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六、书面表达
49. 假如你是李华,这周日你约了好友Linda去一座新公园游玩。你在预约门票时看到了公园的一些规定。请你根据下列提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,将这些规定告知Linda。
注意:(1)邮件须包含所给提示信息,可适当发挥；
(2)邮件中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息；
(3)词数80左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Linda,
I’m excited about this Sunday.
We all need to follow them. See you this Sunday. I can’t wait! Please write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
49. 假如你是李华,这周日你约了好友Linda去一座新公园游玩。你在预约门票时看到了公园的一些规定。请你根据下列提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,将这些规定告知Linda。
注意:(1)邮件须包含所给提示信息,可适当发挥；
(2)邮件中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息；
(3)词数80左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Linda,
I’m excited about this Sunday.
We all need to follow them. See you this Sunday. I can’t wait! Please write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
49. One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'm excited about this Sunday. There are some rules in the park. Let me tell you about them.
First, the park is open from 6:00 a.m. to 10:00 p.m. Let's go to the park at 10:00 this Sunday morning. Second, don't go fishing in the park. It's not good for the environment. Third, don't walk dogs in the park. We need to keep the park clean. Then, we can't ride our bikes in the park. Finally, don't swim in the lake. It will be dangerous. Those are the park rules.
We all need to follow them. See you this Sunday. I can't wait! Please write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Linda,
I'm excited about this Sunday. There are some rules in the park. Let me tell you about them.
First, the park is open from 6:00 a.m. to 10:00 p.m. Let's go to the park at 10:00 this Sunday morning. Second, don't go fishing in the park. It's not good for the environment. Third, don't walk dogs in the park. We need to keep the park clean. Then, we can't ride our bikes in the park. Finally, don't swim in the lake. It will be dangerous. Those are the park rules.
We all need to follow them. See you this Sunday. I can't wait! Please write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达题，要求以李华的身份给好友Linda写邮件，告知新公园的规定。解题思路：首先承接给定的邮件开头，引出公园有规定要说明；接着提取图片中的关键信息：公园开放时间为早上6点到晚上10点，禁止钓鱼、遛狗、骑车、游泳这四项活动；然后用通顺的英语将这些信息连贯组织，符合好友间交流的语气，控制词数；最后衔接给定的结尾，提醒遵守规定。
【解析】
Dear Linda,
I'm excited about this Sunday. There are some rules in the new park we're going to visit. Let me tell you about them.
First, the park is open from 6:00 a.m. to 10:00 p.m. Let's go there at 10:00 this Sunday morning. Second, don't go fishing in the park—it's bad for the environment. Third, we can't walk dogs here to keep the park clean. Also, riding bikes is not allowed, and finally, don't swim in the lake because it's dangerous. Those are all the rules.
We all need to follow them. See you this Sunday. I can't wait! Please write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'm excited about this Sunday. There are some rules in the park. Let me tell you about them.
First, the park is open from 6:00 a.m. to 10:00 p.m. Let's go to the park at 10:00 this Sunday morning. Second, don't go fishing in the park. It's not good for the environment. Third, don't walk dogs in the park. We need to keep the park clean. Then, we can't ride our bikes in the park. Finally, don't swim in the lake. It will be dangerous. Those are the park rules.
We all need to follow them. See you this Sunday. I can't wait! Please write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达、公园规则相关词汇、时间表达
【点评】
该书面表达紧扣图片提示的所有信息点，结构清晰，语气自然亲切，符合好友间交流的语境，用词准确简洁，满足词数要求，是符合初中英语写作标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语书面表达题，要求以李华的身份给好友Linda写邮件，告知新公园的规定。解题思路：首先承接给定的邮件开头，引出公园有规定要说明；接着提取图片中的关键信息：公园开放时间为早上6点到晚上10点，禁止钓鱼、遛狗、骑车、游泳这四项活动；然后用通顺的英语将这些信息连贯组织，符合好友间交流的语气，控制词数；最后衔接给定的结尾，提醒遵守规定。
【解析】
Dear Linda,
I'm excited about this Sunday. There are some rules in the new park we're going to visit. Let me tell you about them.
First, the park is open from 6:00 a.m. to 10:00 p.m. Let's go there at 10:00 this Sunday morning. Second, don't go fishing in the park—it's bad for the environment. Third, we can't walk dogs here to keep the park clean. Also, riding bikes is not allowed, and finally, don't swim in the lake because it's dangerous. Those are all the rules.
We all need to follow them. See you this Sunday. I can't wait! Please write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'm excited about this Sunday. There are some rules in the park. Let me tell you about them.
First, the park is open from 6:00 a.m. to 10:00 p.m. Let's go to the park at 10:00 this Sunday morning. Second, don't go fishing in the park. It's not good for the environment. Third, don't walk dogs in the park. We need to keep the park clean. Then, we can't ride our bikes in the park. Finally, don't swim in the lake. It will be dangerous. Those are the park rules.
We all need to follow them. See you this Sunday. I can't wait! Please write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达、公园规则相关词汇、时间表达
【点评】
该书面表达紧扣图片提示的所有信息点，结构清晰，语气自然亲切，符合好友间交流的语境，用词准确简洁，满足词数要求，是符合初中英语写作标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
