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四、书面表达(真题·宁波余姚)
42.请你描述曾经度过的一个难忘的暑假,内容如下:
要求:(1)包含提示,内容充实,可适当发挥;(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;(3)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday.
42.请你描述曾经度过的一个难忘的暑假,内容如下:
要求:(1)包含提示,内容充实,可适当发挥;(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;(3)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday.
First, I read more books. I also wrote down interesting things that happened in my life, like funny stories with my friends or special moments with my family. Besides, I did lots of outdoor activities to stay healthy and active. I enjoyed going for bike rides with my dad and playing soccer with my friends. Moreover, I helped my parents with housework more often. I did the dishes after meals, swept the floor, and even tried to cook simple meals. It's important to learn these skills.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
答案
42. One possible version:
My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday. First, I read more books. I also wrote down interesting things that happened in my life, like funny stories with my friends or special moments with my family. Besides, I did lots of outdoor activities to stay healthy and active. I enjoyed going for bike rides with my dad and playing soccer with my friends. Moreover, I helped my parents with housework more often. I did the dishes after meals, swept the floor, and even tried to cook simple meals. It's important to learn these skills.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
(147 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本题要求描述曾经一个难忘的暑假。描述暑假活动和感受，用一般过去时和一般现在时。用第一人称。
【提纲演示】
开门见山 … an unforgettable holiday.
分享经历 read books; write down funny things
help parents do some housework
do outside activities
go on holiday
情绪体验 know a lot
be helpful
keep healthy
experience a different life
My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday. First, I read more books. I also wrote down interesting things that happened in my life, like funny stories with my friends or special moments with my family. Besides, I did lots of outdoor activities to stay healthy and active. I enjoyed going for bike rides with my dad and playing soccer with my friends. Moreover, I helped my parents with housework more often. I did the dishes after meals, swept the floor, and even tried to cook simple meals. It's important to learn these skills.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
(147 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本题要求描述曾经一个难忘的暑假。描述暑假活动和感受，用一般过去时和一般现在时。用第一人称。
【提纲演示】
开门见山 … an unforgettable holiday.
分享经历 read books; write down funny things
help parents do some housework
do outside activities
go on holiday
情绪体验 know a lot
be helpful
keep healthy
experience a different life
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求描述难忘的暑假，需结合表格中的活动与对应感受，采用第一人称、以一般过去时为主写作。解题思路：先沿用已给开头点明主题，再依次展开表格中的活动（读书记录趣事、帮做家务、户外活动、度假），每个活动补充合理细节并对应其感受，最后总结整体收获，确保内容充实、语句通顺、语法正确，符合要求。
【解析】按照写作要求，结合表格提示组织语言如下：
My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday. First, I read more books. I also wrote down interesting things that happened in my life, like funny stories with my friends or special moments with my family. Besides, I did lots of outdoor activities to stay healthy and active. I enjoyed going for bike rides with my dad and playing soccer with my friends. Moreover, I helped my parents with housework more often. I did the dishes after meals, swept the floor, and even tried to cook simple meals. It's important to learn these skills.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
【答案】My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday. First, I read more books. I also wrote down interesting things that happened in my life, like funny stories with my friends or special moments with my family. Besides, I did lots of outdoor activities to stay healthy and active. I enjoyed going for bike rides with my dad and playing soccer with my friends. Moreover, I helped my parents with housework more often. I did the dishes after meals, swept the floor, and even tried to cook simple meals. It's important to learn these skills.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
【知识点】英语书面表达；一般过去时；第一人称写作
【点评】本题结合生活实际，考查学生运用英语描述经历、表达感受的能力，需紧扣表格提示整合内容，补充细节使文章充实，难度适中，是英语写作的常规练习题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照写作要求，结合表格提示组织语言如下：
My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday. First, I read more books. I also wrote down interesting things that happened in my life, like funny stories with my friends or special moments with my family. Besides, I did lots of outdoor activities to stay healthy and active. I enjoyed going for bike rides with my dad and playing soccer with my friends. Moreover, I helped my parents with housework more often. I did the dishes after meals, swept the floor, and even tried to cook simple meals. It's important to learn these skills.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
【答案】My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday. First, I read more books. I also wrote down interesting things that happened in my life, like funny stories with my friends or special moments with my family. Besides, I did lots of outdoor activities to stay healthy and active. I enjoyed going for bike rides with my dad and playing soccer with my friends. Moreover, I helped my parents with housework more often. I did the dishes after meals, swept the floor, and even tried to cook simple meals. It's important to learn these skills.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
【知识点】英语书面表达；一般过去时；第一人称写作
【点评】本题结合生活实际，考查学生运用英语描述经历、表达感受的能力，需紧扣表格提示整合内容，补充细节使文章充实，难度适中，是英语写作的常规练习题型。
【难度系数】0.5
