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本单元的写作主题为“乐趣和爱好”，要求学生根据所学的词汇和句型介绍自己或他人获取乐趣的方式。通常涉及的细分话题有：①介绍自己或他人的爱好；②介绍爱好（或获取乐趣）的重要性（此时属于说明文）；③描述一次和爱好有关的经历（此时属于记叙文）。该话题常出现在记叙文、说明文和应用文（如书信、电子邮件或日记等）中。
写作实例
“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.（只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子要变傻）”这句谚语充分说明了娱乐的重要性。你是如何看待娱乐的呢？请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇文章，分享你对娱乐或乐趣的观点或看法。
提示内容：1.你觉得娱乐有什么益处？
2.你是如何获取乐趣的？
写作要求：1.必须包括所有提示内容，可以适当发挥；
2.词数不少于80。
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审题指导
1.体裁：说明文
2.时态：一般现在时
3.人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
4.必备词汇：①daily life 日常生活 ②share...with sb. 和某人分享…… ③do away with 消除 ④lift one’s spirits 使某人振奋 ⑤keep sb. doing sth. 使某人一直做某事 ⑥lose weight 减肥 ⑦stay healthy 保持健康 ⑧all in all 总的来说
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文优秀范文亮点评析
P52 Fun can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits.Getting fun is very important in our daily life.① Let me share my idea about fun with you.①点明娱乐的重要性，一语中的。
P52 Fun also keeps us feeling youthful.Fun has some advantages.② Fun can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Fun also keeps us feeling youthful. Research also shows that fun brings people closer.②该句是本段的主题句，引出下文中提到的三个益处。
P53 Research also shows that fun brings people closer.There are a lot of ways to get fun. My way is to have hobbies. My hobby is swimming. It helps me lose weight③ and stay healthy.③ I always go swimming with my friends. We share laughter and unforgettable moments together.③短语的使用让文章的表达更加丰富。
P55 Let’s share laughter and unforgettable moments together.All in all, swimming is my hobby and can always bring me a lot of fun.④④总结语，和开头相呼应。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①space lover 太空爱好者 ②do research 做研究 ③be busy with sth.忙于某事 ④play the piano 弹钢琴 ⑤have fun 玩得开心 ⑥be excited to do sth. 兴奋地做某事 ⑦take care of 照顾 ⑧set up 成立；建立 ⑨look forward to 期待 ⑩after school 放学后 ⑪many kinds of 许多种类的 ⑫If you’re trying not to be bored in your life，we’ll offer you expert advice on how to have more fun. 如果 你 想 在 生 活 中 不 无 聊，我 们 会 为 你 提 供 如 何 获 得 更 多 乐 趣 的 专 业 建 议。
本单元的写作主题为“乐趣和爱好”，要求学生根据所学的词汇和句型介绍自己或他人获取乐趣的方式。通常涉及的细分话题有：①介绍自己或他人的爱好；②介绍爱好（或获取乐趣）的重要性（此时属于说明文）；③描述一次和爱好有关的经历（此时属于记叙文）。该话题常出现在记叙文、说明文和应用文（如书信、电子邮件或日记等）中。
写作实例
“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.（只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子要变傻）”这句谚语充分说明了娱乐的重要性。你是如何看待娱乐的呢？请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇文章，分享你对娱乐或乐趣的观点或看法。
提示内容：1.你觉得娱乐有什么益处？
2.你是如何获取乐趣的？
写作要求：1.必须包括所有提示内容，可以适当发挥；
2.词数不少于80。
_______
_______
_______
审题指导
1.体裁：说明文
2.时态：一般现在时
3.人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
4.必备词汇：①daily life 日常生活 ②share...with sb. 和某人分享…… ③do away with 消除 ④lift one’s spirits 使某人振奋 ⑤keep sb. doing sth. 使某人一直做某事 ⑥lose weight 减肥 ⑦stay healthy 保持健康 ⑧all in all 总的来说
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文优秀范文亮点评析
P52 Fun can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits.Getting fun is very important in our daily life.① Let me share my idea about fun with you.①点明娱乐的重要性，一语中的。
P52 Fun also keeps us feeling youthful.Fun has some advantages.② Fun can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Fun also keeps us feeling youthful. Research also shows that fun brings people closer.②该句是本段的主题句，引出下文中提到的三个益处。
P53 Research also shows that fun brings people closer.There are a lot of ways to get fun. My way is to have hobbies. My hobby is swimming. It helps me lose weight③ and stay healthy.③ I always go swimming with my friends. We share laughter and unforgettable moments together.③短语的使用让文章的表达更加丰富。
P55 Let’s share laughter and unforgettable moments together.All in all, swimming is my hobby and can always bring me a lot of fun.④④总结语，和开头相呼应。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①space lover 太空爱好者 ②do research 做研究 ③be busy with sth.忙于某事 ④play the piano 弹钢琴 ⑤have fun 玩得开心 ⑥be excited to do sth. 兴奋地做某事 ⑦take care of 照顾 ⑧set up 成立；建立 ⑨look forward to 期待 ⑩after school 放学后 ⑪many kinds of 许多种类的 ⑫If you’re trying not to be bored in your life，we’ll offer you expert advice on how to have more fun. 如果 你 想 在 生 活 中 不 无 聊，我 们 会 为 你 提 供 如 何 获 得 更 多 乐 趣 的 专 业 建 议。
答案
Getting fun is very important in our daily life.⁽¹⁾ Let me share my idea about fun with you.
