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你们学校的学生肖明因严重心脏病需要手术，但他家庭困难，无力承担昂贵的手术费。校学生会(The Students' Union)计划发起公益活动帮助他。请你根据以下要求，写一封呼吁全校师生伸出援手的公开信。
【要求】
1. 说明其面临的困境。
2. 设计一项校园公益活动(如义卖、才艺表演、旧物捐赠等)，明确活动的时间、地点，用于筹集医疗费用。
3. 用词准确、语句通顺，词数不少于 90。
你们学校的学生肖明因严重心脏病需要手术，但他家庭困难，无力承担昂贵的手术费。校学生会(The Students' Union)计划发起公益活动帮助他。请你根据以下要求，写一封呼吁全校师生伸出援手的公开信。
【要求】
1. 说明其面临的困境。
2. 设计一项校园公益活动(如义卖、才艺表演、旧物捐赠等)，明确活动的时间、地点，用于筹集医疗费用。
3. 用词准确、语句通顺，词数不少于 90。
答案
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
I'm writing to sincerely call on all of you to offer help to our schoolmate Xiao Ming.
Xiao Ming is facing a tough situation now. He has been diagnosed with a serious heart disease and needs an immediate operation to save his life. Unfortunately, his family is in great financial trouble and can't afford the high medical costs. Without enough money, he can't receive the necessary treatment.
To raise the medical fees for Xiao Ming, the Students' Union plans to hold a charity sale on our school playground this Saturday morning from 9:00 to 11:30. You can bring your used books, handmade crafts, or gently-used toys to sell. All the money we collect will be directly given to Xiao Ming's family to cover his surgery expenses.
Every small act of kindness counts. Your warm support can bring hope to Xiao Ming. Let's join hands to help him get through this difficult time!
The Students' Union
May 20th
I'm writing to sincerely call on all of you to offer help to our schoolmate Xiao Ming.
Xiao Ming is facing a tough situation now. He has been diagnosed with a serious heart disease and needs an immediate operation to save his life. Unfortunately, his family is in great financial trouble and can't afford the high medical costs. Without enough money, he can't receive the necessary treatment.
To raise the medical fees for Xiao Ming, the Students' Union plans to hold a charity sale on our school playground this Saturday morning from 9:00 to 11:30. You can bring your used books, handmade crafts, or gently-used toys to sell. All the money we collect will be directly given to Xiao Ming's family to cover his surgery expenses.
Every small act of kindness counts. Your warm support can bring hope to Xiao Ming. Let's join hands to help him get through this difficult time!
The Students' Union
May 20th
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步先明确文体是学生会发布的公益呼吁公开信，要先匹配对应的应用文格式，开头要有称呼，结尾要有发文主体和日期。接下来按照题干给出的三个要求逐一梳理写作逻辑：首先开篇直接点明写信的核心目的，让读者快速知晓发文意图；接下来第二部分清晰介绍肖明的处境，把他身患严重心脏病急需手术、家庭无力承担高额医药费的困境表述清楚，唤起大家的共情；第三部分要完整介绍设计的公益活动，选定义卖类易落地的校园活动后，明确标注活动的具体时间、地点，说明活动的规则和资金用途，让师生清楚参与方式和活动意义；最后收尾发出暖心呼吁，号召大家共同伸出援手，同时注意整体语气真诚得体，词数满足不少于90的要求，逻辑分层清晰就可以完成写作。
【解析】
1. 格式搭建：严格匹配公开信的规范格式，开头使用统一称呼Dear teachers and schoolmates，结尾标注发文主体校学生会和发文日期，符合发文身份要求。
2. 开篇点题：首段直接说明写信的目的，向全体师生发出帮助校友肖明的呼吁，开门见山不冗余。
3. 困境说明：第二段完整覆盖题干第一点要求，依次介绍肖明确诊严重心脏病、急需手术救治、家庭经济困难无力承担高额医疗费用的情况，把困境表述清晰完整。
4. 活动介绍：第三段完整覆盖题干第二点要求，选定校园义卖作为公益活动，明确活动时间为本周六上午9:00-11:30，地点为学校操场，说明可售卖的物品种类，同时明确所有募集资金将全部交给肖明家人用于支付手术费，所有活动要素清晰明确。
5. 收尾呼吁：最后一段用温情的表述点明微小善意的价值，号召全体师生携手帮助肖明渡过难关，收尾自然有感染力。
6. 最终检查：全文语句通顺无语法错误，词数远高于90词的要求，所有题干要求全部覆盖，用词正式得体符合公开信的使用场景。
【答案】
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
I'm writing to sincerely call on all of you to offer help to our schoolmate Xiao Ming.
