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教育部近日印发通知，要求控制中小学生书面作业总量，合理布置不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以“My creative English homework”为题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请写一篇征文，讲述自身经历，提出合理建议。要点如下：
2. 有助于记忆
3. ……|
要求：
1. 词数100左右。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
My creative English homework
Doing English homework helps us to practise and use what we've learned in class.
I hope we'll have more creative English homework in the future.
教育部近日印发通知，要求控制中小学生书面作业总量，合理布置不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以“My creative English homework”为题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请写一篇征文，讲述自身经历，提出合理建议。要点如下：
2. 有助于记忆
3. ……|
要求：
1. 词数100左右。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
My creative English homework
Doing English homework helps us to practise and use what we've learned in class.
Doing creative
homework makes us more interested in English.
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring
Festival in it. It not only helped me improve my writing skills but also provided a good chance to spread
Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it's also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding
of the lessons we have taken. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing.
In this way, both our English and our hobbies can develop.
homework makes us more interested in English.
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring
Festival in it. It not only helped me improve my writing skills but also provided a good chance to spread
Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it's also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding
of the lessons we have taken. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing.
In this way, both our English and our hobbies can develop.
I hope we'll have more creative English homework in the future.
答案
(七) My creative English homework
Doing English homework helps us to practise and use what we've learned in class. Doing creative
homework makes us more interested in English.
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring
Festival in it. It not only helped me improve my writing skills but also provided a good chance to spread
Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it's also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding
of the lessons we have taken. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing.
In this way, both our English and our hobbies can develop.
I hope we'll have more creative English homework in the future.
Doing English homework helps us to practise and use what we've learned in class. Doing creative
homework makes us more interested in English.
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring
Festival in it. It not only helped me improve my writing skills but also provided a good chance to spread
Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it's also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding
of the lessons we have taken. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing.
In this way, both our English and our hobbies can develop.
I hope we'll have more creative English homework in the future.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题，先明确写作任务是主题为"My creative English homework"的英语征文，先梳理题干给出的所有要点：第一部分需要叙述自己做过的最有创意的英语作业，对应内容是给外国人写信介绍春节，要写出两点收获：提升写作技巧、宣扬中国文化；第二部分要提出更多创意英语作业的建议，表格给出第一个建议是画思维导图，对应理由是更好理解学习内容、有助于记忆，还需要补充一个合理的创意作业形式以及对应的第三条理由。接下来行文逻辑可以按照「承接开头引入创意作业的意义→讲述自身完成创意作业的经历和收获→提出自己的创意作业建议并说明理由」的顺序展开，注意控制词数在100左右，不要透露个人隐私信息，保证行文流畅、要点全覆盖即可。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开头句，补充过渡句点明创意作业能提升大家对英语的兴趣，自然引出下文内容。
2. 叙述自身经历：点明曾经老师布置的作业是给外国人写一封介绍春节的信，使用not only...but also...的并列结构，清晰对应写出该作业带来的两个收获：提升写作能力、获得传播中国传统文化的机会。
3. 提出创意作业建议：首先说明画思维导图是很好的作业形式，点明它能帮助我们更好理解所学课程、辅助记忆；再补充一个合理的创意作业，比如学唱英文歌，说明这类作业可以同时提升英语水平、发展个人爱好，保证逻辑通顺。
4. 最后衔接题干给出的结尾句，通读全文检查：确认所有表格要点都覆盖，词数符合要求，没有出现个人隐私信息，语法表达准确即可。
【答案】
My creative English homework
Doing English homework helps us to practise and use what we've learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English.
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring Festival in it. It not only helped me improve my writing skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it's also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons we have taken. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing. In this way, both our English and our hobbies can develop.
I hope we'll have more creative English homework in the future.
【知识点】
英语征文写作
固定句型运用
中国文化英语表达
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生日常学习场景的英语写作题，给出的要点提示清晰，既考查学生的基础英语表达能力，也引导学生主动思考更高效的英语学习方式，同时融入了对外传播中国传统文化的正向导向。学生写作时只需要按顺序覆盖所有给定要点，补充的作业形式和理由逻辑自洽，控制好词数，避免出现基础语法错误，就能完成高质量的征文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题，先明确写作任务是主题为"My creative English homework"的英语征文，先梳理题干给出的所有要点：第一部分需要叙述自己做过的最有创意的英语作业，对应内容是给外国人写信介绍春节，要写出两点收获：提升写作技巧、宣扬中国文化；第二部分要提出更多创意英语作业的建议，表格给出第一个建议是画思维导图，对应理由是更好理解学习内容、有助于记忆，还需要补充一个合理的创意作业形式以及对应的第三条理由。接下来行文逻辑可以按照「承接开头引入创意作业的意义→讲述自身完成创意作业的经历和收获→提出自己的创意作业建议并说明理由」的顺序展开，注意控制词数在100左右，不要透露个人隐私信息，保证行文流畅、要点全覆盖即可。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开头句，补充过渡句点明创意作业能提升大家对英语的兴趣，自然引出下文内容。
2. 叙述自身经历：点明曾经老师布置的作业是给外国人写一封介绍春节的信，使用not only...but also...的并列结构，清晰对应写出该作业带来的两个收获：提升写作能力、获得传播中国传统文化的机会。
3. 提出创意作业建议：首先说明画思维导图是很好的作业形式，点明它能帮助我们更好理解所学课程、辅助记忆；再补充一个合理的创意作业，比如学唱英文歌，说明这类作业可以同时提升英语水平、发展个人爱好，保证逻辑通顺。
4. 最后衔接题干给出的结尾句，通读全文检查：确认所有表格要点都覆盖，词数符合要求，没有出现个人隐私信息，语法表达准确即可。
【答案】
My creative English homework
Doing English homework helps us to practise and use what we've learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English.
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring Festival in it. It not only helped me improve my writing skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it's also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons we have taken. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing. In this way, both our English and our hobbies can develop.
I hope we'll have more creative English homework in the future.
【知识点】
英语征文写作
固定句型运用
中国文化英语表达
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生日常学习场景的英语写作题，给出的要点提示清晰，既考查学生的基础英语表达能力，也引导学生主动思考更高效的英语学习方式，同时融入了对外传播中国传统文化的正向导向。学生写作时只需要按顺序覆盖所有给定要点，补充的作业形式和理由逻辑自洽，控制好词数，避免出现基础语法错误，就能完成高质量的征文。
【难度系数】
0.7