Fun has some advantages.⁽²⁾ Fun can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Fun also keeps us feeling youthful. Research also shows that fun brings people closer.
There are a lot of ways to get fun. My way is to have hobbies. My hobby is swimming. It helps me lose weight⁽³⁾ and stay healthy.⁽³⁾ I always go swimming with my friends. We share laughter and unforgettable moments together.
All in all, swimming is my hobby and can always bring me a lot of fun.⁽⁴⁾
Fun has some advantages.⁽²⁾ Fun can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Fun also keeps us feeling youthful. Research also shows that fun brings people closer.
There are a lot of ways to get fun. My way is to have hobbies. My hobby is swimming. It helps me lose weight⁽³⁾ and stay healthy.⁽³⁾ I always go swimming with my friends. We share laughter and unforgettable moments together.
All in all, swimming is my hobby and can always bring me a lot of fun.⁽⁴⁾
解析
【分析】
本题为英语说明文写作，主题围绕“乐趣和爱好”展开。解题思路如下：1. 确定写作基础：体裁为说明文，时态用一般现在时，以第一人称表达观点；2. 遵循给定的思维导图谋篇：第一段引出话题，点明娱乐在日常生活的重要性，引出分享观点；第二段阐述娱乐的益处，先总起说明有好处，再分三点具体说明（消除坏情绪振奋精神、保持年轻、拉近人际距离）；第三段介绍获取乐趣的方式，明确通过爱好（以游泳为例），补充活动细节；第四段总结，呼应开头，点明爱好带来的乐趣；3. 写作时需覆盖所有提示内容，运用给定的核心词汇短语，保证结构清晰、逻辑连贯，词数达标。
【解析】
按照写作结构逐步完成内容：
1. 第一段：引出话题，填写“very important in our daily life”完成“Getting fun is very important in our daily life.”，引出分享观点；
2. 第二段：先总起“Fun has some advantages.”，依次填写：“do away with”（对应消除坏情绪）、“our spirits”（对应振奋精神）、“feeling youthful”（对应保持年轻），最后填写“brings people closer”说明研究结论；
3. 第三段：介绍获取乐趣的方式，依次填写“to have hobbies”、“swimming”、“helps me lose weight and stay healthy”，补充细节“ I always go swimming with my friends. We share laughter and unforgettable moments together.”；
4. 第四段：总结，填写“swimming”、“bring me a lot of fun”，呼应开头点明核心观点。
写作时需运用给定核心短语，保持时态一致，覆盖所有要求。
【答案】
Getting fun is very important in our daily life. Let me share my idea about fun with you.
Fun has some advantages. Fun can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Fun also keeps us feeling youthful. Research also shows that fun brings people closer.
There are a lot of ways to get fun. My way is to have hobbies. My hobby is swimming. It helps me lose weight and stay healthy. I always go swimming with my friends. We share laughter and unforgettable moments together.
All in all, swimming is my hobby and can always bring me a lot of fun.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、词汇短语运用、写作谋篇布局
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格遵循思维导图的四段式框架，准确点明主题；完整覆盖“娱乐的益处”“获取乐趣的方式”所有提示；运用给定核心词汇短语，语言表达准确丰富；开头结尾呼应，逻辑连贯，符合初中英语写作要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语说明文写作，主题围绕“乐趣和爱好”展开。解题思路如下：1. 确定写作基础：体裁为说明文，时态用一般现在时，以第一人称表达观点；2. 遵循给定的思维导图谋篇：第一段引出话题，点明娱乐在日常生活的重要性，引出分享观点；第二段阐述娱乐的益处，先总起说明有好处，再分三点具体说明（消除坏情绪振奋精神、保持年轻、拉近人际距离）；第三段介绍获取乐趣的方式，明确通过爱好（以游泳为例），补充活动细节；第四段总结，呼应开头，点明爱好带来的乐趣；3. 写作时需覆盖所有提示内容，运用给定的核心词汇短语，保证结构清晰、逻辑连贯，词数达标。
【解析】
按照写作结构逐步完成内容：
1. 第一段：引出话题，填写“very important in our daily life”完成“Getting fun is very important in our daily life.”，引出分享观点；
2. 第二段：先总起“Fun has some advantages.”，依次填写：“do away with”（对应消除坏情绪）、“our spirits”（对应振奋精神）、“feeling youthful”（对应保持年轻），最后填写“brings people closer”说明研究结论；
3. 第三段：介绍获取乐趣的方式，依次填写“to have hobbies”、“swimming”、“helps me lose weight and stay healthy”，补充细节“ I always go swimming with my friends. We share laughter and unforgettable moments together.”；
4. 第四段：总结，填写“swimming”、“bring me a lot of fun”，呼应开头点明核心观点。
写作时需运用给定核心短语，保持时态一致，覆盖所有要求。
【答案】
Getting fun is very important in our daily life. Let me share my idea about fun with you.
Fun has some advantages. Fun can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Fun also keeps us feeling youthful. Research also shows that fun brings people closer.
There are a lot of ways to get fun. My way is to have hobbies. My hobby is swimming. It helps me lose weight and stay healthy. I always go swimming with my friends. We share laughter and unforgettable moments together.
All in all, swimming is my hobby and can always bring me a lot of fun.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、词汇短语运用、写作谋篇布局
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格遵循思维导图的四段式框架，准确点明主题；完整覆盖“娱乐的益处”“获取乐趣的方式”所有提示；运用给定核心词汇短语，语言表达准确丰富；开头结尾呼应，逻辑连贯，符合初中英语写作要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
