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话题概述
本单元的写作主题为“探索自然”，要求学生根据所学的词汇和句型写一篇和自然有关的书面表达。通常涉及的细分话题有：①介绍某种植物，包括它的生长地和外形特征等；②介绍某种动物，包括它的外形特征和生活习性等；③介绍某个地点，包括它的气候特点以及当地的动物或植物等；④呼吁大家共同保护自然，解释原因以及给出具体的措施等。根据细分话题的内容，该话题下常见的体裁有记叙文、说明文和应用文（如书信、电子邮件或演讲稿等）。
写作实例
在每个人心中，家乡总是最美丽的地方。你的家乡在哪里呢？请你根据下面的提示内容，用英语写一篇文章，介绍一下你的家乡。
要求：1.必须包含上述提示内容，可适当发挥；2.不少于80词。
_______
审题指导
1.体裁：说明文 2.时态：以一般现在时为主 3.人称：以第三人称为主
4.必备词汇：①in the south of 在……的南部 ②be famous for... 因……而闻名 ③all year round 一年到头 ④in winter 在冬季 ⑤for example 比如；例如 ⑥natural view 自然景色 ⑦water sports 水上运动 ⑧be proud to do sth. 为做某事而自豪
谋篇布局
介绍我的家乡
第一段：引出话题
My hometown is_______.
Let me tell you more about my hometown.
第二段：详细介绍家乡
_______ is a city_______.
It is famous for _______.
When you visit _______, you will _______.
You can see a lot of plants and animals here. For example, _______.
第三段：表达对家乡的感情
This is my hometown. In my heart, it's _______. I'm proud to say _______.
佳作剖析
教材原文P68 But this area is also full of the most amazing colours in nature. P69 In my heart, it's better than any other place. P69 I'm proud to say that I'm from one of the most beautiful places in the world.
优秀范文My hometown is Sanya. ① Let me tell you more about my hometown. Sanya is a city in the south of Hainan Island. ② It is famous for its enjoyable weather. When you visit Sanya, ③ you will find it is full of the most amazing colours in nature. You can see a lot of plants and animals here. For example, there are many coconut trees everywhere. ④ You can also do some water sports like diving and swimming. This is my hometown. In my heart, it's better than any other place. I'm proud to say that I'm from one of the most beautiful places in the world. ⑤
亮点评析①开篇点题，点明我的家乡是三亚。 ②该句准确地描述了三亚的位置。 ③时间状语从句和宾语从句的使用，使本文句式丰富。 ④用 for example 引出具体的例子，使内容更加充实，也更有说服力。 ⑤
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①save water 节约用水 ②make a difference 产生影响 ③have a long history 拥有悠久的历史 ④play an important part in... 在某方面发挥重要作用 ⑤be proud of... 因……感到自豪 ⑥be different from... 和……不同 ⑦a kind of 一种 ⑧all over the world 全世界 ⑨I think we should do something to save water. 我觉得我们应该做一些事情来节约用水。 ⑩When they are in trouble, we'd better help them. 当它们处于困境中，我们最好帮助它们。
本单元的写作主题为“探索自然”，要求学生根据所学的词汇和句型写一篇和自然有关的书面表达。通常涉及的细分话题有：①介绍某种植物，包括它的生长地和外形特征等；②介绍某种动物，包括它的外形特征和生活习性等；③介绍某个地点，包括它的气候特点以及当地的动物或植物等；④呼吁大家共同保护自然，解释原因以及给出具体的措施等。根据细分话题的内容，该话题下常见的体裁有记叙文、说明文和应用文（如书信、电子邮件或演讲稿等）。
写作实例
在每个人心中，家乡总是最美丽的地方。你的家乡在哪里呢？请你根据下面的提示内容，用英语写一篇文章，介绍一下你的家乡。
要求：1.必须包含上述提示内容，可适当发挥；2.不少于80词。
_______
审题指导
1.体裁：说明文 2.时态：以一般现在时为主 3.人称：以第三人称为主
4.必备词汇：①in the south of 在……的南部 ②be famous for... 因……而闻名 ③all year round 一年到头 ④in winter 在冬季 ⑤for example 比如；例如 ⑥natural view 自然景色 ⑦water sports 水上运动 ⑧be proud to do sth. 为做某事而自豪
谋篇布局
介绍我的家乡
第一段：引出话题
My hometown is_______.
Let me tell you more about my hometown.
第二段：详细介绍家乡
_______ is a city_______.
It is famous for _______.
When you visit _______, you will _______.
You can see a lot of plants and animals here. For example, _______.
第三段：表达对家乡的感情
This is my hometown. In my heart, it's _______. I'm proud to say _______.
佳作剖析
教材原文P68 But this area is also full of the most amazing colours in nature. P69 In my heart, it's better than any other place. P69 I'm proud to say that I'm from one of the most beautiful places in the world.
