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答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D24
新学期开始了，学校各个社团都在招纳新成员。假如你是张梦，作为社团新成员的代表，你要在迎新会上分享自己的爱好。请以“My hobby”为主题，根据思维导图中的
提示内容写一篇演讲稿。
要求：1.必须包含思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello，everyone. I’m Zhang Meng. I’m a new member of the
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D24
新学期开始了，学校各个社团都在招纳新成员。假如你是张梦，作为社团新成员的代表，你要在迎新会上分享自己的爱好。请以“My hobby”为主题，根据思维导图中的
提示内容写一篇演讲稿。
要求：1.必须包含思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello，everyone. I’m Zhang Meng. I’m a new member of the
答案
Unit 4 主题写作专项
基础版范文
Hello, everyone. I'm Zhang Meng. I'm a new member of the football club. I am from Class 3, Grade 7. Now I'd like to share my hobby here.
My hobby is playing football. I like playing football because it makes me healthy, helps me make new friends and lets me learn more about working as a team.
One day, I saw some boys playing football. A boy noticed me and he waved at me. He invited me to play football with them because one of the players had to have his English lesson. I accepted his invitation happily. I played well and they all said I was a great football player. After that, we became good friends.
I will try my best to play football. I love my hobby.
进阶版范文
Hello, everyone. I'm Zhang Meng. I'm a new member of the football club. I am from Class 3, Grade 7. Now I'd like to share my hobby here.
My hobby is playing football. I like playing football because it not only makes me healthy but also helps me make new friends. What's more, it helps me learn more about working as a team.
One day, I saw some boys playing football. All of a sudden, a boy noticed me and he waved at me. He invited me to play football with them because one of the players had to have his English lesson. I accepted his invitation happily. I played so well that they all said I was a great football player. After that, we became good friends.
My hobby helps me a lot, so I will keep doing it. I will try my best to play football and help my club to win more games.
基础版范文
Hello, everyone. I'm Zhang Meng. I'm a new member of the football club. I am from Class 3, Grade 7. Now I'd like to share my hobby here.
My hobby is playing football. I like playing football because it makes me healthy, helps me make new friends and lets me learn more about working as a team.
One day, I saw some boys playing football. A boy noticed me and he waved at me. He invited me to play football with them because one of the players had to have his English lesson. I accepted his invitation happily. I played well and they all said I was a great football player. After that, we became good friends.
I will try my best to play football. I love my hobby.
进阶版范文
Hello, everyone. I'm Zhang Meng. I'm a new member of the football club. I am from Class 3, Grade 7. Now I'd like to share my hobby here.
My hobby is playing football. I like playing football because it not only makes me healthy but also helps me make new friends. What's more, it helps me learn more about working as a team.
One day, I saw some boys playing football. All of a sudden, a boy noticed me and he waved at me. He invited me to play football with them because one of the players had to have his English lesson. I accepted his invitation happily. I played so well that they all said I was a great football player. After that, we became good friends.
My hobby helps me a lot, so I will keep doing it. I will try my best to play football and help my club to win more games.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My hobby”为主题撰写迎新会演讲稿，需包含思维导图的三个核心内容：说明爱好是什么、解释拥有该爱好的原因、分享与爱好相关的故事，身份为社团新成员张梦，开头已给出。解题思路：首先结合社团招新场景选择合适的爱好（如足球）；其次依次回应三个思维导图要点：明确爱好为踢足球，阐述原因（有益健康、结交好友、学会团队协作），讲述具体经历（被邀请参与踢球的故事）；最后补充衔接内容，使演讲稿结构完整，语气贴合迎新会的正式且亲切的氛围，满足词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接给定开头，补充班级信息，点明自己是足球俱乐部新成员；2. 回应第一个思维导图问题：明确爱好是playing football；3. 回应第二个问题：说明拥有该爱好的原因，如让身体更健康、帮助认识新朋友、学习团队合作；4. 回应第三个问题：分享具体故事，比如某天看到同学踢球，因一名队员要上英语课被邀请加入，表现出色后成为好友；5. 收尾表达对爱好的热爱，表明会坚持下去，确保语句通顺，符合演讲稿的语境，覆盖所有要求要点，词数不少于80。
【答案】
Hello, everyone. I'm Zhang Meng. I'm a new member of the football club. I am from Class 3, Grade 7. Now I'd like to share my hobby here.
My hobby is playing football. I like playing football because it makes me healthy, helps me make new friends and lets me learn more about working as a team.
One day, I saw some boys playing football. A boy noticed me and he waved at me. He invited me to play football with them because one of the players had to have his English lesson. I accepted his invitation happily. I played well and they all said I was a great football player. After that, we became good friends.
I will try my best to play football. I love my hobby.
【知识点】
英语写作、话题表达（爱好）、演讲稿写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖思维导图的所有提示内容，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁流畅，符合迎新会演讲稿的语境，通过具体事例丰富内容，是优秀的参考范例，能帮助学生掌握“爱好”类话题的写作方法。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题要求以“My hobby”为主题撰写迎新会演讲稿，需包含思维导图的三个核心内容：说明爱好是什么、解释拥有该爱好的原因、分享与爱好相关的故事，身份为社团新成员张梦，开头已给出。解题思路：首先结合社团招新场景选择合适的爱好（如足球）；其次依次回应三个思维导图要点：明确爱好为踢足球，阐述原因（有益健康、结交好友、学会团队协作），讲述具体经历（被邀请参与踢球的故事）；最后补充衔接内容，使演讲稿结构完整，语气贴合迎新会的正式且亲切的氛围，满足词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接给定开头，补充班级信息，点明自己是足球俱乐部新成员；2. 回应第一个思维导图问题：明确爱好是playing football；3. 回应第二个问题：说明拥有该爱好的原因，如让身体更健康、帮助认识新朋友、学习团队合作；4. 回应第三个问题：分享具体故事，比如某天看到同学踢球，因一名队员要上英语课被邀请加入，表现出色后成为好友；5. 收尾表达对爱好的热爱，表明会坚持下去，确保语句通顺，符合演讲稿的语境，覆盖所有要求要点，词数不少于80。
【答案】
Hello, everyone. I'm Zhang Meng. I'm a new member of the football club. I am from Class 3, Grade 7. Now I'd like to share my hobby here.
My hobby is playing football. I like playing football because it makes me healthy, helps me make new friends and lets me learn more about working as a team.
One day, I saw some boys playing football. A boy noticed me and he waved at me. He invited me to play football with them because one of the players had to have his English lesson. I accepted his invitation happily. I played well and they all said I was a great football player. After that, we became good friends.
I will try my best to play football. I love my hobby.
【知识点】
英语写作、话题表达（爱好）、演讲稿写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖思维导图的所有提示内容，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁流畅，符合迎新会演讲稿的语境，通过具体事例丰富内容，是优秀的参考范例，能帮助学生掌握“爱好”类话题的写作方法。
【难度系数】
0.3
