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假设你是李华，要参加一个主题为“Animals in Danger”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁人们保护濒危动物。
要点:1.介绍世界上有哪些濒危动物（至少两种）以及它们濒危的原因（至少两点）;2.谈谈保护濒危动物的措施（至少两点）;3.呼吁大家保护濒危动物。
要求:1.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;2.文中不得透露个人信息;3.词数70左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Animals in Danger
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. To-day I am going to talk about animals in danger.
假设你是李华，要参加一个主题为“Animals in Danger”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁人们保护濒危动物。
要点:1.介绍世界上有哪些濒危动物（至少两种）以及它们濒危的原因（至少两点）;2.谈谈保护濒危动物的措施（至少两点）;3.呼吁大家保护濒危动物。
要求:1.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;2.文中不得透露个人信息;3.词数70左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Animals in Danger
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. To-day I am going to talk about animals in danger.
Many animals are in danger in the world today, such as tigers and pandas and so on. They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer and fewer places for them to live in. Some people kill animals for their fur and meat.
We all need to help animals to live in peace. So it's very important to protect them.
We can raise some money at school to help protect the animals in danger.
We can stop people from killing animals.
If each of us can love animals, the world will be more beautiful.
Thanks for listening!
答案
One possible version:
Animals in Danger
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. Many animals are in danger in the world today, such as tigers and pandas and so on. They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer and fewer places for them to live in. Some people kill animals for their fur and meat.
We all need to help animals to live in peace. So it's very important to protect them. We can raise some money at school to help pro- tect the animals in danger. We can stop people from killing animals. If each of us can love ani- mals, the world will be more beautiful.
Thanks for listening!
Animals in Danger
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. Many animals are in danger in the world today, such as tigers and pandas and so on. They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer and fewer places for them to live in. Some people kill animals for their fur and meat.
We all need to help animals to live in peace. So it's very important to protect them. We can raise some money at school to help pro- tect the animals in danger. We can stop people from killing animals. If each of us can love ani- mals, the world will be more beautiful.
Thanks for listening!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语演讲稿写作题，主题是“Animals in Danger”，需严格围绕给定要点完成：1. 列举至少两种濒危动物及至少两点濒危原因；2. 提出至少两点保护措施；3. 发出保护呼吁。开头已给出，需承接开头，用简洁连贯的语言完成正文，注意词数约70，不得透露个人信息，契合演讲稿亲切且有号召力的语气。
【解析】
1. 承接开头后，先点明世界上的濒危动物（如tigers和pandas），再说明濒危原因：一是人类砍树导致它们的栖息地越来越少，二是有人为了皮毛和肉类猎杀动物；2. 接着提出保护措施：可在学校筹集资金帮助保护濒危动物，阻止人们猎杀动物；3. 最后发出呼吁，号召大家爱护动物，让世界更美好，结尾致谢。
【答案】
One possible version:
Animals in Danger
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. Many animals are in danger in the world today, such as tigers and pandas and so on. They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer and fewer places for them to live in. Some people kill animals for their fur and meat.
We all need to help animals to live in peace. So it's very important to protect them. We can raise some money at school to help protect the animals in danger. We can stop people from killing animals. If each of us can love animals, the world will be more beautiful.
Thanks for listening!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、濒危动物话题表达、要点式书面表达
【点评】
该作文紧扣主题，全面覆盖所有要点，语言简洁流畅，符合演讲稿的格式要求，呼吁真挚，词数达标，适合英语演讲比赛的要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语演讲稿写作题，主题是“Animals in Danger”，需严格围绕给定要点完成：1. 列举至少两种濒危动物及至少两点濒危原因；2. 提出至少两点保护措施；3. 发出保护呼吁。开头已给出，需承接开头，用简洁连贯的语言完成正文，注意词数约70，不得透露个人信息，契合演讲稿亲切且有号召力的语气。
【解析】
1. 承接开头后，先点明世界上的濒危动物（如tigers和pandas），再说明濒危原因：一是人类砍树导致它们的栖息地越来越少，二是有人为了皮毛和肉类猎杀动物；2. 接着提出保护措施：可在学校筹集资金帮助保护濒危动物，阻止人们猎杀动物；3. 最后发出呼吁，号召大家爱护动物，让世界更美好，结尾致谢。
【答案】
One possible version:
Animals in Danger
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. Many animals are in danger in the world today, such as tigers and pandas and so on. They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer and fewer places for them to live in. Some people kill animals for their fur and meat.
We all need to help animals to live in peace. So it's very important to protect them. We can raise some money at school to help protect the animals in danger. We can stop people from killing animals. If each of us can love animals, the world will be more beautiful.
Thanks for listening!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、濒危动物话题表达、要点式书面表达
【点评】
该作文紧扣主题，全面覆盖所有要点，语言简洁流畅，符合演讲稿的格式要求，呼吁真挚，词数达标，适合英语演讲比赛的要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
