together on that day. We eat mooncakes and look at the full moon. It makes me feel warm and happy.
I love autumn because it is beautiful and fun. It is also a season of harvest. It teaches me to be thankful.
What's your favourite season? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、季节话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本题围绕“最喜欢的季节”话题，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求结合给定要点组织内容，语言通顺连贯，符合邮件格式，是初中英语常见写作题型，注重基础表达与要点落实。
【难度系数】
0.5
