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答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D30
假设你是王浩宇，你们班的交换生 Tim 想在暑假参观一处自然奇观。请你根据下列内容提示，用英语写一封电子邮件，向他推荐云南的一处峡谷——怒江大峡谷。
内容提示：◆长度：约 600 千米； ◆深度：约 3.5 千米（最深处）； ◆美誉：自然景观博览园 Natural Landscape Exposition Park； ◆最佳旅游时间：春、冬。
注意：词数为 80 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tim,
I'm writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—Nujiang Grand Canyon._______
Yours,
Wang Haoyu
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D30
假设你是王浩宇，你们班的交换生 Tim 想在暑假参观一处自然奇观。请你根据下列内容提示，用英语写一封电子邮件，向他推荐云南的一处峡谷——怒江大峡谷。
内容提示：◆长度：约 600 千米； ◆深度：约 3.5 千米（最深处）； ◆美誉：自然景观博览园 Natural Landscape Exposition Park； ◆最佳旅游时间：春、冬。
注意：词数为 80 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tim,
I'm writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—Nujiang Grand Canyon._______
Yours,
Wang Haoyu
答案
Unit 5 主题写作专项
基础版范文
Dear Tim,
I'm writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—Nujiang Grand Canyon.
The canyon is in Yunnan, China. It's about 600 kilometres long. And the deepest place of the canyon reaches around 3.5 kilometres.
Many nature lovers want to visit it because it is home to thousands of plants. They call it the "Natural Landscape Exposition Park". You can visit it at any time, but the best time to visit it is spring and winter.
I'm sure you will have a great time there.
Yours,
Wang Haoyu
进阶版范文
Dear Tim,
I'm writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—Nujiang Grand Canyon.
The canyon is in Yunnan, a place in the southwest of China. It's about 600 kilometres long. And it's said that the deepest place of the canyon reaches around 3.5 kilometres. You will be surprised at how deep it is.
Many nature lovers want to visit it because it is home to thousands of plants. It is called the "Natural Landscape Exposition Park". You can visit it at any time, but the best time to visit it is spring and winter because of the flowers in full bloom and the view of snow at the top of the mountain.
I'm sure you will have a great time there.
Yours,
Wang Haoyu
基础版范文
Dear Tim,
I'm writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—Nujiang Grand Canyon.
The canyon is in Yunnan, China. It's about 600 kilometres long. And the deepest place of the canyon reaches around 3.5 kilometres.
Many nature lovers want to visit it because it is home to thousands of plants. They call it the "Natural Landscape Exposition Park". You can visit it at any time, but the best time to visit it is spring and winter.
I'm sure you will have a great time there.
Yours,
Wang Haoyu
进阶版范文
Dear Tim,
I'm writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—Nujiang Grand Canyon.
The canyon is in Yunnan, a place in the southwest of China. It's about 600 kilometres long. And it's said that the deepest place of the canyon reaches around 3.5 kilometres. You will be surprised at how deep it is.
Many nature lovers want to visit it because it is home to thousands of plants. It is called the "Natural Landscape Exposition Park". You can visit it at any time, but the best time to visit it is spring and winter because of the flowers in full bloom and the view of snow at the top of the mountain.
I'm sure you will have a great time there.
Yours,
Wang Haoyu
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是给交换生Tim写一封电子邮件，推荐云南的怒江大峡谷，需涵盖所有提示要点：峡谷的位置、长度、最深处、美誉、最佳旅游时间，同时控制词数在80左右，语言简洁符合初中英语水平。写作思路：1. 开头已给出，直接衔接正文；2. 正文依次介绍峡谷基本信息（长度、深度）、美誉及由来、最佳旅游时间；3. 结尾表达对Tim的祝愿，符合邮件格式要求。
【解析】
1. 正文补充峡谷位置：The canyon is in Yunnan, China. 接着说明长度和深度：It's about 600 kilometres long. And the deepest place of the canyon reaches around 3.5 kilometres. 2. 说明美誉：因有大量植物被称为“Natural Landscape Exposition Park”：Many nature lovers want to visit it because it is home to thousands of plants. They call it the "Natural Landscape Exposition Park". 3. 点明最佳旅游时间：You can visit it at any time, but the best time to visit it is spring and winter. 4. 结尾表达祝愿：I'm sure you will have a great time there. 既覆盖所有要点，又符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Tim,
I'm writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—Nujiang Grand Canyon.
The canyon is in Yunnan, China. It's about 600 kilometres long. And the deepest place of the canyon reaches around 3.5 kilometres.
Many nature lovers want to visit it because it is home to thousands of plants. They call it the "Natural Landscape Exposition Park". You can visit it at any time, but the best time to visit it is spring and winter.
I'm sure you will have a great time there.
Yours,
Wang Haoyu
【知识点】
英语电子邮件写作、自然话题英语写作、英语信息整合
【点评】
本篇写作紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合邮件格式，适合初中学生的写作训练，能有效考察学生运用英语进行信息表达的能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作任务是给交换生Tim写一封电子邮件，推荐云南的怒江大峡谷，需涵盖所有提示要点：峡谷的位置、长度、最深处、美誉、最佳旅游时间，同时控制词数在80左右，语言简洁符合初中英语水平。写作思路：1. 开头已给出，直接衔接正文；2. 正文依次介绍峡谷基本信息（长度、深度）、美誉及由来、最佳旅游时间；3. 结尾表达对Tim的祝愿，符合邮件格式要求。
【解析】
1. 正文补充峡谷位置：The canyon is in Yunnan, China. 接着说明长度和深度：It's about 600 kilometres long. And the deepest place of the canyon reaches around 3.5 kilometres. 2. 说明美誉：因有大量植物被称为“Natural Landscape Exposition Park”：Many nature lovers want to visit it because it is home to thousands of plants. They call it the "Natural Landscape Exposition Park". 3. 点明最佳旅游时间：You can visit it at any time, but the best time to visit it is spring and winter. 4. 结尾表达祝愿：I'm sure you will have a great time there. 既覆盖所有要点，又符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Tim,
I'm writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—Nujiang Grand Canyon.
The canyon is in Yunnan, China. It's about 600 kilometres long. And the deepest place of the canyon reaches around 3.5 kilometres.
Many nature lovers want to visit it because it is home to thousands of plants. They call it the "Natural Landscape Exposition Park". You can visit it at any time, but the best time to visit it is spring and winter.
I'm sure you will have a great time there.
Yours,
Wang Haoyu
【知识点】
英语电子邮件写作、自然话题英语写作、英语信息整合
【点评】
本篇写作紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合邮件格式，适合初中学生的写作训练，能有效考察学生运用英语进行信息表达的能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