Xiao Ming is facing a tough situation now. He has been diagnosed with a serious heart disease and needs an immediate operation to save his life. Unfortunately, his family is in great financial trouble and can't afford the high medical costs. Without enough money, he can't receive the necessary treatment.
To raise the medical fees for Xiao Ming, the Students' Union plans to hold a charity sale on our school playground this Saturday morning from 9:00 to 11:30. You can bring your used books, handmade crafts, or gently-used toys to sell. All the money we collect will be directly given to Xiao Ming's family to cover his surgery expenses.
Every small act of kindness counts. Your warm support can bring hope to Xiao Ming. Let's join hands to help him get through this difficult time!
The Students' Union
May 20th
【知识点】
英文公开信写作；公益话题表达；应用文格式规范
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有要求，逻辑层次清晰连贯，从点明发文目的、介绍肖明的困境，到完整说明公益义卖活动的时间地点、参与方式和资金用途，最后发出暖心呼吁，层层递进。语气真诚恳切，完全契合校学生会发布公益呼吁信的身份定位，用词地道准确，没有语法错误，词数符合要求，是一篇非常典型的优秀应用文参考范文，学生可以直接参考该文的结构搭建同类公益主题写作的框架。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步先明确文体是学生会发布的公益呼吁公开信，要先匹配对应的应用文格式，开头要有称呼，结尾要有发文主体和日期。接下来按照题干给出的三个要求逐一梳理写作逻辑：首先开篇直接点明写信的核心目的，让读者快速知晓发文意图；接下来第二部分清晰介绍肖明的处境，把他身患严重心脏病急需手术、家庭无力承担高额医药费的困境表述清楚，唤起大家的共情；第三部分要完整介绍设计的公益活动，选定义卖类易落地的校园活动后，明确标注活动的具体时间、地点，说明活动的规则和资金用途，让师生清楚参与方式和活动意义；最后收尾发出暖心呼吁，号召大家共同伸出援手，同时注意整体语气真诚得体，词数满足不少于90的要求，逻辑分层清晰就可以完成写作。
【解析】
1. 格式搭建：严格匹配公开信的规范格式，开头使用统一称呼Dear teachers and schoolmates，结尾标注发文主体校学生会和发文日期，符合发文身份要求。
2. 开篇点题：首段直接说明写信的目的，向全体师生发出帮助校友肖明的呼吁，开门见山不冗余。
3. 困境说明：第二段完整覆盖题干第一点要求，依次介绍肖明确诊严重心脏病、急需手术救治、家庭经济困难无力承担高额医疗费用的情况，把困境表述清晰完整。
4. 活动介绍：第三段完整覆盖题干第二点要求，选定校园义卖作为公益活动，明确活动时间为本周六上午9:00-11:30，地点为学校操场，说明可售卖的物品种类，同时明确所有募集资金将全部交给肖明家人用于支付手术费，所有活动要素清晰明确。
5. 收尾呼吁：最后一段用温情的表述点明微小善意的价值，号召全体师生携手帮助肖明渡过难关，收尾自然有感染力。
6. 最终检查：全文语句通顺无语法错误，词数远高于90词的要求，所有题干要求全部覆盖，用词正式得体符合公开信的使用场景。
【答案】
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
I'm writing to sincerely call on all of you to offer help to our schoolmate Xiao Ming.
Xiao Ming is facing a tough situation now. He has been diagnosed with a serious heart disease and needs an immediate operation to save his life. Unfortunately, his family is in great financial trouble and can't afford the high medical costs. Without enough money, he can't receive the necessary treatment.
To raise the medical fees for Xiao Ming, the Students' Union plans to hold a charity sale on our school playground this Saturday morning from 9:00 to 11:30. You can bring your used books, handmade crafts, or gently-used toys to sell. All the money we collect will be directly given to Xiao Ming's family to cover his surgery expenses.
Every small act of kindness counts. Your warm support can bring hope to Xiao Ming. Let's join hands to help him get through this difficult time!
The Students' Union
May 20th
【知识点】
英文公开信写作；公益话题表达；应用文格式规范
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有要求，逻辑层次清晰连贯，从点明发文目的、介绍肖明的困境，到完整说明公益义卖活动的时间地点、参与方式和资金用途，最后发出暖心呼吁，层层递进。语气真诚恳切，完全契合校学生会发布公益呼吁信的身份定位，用词地道准确，没有语法错误，词数符合要求，是一篇非常典型的优秀应用文参考范文，学生可以直接参考该文的结构搭建同类公益主题写作的框架。
【难度系数】
0.6
