遣词造句
1. 肖明患有严重的心脏病,从上周起就一直没来学校了。(suffer from;be absent from)
2. 他们负担不起如此昂贵的手术费用。(afford)
3. 如果我们所有人都伸出援手,就能救肖明!(give a helping hand)
1. 肖明患有严重的心脏病,从上周起就一直没来学校了。(suffer from;be absent from)
Xiao Ming is suffering from a serious heart disease and has been absent from school since last week.
2. 他们负担不起如此昂贵的手术费用。(afford)
They cannot afford such an expensive operation.
3. 如果我们所有人都伸出援手,就能救肖明!(give a helping hand)
If all of us give a helping hand, we can save Xiao Ming!
答案
1. Xiao Ming is suffering from a serious heart disease and has been absent from school since last week.
2. They cannot afford such an expensive operation.
3. If all of us give a helping hand, we can save Xiao Ming!
2. They cannot afford such an expensive operation.
3. If all of us give a helping hand, we can save Xiao Ming!
解析
【分析】
这是指定提示词的汉译英造句题,解题思路如下:第一步先明确每道题给出的提示短语/单词的准确含义和常用搭配,第二步拆分原中文句子的语义成分,匹配对应的英文结构,第三步结合语境选择正确的时态,把成分和提示词组合成通顺符合语法的完整句子,注意不能遗漏题干要求使用的指定表达。比如第一题先对应suffer from(患病)、be absent from(缺席)两个短语,拆分出“患严重心脏病”和“从上周起缺课”两个并列语义,选择合适时态拼接即可;第二题抓住afford表“负担得起”的常用否定搭配;第三题识别出if引导的条件状语从句的结构规则,代入指定短语give a helping hand即可完成。
【解析】
1. 先匹配提示短语:suffer from意为“患有(疾病)”,描述当下的状态用现在进行时is suffering from,后接宾语a serious heart disease;用并列连词and衔接后半句,提示短语be absent from意为“缺席”,“从上周起一直没来学校”强调从过去持续到现在的状态,用现在完成时结构has been absent from,后接宾语school,时间状语since last week置于句末,组合得到句子。
2. 提示词afford意为“负担得起”,表达“负担不起”用cannot afford,后接宾语“如此昂贵的手术”译为such an expensive operation,直接组合得到句子。
3. 提示短语give a helping hand意为“伸出援手”,句子为if引导的条件状语从句,遵循“主情从现”规则,从句用一般现在时表述条件,主句用“情态动词can+动词原形”表述结果,代入对应语义得到完整句子。
【答案】
1. Xiao Ming is suffering from a serious heart disease and has been absent from school since last week.
2. They cannot afford such an expensive operation.
3. If all of us give a helping hand, we can save Xiao Ming!
【知识点】
短语固定搭配,现在完成时,if条件状语从句
【点评】
本题属于基础的英语输出类题型,核心考察学生对指定核心短语的记忆和应用能力,同时兼顾基础时态和状语从句的语法规则考察,难度较低,只要准确掌握提示词的含义和常用搭配,注意时态匹配就可以顺利写出正确句子。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是指定提示词的汉译英造句题,解题思路如下:第一步先明确每道题给出的提示短语/单词的准确含义和常用搭配,第二步拆分原中文句子的语义成分,匹配对应的英文结构,第三步结合语境选择正确的时态,把成分和提示词组合成通顺符合语法的完整句子,注意不能遗漏题干要求使用的指定表达。比如第一题先对应suffer from(患病)、be absent from(缺席)两个短语,拆分出“患严重心脏病”和“从上周起缺课”两个并列语义,选择合适时态拼接即可;第二题抓住afford表“负担得起”的常用否定搭配;第三题识别出if引导的条件状语从句的结构规则,代入指定短语give a helping hand即可完成。
【解析】
1. 先匹配提示短语:suffer from意为“患有(疾病)”,描述当下的状态用现在进行时is suffering from,后接宾语a serious heart disease;用并列连词and衔接后半句,提示短语be absent from意为“缺席”,“从上周起一直没来学校”强调从过去持续到现在的状态,用现在完成时结构has been absent from,后接宾语school,时间状语since last week置于句末,组合得到句子。
2. 提示词afford意为“负担得起”,表达“负担不起”用cannot afford,后接宾语“如此昂贵的手术”译为such an expensive operation,直接组合得到句子。
3. 提示短语give a helping hand意为“伸出援手”,句子为if引导的条件状语从句,遵循“主情从现”规则,从句用一般现在时表述条件,主句用“情态动词can+动词原形”表述结果,代入对应语义得到完整句子。
