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坚定文化自信，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，做中华文明的传播者是新时代中国青少年的责任与使命。假如你是李华，你打算在你的社交平台写一段文字，介绍中华优秀传统文化。请根据下面表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 词数100左右。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
参考词汇:瓷器 porcelain(不可数名词)
Hi, everyone! I want to introduce something about traditional Chinese culture.
Thanks for your attention!
坚定文化自信，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，做中华文明的传播者是新时代中国青少年的责任与使命。假如你是李华，你打算在你的社交平台写一段文字，介绍中华优秀传统文化。请根据下面表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 词数100左右。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
参考词汇:瓷器 porcelain(不可数名词)
Hi, everyone! I want to introduce something about traditional Chinese culture.
There are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture. Some of them have a long history. They have
influenced many people.
Beijing opera comes first. As one of the Chinese national treasures, Beijing opera comes from
"Huiban" and it needs four skills, including singing, speaking, acting, and acrobatic fighting. It's full of
famous stories, and it is loved by Chinese people of all ages.
Next, let's talk about tea. In China there are many kinds of tea in different areas, such as
green tea and black tea. Tea is good for our health.
The last one is about porcelain. China is the hometown of porcelain. Chinese has the earliest porcelain-
making technology in the world, and it's famous all over the world.
influenced many people.
Beijing opera comes first. As one of the Chinese national treasures, Beijing opera comes from
"Huiban" and it needs four skills, including singing, speaking, acting, and acrobatic fighting. It's full of
famous stories, and it is loved by Chinese people of all ages.
Next, let's talk about tea. In China there are many kinds of tea in different areas, such as
green tea and black tea. Tea is good for our health.
The last one is about porcelain. China is the hometown of porcelain. Chinese has the earliest porcelain-
making technology in the world, and it's famous all over the world.
Thanks for your attention!
答案
(八) Hi, everyone! I want to introduce something about traditional Chinese culture.
There are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture. Some of them have a long history. They have
influenced many people.
Beijing opera comes first. As one of the Chinese national treasures, Beijing opera comes from
"Huiban" and it needs four skills, including singing, speaking, acting, and acrobatic fighting. It's full of
famous stories, and it is loved by Chinese people of all ages.
Next, let's talk about tea. In China there are many kinds of tea in different areas, such as
green tea and black tea. Tea is good for our health.
The last one is about porcelain. China is the hometown of porcelain. Chinese has the earliest porcelain-
making technology in the world, and it's famous all over the world.
Thanks for your attention!
There are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture. Some of them have a long history. They have
influenced many people.
Beijing opera comes first. As one of the Chinese national treasures, Beijing opera comes from
"Huiban" and it needs four skills, including singing, speaking, acting, and acrobatic fighting. It's full of
famous stories, and it is loved by Chinese people of all ages.
Next, let's talk about tea. In China there are many kinds of tea in different areas, such as
green tea and black tea. Tea is good for our health.
The last one is about porcelain. China is the hometown of porcelain. Chinese has the earliest porcelain-
making technology in the world, and it's famous all over the world.
Thanks for your attention!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确写作任务：向社交平台的网友介绍中华优秀传统文化，需要覆盖表格给出的全部要点，词数控制在100左右，且不能泄露个人隐私。解题时先搭建行文逻辑：先完成总起部分，对应表格里中华传统文化种类多、历史悠久、影响广泛的总体特征；之后用清晰的过渡词依次展开三个具体文化代表的介绍：第一部分介绍京剧，把它的国粹属性、源自徽班、唱念做打四项技艺、受众覆盖全年龄段的要点全部涵盖；第二部分介绍茶文化，点明茶品类丰富、有益健康的特点；第三部分介绍瓷器，对应中国是瓷器之乡、制瓷技术历史最悠久、瓷器享誉世界的要点。最后衔接给定的结尾，适当调整语句让表达连贯自然，避免语法错误即可。
【解析】
1. 结构搭建：采用总-分的写作结构，衔接给定开头后，先总述中华传统文化的整体特点，再分别介绍京剧、茶文化、瓷器三个代表性文化符号，最后衔接给定结尾，逻辑清晰。
2. 要点逐一落实：
① 总体介绍：整合要点，说明中华传统文化品类繁多、历史悠久，对大量人群有深远影响；
② 京剧板块：点明京剧是中国国粹之一，起源于徽班，包含唱、念、做、打四项核心技艺，承载大量经典故事，受到全年龄段民众的喜爱；
③ 茶文化板块：说明中国茶叶品类丰富，长期饮用对身体健康有益；
④ 瓷器板块：点明中国是瓷器的故乡，拥有世界上最早的制瓷技术，中国瓷器在全球都享有盛誉。
3. 润色调整：使用first、next、last等过渡词串联不同板块，让行文流畅，检查语法错误，控制总词数符合要求，不出现个人相关隐私信息。
【答案】
Hi, everyone! I want to introduce something about traditional Chinese culture.
