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根据下表提供的内容，以“A report about a fire”写一篇短文。
要求:语言通顺,可适当发挥,词数80左右。
A report about a fire
根据下表提供的内容，以“A report about a fire”写一篇短文。
要求:语言通顺,可适当发挥,词数80左右。
A report about a fire
At 3:00 yesterday afternoon, a big fire happened at Mr Li's house.
When the fire broke out, Mr Li's father was alone at home. He was watching TV in the living room. He felt very scared and at once called 119 for help. Luckily, the firemen arrived quickly and saved him. However, his left arm was badly hurt in the fire.
We must be careful with fire. If there is a fire, we must follow these rules.
1. Stay calm and call 119 as soon as possible.
2. Stay close to the ground to avoid heavy smoke.
3. Cover your mouth and nose with a wet piece of cloth.
2. Stay close to the ground to avoid heavy smoke.
3. Cover your mouth and nose with a wet piece of cloth.
答案
A report about a fire
At 3:00 yesterday afternoon, a big fire happened at Mr Li's house.
When the fire broke out, Mr Li's father was alone at home. He was watching TV in the living room. He felt very scared and at once called 119 for help. Luckily, the firemen arrived quickly and saved him. However, his left arm was badly hurt in the fire.
We must be careful with fire. If there is a fire, we must follow these rules.
1. Stay calm and call 119 as soon as possible.
2. Stay close to the ground to avoid heavy smoke.
3. Cover your mouth and nose with a wet piece of cloth.
At 3:00 yesterday afternoon, a big fire happened at Mr Li's house.
When the fire broke out, Mr Li's father was alone at home. He was watching TV in the living room. He felt very scared and at once called 119 for help. Luckily, the firemen arrived quickly and saved him. However, his left arm was badly hurt in the fire.
We must be careful with fire. If there is a fire, we must follow these rules.
1. Stay calm and call 119 as soon as possible.
2. Stay close to the ground to avoid heavy smoke.
3. Cover your mouth and nose with a wet piece of cloth.
解析
【分析】本题要求根据表格信息写一篇关于火灾的英语短文，属于记叙文写作。首先确定时态为一般过去时（描述过去发生的火灾），依次梳理表格中的时间、地点、经过、逃生提示等要点，用通顺的英语串联内容，适当发挥使文章流畅，确保要点完整且符合词数要求。
【解析】1. 开头点明火灾发生的时间（昨天下午三点）和地点（李先生家）；2. 描述火灾发生时李先生父亲的状态：独自在家看电视，害怕后拨打119求助；3. 说明救援结果：消防员及时救出他，他左手臂受伤；4. 补充火灾逃生提示，至少两点，语言准确，语句通顺。
【答案】A report about a fire
At 3:00 yesterday afternoon, a big fire happened at Mr Li's house.
When the fire broke out, Mr Li's father was alone at home. He was watching TV in the living room. He felt very scared and at once called 119 for help. Luckily, the firemen arrived quickly and saved him. However, his left arm was badly hurt in the fire.
We must be careful with fire. If there is a fire, we must follow these rules.
1. Stay calm and call 119 as soon as possible.
2. Stay close to the ground to avoid heavy smoke.
3. Cover your mouth and nose with a wet piece of cloth.
【知识点】英语写作、记叙文写作
【点评】短文完整覆盖表格所有信息要点，时态运用准确，语言通顺自然，适当补充细节使文章连贯，逃生提示实用合理，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开头点明火灾发生的时间（昨天下午三点）和地点（李先生家）；2. 描述火灾发生时李先生父亲的状态：独自在家看电视，害怕后拨打119求助；3. 说明救援结果：消防员及时救出他，他左手臂受伤；4. 补充火灾逃生提示，至少两点，语言准确，语句通顺。
【答案】A report about a fire
At 3:00 yesterday afternoon, a big fire happened at Mr Li's house.
When the fire broke out, Mr Li's father was alone at home. He was watching TV in the living room. He felt very scared and at once called 119 for help. Luckily, the firemen arrived quickly and saved him. However, his left arm was badly hurt in the fire.
We must be careful with fire. If there is a fire, we must follow these rules.
1. Stay calm and call 119 as soon as possible.
2. Stay close to the ground to avoid heavy smoke.
3. Cover your mouth and nose with a wet piece of cloth.
【知识点】英语写作、记叙文写作
【点评】短文完整覆盖表格所有信息要点，时态运用准确，语言通顺自然，适当补充细节使文章连贯，逃生提示实用合理，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】0.5