【答案】
1. Xiao Ming is suffering from a serious heart disease and has been absent from school since last week.
2. They cannot afford such an expensive operation.
3. If all of us give a helping hand, we can save Xiao Ming!
【知识点】
短语固定搭配,现在完成时,if条件状语从句
【点评】
本题属于基础的英语输出类题型,核心考察学生对指定核心短语的记忆和应用能力,同时兼顾基础时态和状语从句的语法规则考察,难度较低,只要准确掌握提示词的含义和常用搭配,注意时态匹配就可以顺利写出正确句子。
【难度系数】
0.8
实战演练
你校八年级学生陈明(Chen Ming)是个热爱运动、乐于助人的男孩,却不幸患上严重的骨骼疾病(bone disease)。他已一个月没来上学了,急需一台手术恢复健康,但手术费用高昂,其父母仅靠开出租车维生,无力承担。校学生会计划发起公益活动为他筹款,现请你以学生会名义写一封呼吁全校师生伸出援手的公开信。
【要点】
1. 介绍陈明的年级、性格特点及患病情况。
2. 阐述困境:说明手术的必要性、具体费用以及其家庭经济状况。
3. 发起行动:设计一项校园公益活动,明确活动的时间、地点。
【要求】
1. 结构清晰,须涵盖要点,逻辑连贯。
2. 用词准确,语句通顺,无生僻词。
3. 词数 90 左右。
你校八年级学生陈明(Chen Ming)是个热爱运动、乐于助人的男孩,却不幸患上严重的骨骼疾病(bone disease)。他已一个月没来上学了,急需一台手术恢复健康,但手术费用高昂,其父母仅靠开出租车维生,无力承担。校学生会计划发起公益活动为他筹款,现请你以学生会名义写一封呼吁全校师生伸出援手的公开信。
【要点】
1. 介绍陈明的年级、性格特点及患病情况。
2. 阐述困境:说明手术的必要性、具体费用以及其家庭经济状况。
3. 发起行动:设计一项校园公益活动,明确活动的时间、地点。
【要求】
1. 结构清晰,须涵盖要点,逻辑连贯。
2. 用词准确,语句通顺,无生僻词。
3. 词数 90 左右。
One possible version
Dear all,
Chen Ming, a hard - working Grade 8 student, needs our help!
Dear all,
Chen Ming, a hard - working Grade 8 student, needs our help!
Chen Ming is suffering from a serious bone disease and has been absent from school since last month. A necessary operation can cure him, but it costs over 300,000 yuan.
Chen Ming's parents are both taxi drivers. They cannot afford such an expensive operation. Without this operation, Chen Ming's life would be at risk.
Let's come together to support Chen Ming. We are organizing a book fair to raise money next Saturday from 10 a. m. to 3 p. m. in the school library.
Join us to show Chen Ming that he is not alone. If all of us give a helping hand, we can save Chen Ming!
The Students' Union
答案
One possible version
Dear all,
Chen Ming, a hard - working Grade 8 student, needs our help!
Chen Ming is suffering from a serious bone disease and has been absent from school since last month. A necessary operation can cure him, but it costs over 300,000 yuan.
Chen Ming's parents are both taxi drivers. They cannot afford such an expensive operation. Without this operation, Chen Ming's life would be at risk.
Let's come together to support Chen Ming. We are organizing a book fair to raise money next Saturday from 10 a. m. to 3 p. m. in the school library.
Join us to show Chen Ming that he is not alone. If all of us give a helping hand, we can save Chen Ming!
The Students' Union
Dear all,
Chen Ming, a hard - working Grade 8 student, needs our help!
Chen Ming is suffering from a serious bone disease and has been absent from school since last month. A necessary operation can cure him, but it costs over 300,000 yuan.
Chen Ming's parents are both taxi drivers. They cannot afford such an expensive operation. Without this operation, Chen Ming's life would be at risk.
Let's come together to support Chen Ming. We are organizing a book fair to raise money next Saturday from 10 a. m. to 3 p. m. in the school library.
Join us to show Chen Ming that he is not alone. If all of us give a helping hand, we can save Chen Ming!
