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Ⅷ.书面表达(共15分)
青少年应勤于反思,在自我反思中正确认识自己、不断完善自己。请以“Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better”为题,结合自己的成长历程,从学习、运动、劳动等方面,用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1. 结合实际,谈谈自我反思的重要性;
2. 列举自身存在的至少一个优点,并据此提出保持优点的方法;
3. 列举自身存在的至少一处不足,并据此提出改进不足的方法;
4. 发出自我反思的倡议。
写作要求:
1. 语言流畅,层次清晰,内容可以适当发挥;
2. 词数100左右,开头部分已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:self-reflection n. 自我反思 reflect on sth. 反思(某事)
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better.
青少年应勤于反思,在自我反思中正确认识自己、不断完善自己。请以“Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better”为题,结合自己的成长历程,从学习、运动、劳动等方面,用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1. 结合实际,谈谈自我反思的重要性;
2. 列举自身存在的至少一个优点,并据此提出保持优点的方法;
3. 列举自身存在的至少一处不足,并据此提出改进不足的方法;
4. 发出自我反思的倡议。
写作要求:
1. 语言流畅,层次清晰,内容可以适当发挥;
2. 词数100左右,开头部分已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:self-reflection n. 自我反思 reflect on sth. 反思(某事)
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better.
答案
Ⅷ. One possible version:
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. Through self-reflection, we can find out the advantages and disadvantages of what we did, and strive to do it perfectly the next time.
I like reading. It can not only increase my knowledge, but also open my eyes. If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading. But I sometimes read so inaccurately that some of the author's intentions cannot be understood. In the future I will read sentence by sentence to get rid of this bad habit.
So let's do some serious self-reflection together to make ourselves better.
【审题】本文是一篇材料作文。时态为“一般现在时”,人称为第一人称。题目中已给出4点要点,学生应注意不要遗漏,并注意要点之间的衔接,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
【写作步骤】第一步,谈谈自我反思的重要性;第二步,列举自身存在的至少一个优点,并据此提出保持优点的方法;列举自身存在的至少一处不足,并据此提出改进不足的方法;第三步,发出自我反思的倡议。
【短语积累】①strive to do 努力做
②develop a good habit of 培养一个……的好习惯
③get rid of 摆脱
【高分句型】①If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading.(if 引导的条件状语从句)
②But I sometimes read so inaccurately that some of the author's intentions cannot be understood.(so ... that 引导的结果状语从句)
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. Through self-reflection, we can find out the advantages and disadvantages of what we did, and strive to do it perfectly the next time.
I like reading. It can not only increase my knowledge, but also open my eyes. If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading. But I sometimes read so inaccurately that some of the author's intentions cannot be understood. In the future I will read sentence by sentence to get rid of this bad habit.
So let's do some serious self-reflection together to make ourselves better.
【审题】本文是一篇材料作文。时态为“一般现在时”,人称为第一人称。题目中已给出4点要点,学生应注意不要遗漏,并注意要点之间的衔接,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
【写作步骤】第一步,谈谈自我反思的重要性;第二步,列举自身存在的至少一个优点,并据此提出保持优点的方法;列举自身存在的至少一处不足,并据此提出改进不足的方法;第三步,发出自我反思的倡议。
【短语积累】①strive to do 努力做
②develop a good habit of 培养一个……的好习惯
③get rid of 摆脱
【高分句型】①If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading.(if 引导的条件状语从句)
②But I sometimes read so inaccurately that some of the author's intentions cannot be understood.(so ... that 引导的结果状语从句)
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需围绕“Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better”主题，从自我反思的重要性、自身优点及保持方法、自身不足及改进方法、发出反思倡议四方面写作，时态用一般现在时，第一人称，词数100左右，开头已给出。解题思路：第一步，承接开头阐述自我反思的重要性；第二步，列举自身优点并说明保持方法；第三步，列举自身不足并提出改进措施；第四步，发出自我反思倡议，确保要点齐全，语言流畅。
【解析】
按照写作步骤依次完成：1. 承接开头，说明自我反思能帮我们发现过往的优缺点，助力下次做得更好；2. 举例优点（喜欢阅读，可增知识开眼界），提出保持方法（坚持阅读，读后写心得提升兴趣）；3. 举例不足（有时阅读不准确，无法理解作者意图），提出改进方法（逐句阅读）；4. 发出倡议，号召大家一起反思。运用if条件句、so...that结果状语从句等句型，保证语言流畅，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. Through self-reflection, we can find out the advantages and disadvantages of what we did, and strive to do it perfectly the next time.
I like reading. It can not only increase my knowledge, but also open my eyes. If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading. But I sometimes read so inaccurately that some of the author's intentions cannot be understood. In the future I will read sentence by sentence to get rid of this bad habit.
So let's do some serious self-reflection together to make ourselves better.
【知识点】英语书面表达、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，要点齐全，覆盖了反思重要性、自身优缺点及对应方法、倡议等要求；运用了if条件状语从句、so...that结果状语从句等高分句型，语言流畅自然，符合初中英语写作要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
首先明确题目要求：需围绕“Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better”主题，从自我反思的重要性、自身优点及保持方法、自身不足及改进方法、发出反思倡议四方面写作，时态用一般现在时，第一人称，词数100左右，开头已给出。解题思路：第一步，承接开头阐述自我反思的重要性；第二步，列举自身优点并说明保持方法；第三步，列举自身不足并提出改进措施；第四步，发出自我反思倡议，确保要点齐全，语言流畅。
【解析】
按照写作步骤依次完成：1. 承接开头，说明自我反思能帮我们发现过往的优缺点，助力下次做得更好；2. 举例优点（喜欢阅读，可增知识开眼界），提出保持方法（坚持阅读，读后写心得提升兴趣）；3. 举例不足（有时阅读不准确，无法理解作者意图），提出改进方法（逐句阅读）；4. 发出倡议，号召大家一起反思。运用if条件句、so...that结果状语从句等句型，保证语言流畅，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. Through self-reflection, we can find out the advantages and disadvantages of what we did, and strive to do it perfectly the next time.
I like reading. It can not only increase my knowledge, but also open my eyes. If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading. But I sometimes read so inaccurately that some of the author's intentions cannot be understood. In the future I will read sentence by sentence to get rid of this bad habit.
So let's do some serious self-reflection together to make ourselves better.
【知识点】英语书面表达、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，要点齐全，覆盖了反思重要性、自身优缺点及对应方法、倡议等要求；运用了if条件状语从句、so...that结果状语从句等高分句型，语言流畅自然，符合初中英语写作要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