There are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture. Some of them have a long history. They have influenced many people.
Beijing opera comes first. As one of the Chinese national treasures, Beijing opera comes from "Huiban" and it needs four skills, including singing, speaking, acting, and acrobatic fighting. It's full of famous stories, and it is loved by Chinese people of all ages.
Next, let's talk about tea. In China there are many kinds of tea in different areas, such as green tea and black tea. Tea is good for our health.
The last one is about porcelain. China is the hometown of porcelain. Chinese has the earliest porcelain-making technology in the world, and it's famous all over the world.
Thanks for your attention!
【知识点】
英语短文写作，传统文化话题，要点整合表达
【点评】
本题结合弘扬中华优秀传统文化的热点主题，给出的提示要点清晰明确，既考查学生的基础英语书面表达能力，也引导学生加深对本土传统文化的认知，学生只需要按提示梳理要点、适当添加过渡衔接内容即可完成写作，不容易出现偏题问题。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先明确写作任务：向社交平台的网友介绍中华优秀传统文化，需要覆盖表格给出的全部要点，词数控制在100左右，且不能泄露个人隐私。解题时先搭建行文逻辑：先完成总起部分，对应表格里中华传统文化种类多、历史悠久、影响广泛的总体特征；之后用清晰的过渡词依次展开三个具体文化代表的介绍：第一部分介绍京剧，把它的国粹属性、源自徽班、唱念做打四项技艺、受众覆盖全年龄段的要点全部涵盖；第二部分介绍茶文化，点明茶品类丰富、有益健康的特点；第三部分介绍瓷器，对应中国是瓷器之乡、制瓷技术历史最悠久、瓷器享誉世界的要点。最后衔接给定的结尾，适当调整语句让表达连贯自然，避免语法错误即可。
【解析】
1. 结构搭建：采用总-分的写作结构，衔接给定开头后，先总述中华传统文化的整体特点，再分别介绍京剧、茶文化、瓷器三个代表性文化符号，最后衔接给定结尾，逻辑清晰。
2. 要点逐一落实：
① 总体介绍：整合要点，说明中华传统文化品类繁多、历史悠久，对大量人群有深远影响；
② 京剧板块：点明京剧是中国国粹之一，起源于徽班，包含唱、念、做、打四项核心技艺，承载大量经典故事，受到全年龄段民众的喜爱；
③ 茶文化板块：说明中国茶叶品类丰富，长期饮用对身体健康有益；
④ 瓷器板块：点明中国是瓷器的故乡，拥有世界上最早的制瓷技术，中国瓷器在全球都享有盛誉。
3. 润色调整：使用first、next、last等过渡词串联不同板块，让行文流畅，检查语法错误，控制总词数符合要求，不出现个人相关隐私信息。
【答案】
Hi, everyone! I want to introduce something about traditional Chinese culture.
There are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture. Some of them have a long history. They have influenced many people.
Beijing opera comes first. As one of the Chinese national treasures, Beijing opera comes from "Huiban" and it needs four skills, including singing, speaking, acting, and acrobatic fighting. It's full of famous stories, and it is loved by Chinese people of all ages.
Next, let's talk about tea. In China there are many kinds of tea in different areas, such as green tea and black tea. Tea is good for our health.
The last one is about porcelain. China is the hometown of porcelain. Chinese has the earliest porcelain-making technology in the world, and it's famous all over the world.
Thanks for your attention!
【知识点】
英语短文写作，传统文化话题，要点整合表达
【点评】
本题结合弘扬中华优秀传统文化的热点主题，给出的提示要点清晰明确，既考查学生的基础英语书面表达能力，也引导学生加深对本土传统文化的认知，学生只需要按提示梳理要点、适当添加过渡衔接内容即可完成写作，不容易出现偏题问题。
【难度系数】
0.7