The Students' Union
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确写作身份是校学生会,受众是全校师生,文体是公益呼吁公开信。首先第一步先梳理题干给出的三个必写要点,避免遗漏:第一部分先介绍陈明的基本信息,点明他是八年级学生,平时热爱运动、乐于助人,如今患上严重骨骼疾病已经一个月没来上学的情况,快速引出求助主题。第二部分要讲清当前的困境:说明手术是他恢复健康的必需手段,同时点明手术费用高昂,他的父母仅靠开出租车谋生完全无力承担,凸显求助的紧迫性。第三部分设计合理的校园公益筹款活动,明确标注活动的具体时间、地点,最后发出真诚的呼吁,收尾落款标注学生会即可,全程注意用词贴合八年级词汇量,控制总词数在90左右,逻辑连贯通顺。
【解析】
1. 格式搭建:公开信开头用通用称呼Dear all,结尾落款标注The Students' Union,符合正式校园公开信的格式要求。
2. 要点逐一落实:
① 开篇直接引出帮扶对象:点明陈明是八年级的学生,如今身患严重骨骼疾病,已经离校一个月,点明他需要大家的帮助,对应第一个要点。
② 接着阐述困境:说明手术是治愈他的必要手段,但是手术费用高昂,他的父母都是出租车司机,完全无力承担这笔巨额费用,拖延手术会有健康风险,对应第二个要点。
③ 最后发起行动:公布学生会策划的公益筹款活动,明确活动的具体时间、地点,号召全校师生参与,对应第三个要点。
3. 整体调整语句流畅度,全部使用初中阶段常用词汇,控制词数在要求范围内,语气真诚有号召力。
【答案】
Dear all,
Chen Ming, a hard - working Grade 8 student, needs our help!
Chen Ming is suffering from a serious bone disease and has been absent from school since last month. A necessary operation can cure him, but it costs over 300,000 yuan.
Chen Ming's parents are both taxi drivers. They cannot afford such an expensive operation. Without this operation, Chen Ming's life would be at risk.
Let's come together to support Chen Ming. We are organizing a book fair to raise money next Saturday from 10 a. m. to 3 p. m. in the school library.
Join us to show Chen Ming that he is not alone. If all of us give a helping hand, we can save Chen Ming!
The Students' Union
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作,书信格式规范,要点类作文谋篇
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部三个要点,逻辑层层递进,从介绍人物情况到说明现实困境,再到公布具体活动发起呼吁,过渡自然流畅;全部用词都是八年级学生熟悉的常用词汇,没有生僻表达,词数符合90左右的要求,语气真诚有感染力,完全符合校园公开信的写作要求,是非常适配八年级水平的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先要明确写作身份是校学生会,受众是全校师生,文体是公益呼吁公开信。首先第一步先梳理题干给出的三个必写要点,避免遗漏:第一部分先介绍陈明的基本信息,点明他是八年级学生,平时热爱运动、乐于助人,如今患上严重骨骼疾病已经一个月没来上学的情况,快速引出求助主题。第二部分要讲清当前的困境:说明手术是他恢复健康的必需手段,同时点明手术费用高昂,他的父母仅靠开出租车谋生完全无力承担,凸显求助的紧迫性。第三部分设计合理的校园公益筹款活动,明确标注活动的具体时间、地点,最后发出真诚的呼吁,收尾落款标注学生会即可,全程注意用词贴合八年级词汇量,控制总词数在90左右,逻辑连贯通顺。
【解析】
1. 格式搭建:公开信开头用通用称呼Dear all,结尾落款标注The Students' Union,符合正式校园公开信的格式要求。
2. 要点逐一落实:
① 开篇直接引出帮扶对象:点明陈明是八年级的学生,如今身患严重骨骼疾病,已经离校一个月,点明他需要大家的帮助,对应第一个要点。
② 接着阐述困境:说明手术是治愈他的必要手段,但是手术费用高昂,他的父母都是出租车司机,完全无力承担这笔巨额费用,拖延手术会有健康风险,对应第二个要点。
③ 最后发起行动:公布学生会策划的公益筹款活动,明确活动的具体时间、地点,号召全校师生参与,对应第三个要点。
3. 整体调整语句流畅度,全部使用初中阶段常用词汇,控制词数在要求范围内,语气真诚有号召力。
【答案】
Dear all,
Chen Ming, a hard - working Grade 8 student, needs our help!
Chen Ming is suffering from a serious bone disease and has been absent from school since last month. A necessary operation can cure him, but it costs over 300,000 yuan.
Chen Ming's parents are both taxi drivers. They cannot afford such an expensive operation. Without this operation, Chen Ming's life would be at risk.
Let's come together to support Chen Ming. We are organizing a book fair to raise money next Saturday from 10 a. m. to 3 p. m. in the school library.
Join us to show Chen Ming that he is not alone. If all of us give a helping hand, we can save Chen Ming!
The Students' Union
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作,书信格式规范,要点类作文谋篇
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部三个要点,逻辑层层递进,从介绍人物情况到说明现实困境,再到公布具体活动发起呼吁,过渡自然流畅;全部用词都是八年级学生熟悉的常用词汇,没有生僻表达,词数符合90左右的要求,语气真诚有感染力,完全符合校园公开信的写作要求,是非常适配八年级水平的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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