优秀范文My hometown is Sanya. ① Let me tell you more about my hometown. Sanya is a city in the south of Hainan Island. ② It is famous for its enjoyable weather. When you visit Sanya, ③ you will find it is full of the most amazing colours in nature. You can see a lot of plants and animals here. For example, there are many coconut trees everywhere. ④ You can also do some water sports like diving and swimming. This is my hometown. In my heart, it's better than any other place. I'm proud to say that I'm from one of the most beautiful places in the world. ⑤
亮点评析①开篇点题，点明我的家乡是三亚。 ②该句准确地描述了三亚的位置。 ③时间状语从句和宾语从句的使用，使本文句式丰富。 ④用 for example 引出具体的例子，使内容更加充实，也更有说服力。 ⑤
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①save water 节约用水 ②make a difference 产生影响 ③have a long history 拥有悠久的历史 ④play an important part in... 在某方面发挥重要作用 ⑤be proud of... 因……感到自豪 ⑥be different from... 和……不同 ⑦a kind of 一种 ⑧all over the world 全世界 ⑨I think we should do something to save water. 我觉得我们应该做一些事情来节约用水。 ⑩When they are in trouble, we'd better help them. 当它们处于困境中，我们最好帮助它们。
答案
My hometown is Sanya.${}°led{1}$ Let me tell
you more about my hometown.
Sanya is a city in the south of Hainan
Island.${}°led{2}$ It is famous for its enjoyable weather.
When you visit Sanya,${}°led{3}$ you will find it is
full of the most amazing colours in nature.
You can see a lot of plants and animals here.
For example, there are many coconut trees
everywhere.${}°led{4}$ You can also do some water
sports like diving and swimming.
This is my hometown. In my heart, it's
better than any other place. I'm proud to say
that I'm from one of the most beautiful places
in the world.${}°led{3}$
you more about my hometown.
Sanya is a city in the south of Hainan
Island.${}°led{2}$ It is famous for its enjoyable weather.
When you visit Sanya,${}°led{3}$ you will find it is
full of the most amazing colours in nature.
You can see a lot of plants and animals here.
For example, there are many coconut trees
everywhere.${}°led{4}$ You can also do some water
sports like diving and swimming.
This is my hometown. In my heart, it's
better than any other place. I'm proud to say
that I'm from one of the most beautiful places
in the world.${}°led{3}$
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇介绍家乡的英语说明文，需遵循“引出话题—详细介绍—表达情感”的结构。写作时需注意：1. 开篇明确家乡的具体地点，点题引出下文；2. 围绕家乡的位置、特色（如气候、自然景观）、动植物、特色活动等展开，合理运用给定词汇（如in the south of、be famous for等）；3. 以一般现在时为主，用第三人称介绍家乡；4. 结尾表达对家乡的喜爱与自豪，满足不少于80词的要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇点题：直接点明家乡是三亚，引出后续介绍；
2. 介绍位置：用“in the south of Hainan Island”准确说明三亚的地理位置；
3. 介绍特色：说明三亚因宜人的天气闻名，通过时间状语从句“When you visit Sanya”引出自然景色的描述，丰富句式；
4. 补充内容：用for example列举椰子树，补充水上运动（潜水、游泳），使内容充实；
5. 结尾抒情：用“In my heart, it's better than any other place”和“I'm proud to say...”表达对家乡的自豪与喜爱，符合要求。
【答案】
My hometown is Sanya. Let me tell you more about my hometown. Sanya is a city in the south of Hainan Island. It is famous for its enjoyable weather. When you visit Sanya, you will find it is full of the most amazing colours in nature. You can see a lot of plants and animals here. For example, there are many coconut trees everywhere. You can also do some water sports like diving and swimming. This is my hometown. In my heart, it's better than any other place. I'm proud to say that I'm from one of the most beautiful places in the world.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、家乡话题词汇运用、一般现在时
【点评】
本文结构清晰，符合“引出—介绍—抒情”的写作逻辑；内容紧扣要求，涵盖家乡的位置、特色、动植物及活动，运用了给定的核心词汇与句型，句式多样，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，是一篇符合要求的优秀英语作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一篇介绍家乡的英语说明文，需遵循“引出话题—详细介绍—表达情感”的结构。写作时需注意：1. 开篇明确家乡的具体地点，点题引出下文；2. 围绕家乡的位置、特色（如气候、自然景观）、动植物、特色活动等展开，合理运用给定词汇（如in the south of、be famous for等）；3. 以一般现在时为主，用第三人称介绍家乡；4. 结尾表达对家乡的喜爱与自豪，满足不少于80词的要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇点题：直接点明家乡是三亚，引出后续介绍；
2. 介绍位置：用“in the south of Hainan Island”准确说明三亚的地理位置；
3. 介绍特色：说明三亚因宜人的天气闻名，通过时间状语从句“When you visit Sanya”引出自然景色的描述，丰富句式；
4. 补充内容：用for example列举椰子树，补充水上运动（潜水、游泳），使内容充实；
5. 结尾抒情：用“In my heart, it's better than any other place”和“I'm proud to say...”表达对家乡的自豪与喜爱，符合要求。
【答案】
My hometown is Sanya. Let me tell you more about my hometown. Sanya is a city in the south of Hainan Island. It is famous for its enjoyable weather. When you visit Sanya, you will find it is full of the most amazing colours in nature. You can see a lot of plants and animals here. For example, there are many coconut trees everywhere. You can also do some water sports like diving and swimming. This is my hometown. In my heart, it's better than any other place. I'm proud to say that I'm from one of the most beautiful places in the world.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、家乡话题词汇运用、一般现在时
【点评】
本文结构清晰，符合“引出—介绍—抒情”的写作逻辑；内容紧扣要求，涵盖家乡的位置、特色、动植物及活动，运用了给定的核心词汇与句型，句式多样，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，是一篇符合要求的优秀英语作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
