(五)
科技的发展正不断地改变我们的学习方式，有人喜欢传统的教室教学方式(traditional learning in a classroom)，有人喜欢现代化的在线教学(modern learning on the Internet)。请先将题目“I prefer ”补充完整，然后谈谈你喜欢这种学习方式的理由。以下内容仅供参考。

• face-to-face communication
• a plan made by oneself
要求：
1. 补全作文标题；词数100左右。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
I prefer
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing.

(五) I prefer traditional learning in a classroom
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. But I still prefer
traditional learning in a classroom.
First, there is a fixed timetable. A study plan is often made by our school, so we don't need to think
about how to arrange when we learn different subjects. Second, we can have face-to-face communication
with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colourful activities in class. In this way, I can learn
new knowledge happily. What's more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team
spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others.
That is why I prefer the traditional way of learning in a classroom.

【分析】
这是一篇半命题观点类英语写作题，解题时首先第一步要从题干给出的两种学习方式里选定一个方向，把标题补充完整；第二步承接题干给出的开头句，直接点明自己的选择立场；第三步结合表格给出的对应优势要点，分条理阐述自己偏好该学习方式的理由，还可以适当补充符合逻辑的合理细节让内容更充实；最后收尾总结再次点题，全程注意控制总词数在100左右，不要出现个人姓名、学校等隐私信息，行文搭配合适的连接词让逻辑更通顺。
【解析】
1. 补全标题：选定传统课堂学习的写作方向，将标题补充为I prefer traditional learning in a classroom。
2. 开篇点题：承接给出的开头句，明确表达自己仍然更偏好传统教室学习的立场。
3. 分点论述理由：
① 首先说明传统学习有周密规划的固定课表，学校统一安排学习计划，学生不需要自行费心规划不同学科的学习时间，学习安排更科学合理；
② 其次说明线下课堂可以和老师、同学实现面对面交流，互动答疑更直接高效；
③ 最后补充线下课堂有丰富多样的课堂活动，能让学生在愉快的氛围里学习知识，还可以培养团队意识，学会和他人相处。
4. 结尾收尾：再次总结点明这就是自己偏好传统课堂学习的原因，调整语句让全文连贯流畅，核查词数符合要求，确认没有泄露个人隐私信息。
【答案】
I prefer traditional learning in a classroom
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. But I still prefer traditional learning in a classroom.
First, there is a fixed timetable. A study plan is often made by our school, so we don't need to think about how to arrange when we learn different subjects. Second, we can have face-to-face communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colourful activities in class. In this way, I can learn new knowledge happily. What's more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others.
That is why I prefer the traditional way of learning in a classroom.
【知识点】
英语提纲作文写作，逻辑连接词使用，学习话题词汇运用
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段常见的观点表达类写作题，题干给出了清晰的参考要点，既降低了写作门槛，也给学生留出了合理的自主拓展空间，引导学生结合生活实际表达对不同学习模式的看法，学生只要覆盖全部给定要点、行文通顺符合词数要求就可以拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7

(六)
目前，一些中小学生的精神压力仍然不小，这一现象引起了学校和家长的高度关注。为了减轻学生的压力，学校英文报社向在校学生征求意见。假如你是李华，请以“How to reduce our stress”为题，根据以下提纲用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿。要点如下：

要求：
1. 词数100左右。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
How to reduce our stress
Nowadays, some students still have much stress.

(六) How to reduce our stress
Nowadays, some students still have much stress. It's mainly from our school and our family. At school,
too much homework is given so that students have to stay up late doing it. Meanwhile, we have to face the
fierce competition from our classmates. Also, our parents expect us to work hard to get good grades.
If you ask me how to reduce our stress, here is the advice. It's necessary for us to have less homework
and not to be judged only by grades. We should be allowed to do some outdoor activities. Our parents
should spend more time communicating with us and give us plenty of support. All in all, our teachers and
parents are supposed to care more about our mental health.

【分析】
拿到这篇英语投稿类写作题，首先先明确核心要求：词数100左右，内容要覆盖两大板块，先说明精神压力的产生原因，再给出减压的相关建议，开头已经给出无需自行创作。首先搭建行文逻辑：第一部分承接开头，总述压力的来源分为学校、家庭两个维度，先把题干给出的学业负担重、家长期望值高两个核心要点落实，再补充符合现实的合理细节比如同学间的学业竞争，让内容更真实饱满。第二部分自然过渡到减压方法，先把题干给出的适度看待成绩、开展户外活动两个要点写清楚，再补充合理的延伸建议比如多和家人沟通、关注心理健康，最后加简短收尾让文章完整。写作时注意用合适的连接词让行文流畅，不要出现个人隐私相关信息，控制总词数符合要求即可。
【解析】
本题的规范写作步骤如下：
1. 搭建行文框架：全文分为三个层次，第一层承接给定开头，介绍学生压力的各类成因；第二层针对性给出对应的减压建议；第三层简短收尾升华主题。
2. 填充要点内容：
① 成因板块：先点明压力主要来自学校和家庭，依次说明：学业上作业量过大导致学生需要熬夜完成，同时同学间存在激烈的学业竞争，此外家长普遍对学生的成绩抱有较高期待，既覆盖题干给出的两个核心原因，补充的竞争原因也符合现实逻辑。
② 建议板块：依次说明：不要仅以成绩评判学生，要合理控制作业量，多安排户外活动，家长要多和学生沟通给予支持，最后点明老师和家长要更多关注学生的心理健康，覆盖题干给出的两个核心建议，补充内容也贴合主题。
3. 润色调整：用过渡连接词串联语句，调整语句通顺度，核查没有泄露个人信息，词数控制在要求范围内，完成全文。
【答案】
How to reduce our stress
Nowadays, some students still have much stress. It's mainly from our school and our family. At school,too much homework is given so that students have to stay up late doing it. Meanwhile, we have to face the fierce competition from our classmates. Also, our parents expect us to work hard to get good grades.
If you ask me how to reduce our stress, here is the advice. It's necessary for us to have less homework and not to be judged only by grades. We should be allowed to do some outdoor activities. Our parents should spend more time communicating with us and give us plenty of support. All in all, our teachers and parents are supposed to care more about our mental health.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作，要点类作文写作，过渡连词运用
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部核心要点，补充的内容贴合中小学生的真实生活场景，逻辑层次清晰，衔接自然流畅，用词准确地道，词数符合题目100左右的要求，完全符合英文报社投稿的写作要求，学生写作时注意不要遗漏核心要点，合理补充符合逻辑的细节，就能写出合格的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7