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生活是丰富多彩的，没有爱好的人生是不完美的。在生活中，你有什么兴趣爱好？这个兴趣爱好是怎样培养起来的？它给你的生活增添了哪些色彩？请你以“My hobby”为题，结合自身经历写一篇英语短文。
要求:1. 包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3. 70词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
【写作指导】
本文是应用文写作,要求写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的业余爱好,根据提示可知:①人称:用第一人称;②时态:用一般现在时和一般过去时;③以爱好为主线,首先开门见山,交代自己具体的兴趣爱好名称或类型,然后叙述该爱好形成的故事和喜爱的原因,最后可以表达相关的收获与感受,并展望未来,从而辐射出不同良好爱好对于人的发展的意义。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
My hobby
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua.
生活是丰富多彩的，没有爱好的人生是不完美的。在生活中，你有什么兴趣爱好？这个兴趣爱好是怎样培养起来的？它给你的生活增添了哪些色彩？请你以“My hobby”为题，结合自身经历写一篇英语短文。
要求:1. 包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3. 70词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
【写作指导】
本文是应用文写作,要求写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的业余爱好,根据提示可知:①人称:用第一人称;②时态:用一般现在时和一般过去时;③以爱好为主线,首先开门见山,交代自己具体的兴趣爱好名称或类型,然后叙述该爱好形成的故事和喜爱的原因,最后可以表达相关的收获与感受,并展望未来,从而辐射出不同良好爱好对于人的发展的意义。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
My hobby
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua.
Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is climbing mountains.
I started climbing near my home when I was five years old. I was good at climbing at that time.
I joined a climbing club to learn more when I was fourteen years old. Climbing is my only hobby. I often climb mountains during the holidays.
Climbing makes me feel happy. It gives me energy. I want to climb some high mountains in the future.
答案
Period 7 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
My hobby
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is climbing mountains.
I started climbing near my home when I was five years old. I was good at climbing at that time. I joined a climbing club to learn more when I was fourteen years old. Climbing is my only hobby. I often climb mountains during the holidays.
Climbing makes me feel happy. It gives me energy. I want to climb some high mountains in the future.
One possible version:
My hobby
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is climbing mountains.
I started climbing near my home when I was five years old. I was good at climbing at that time. I joined a climbing club to learn more when I was fourteen years old. Climbing is my only hobby. I often climb mountains during the holidays.
Climbing makes me feel happy. It gives me energy. I want to climb some high mountains in the future.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语话题写作题，要求以“My hobby”为题，结合给定表格要点完成短文。解题思路为：1. 承接已给开头，先点明不同人有不同爱好及自己的爱好；2. 用一般过去时叙述爱好形成过程，包括开始时间、当时擅长的情况、加入相关俱乐部学习的经历；3. 阐述爱好的影响，说明带来的快乐和能量，可适当增加合理细节使内容充实；4. 注意人称用第一人称，时态结合一般现在时和一般过去时，字数控制在70左右，避免真实信息，确保行文连贯，覆盖所有给定要点。
【解析】
按照以下步骤写作：
1. 开头：承接已给句子，写出“Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is climbing mountains.”，明确爱好主题；
2. 爱好形成：用一般过去时表述：“I started climbing near my home when I was five years old. I was good at climbing at that time. I joined a climbing club to learn more when I was fourteen years old.”，覆盖表格中爱好形成的所有要点；
3. 爱好影响：写出“Climbing makes me feel happy. It gives me energy.”，覆盖影响要点，补充细节“I often climb mountains during the holidays.”使内容更丰富；
4. 确保语句通顺，时态正确，无真实姓名和校名，符合字数要求。
【答案】
My hobby
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is climbing mountains.
I started climbing near my home when I was five years old. I was good at climbing at that time. I joined a climbing club to learn more when I was fourteen years old. Climbing is my only hobby. I often climb mountains during the holidays.
Climbing makes me feel happy. It gives me energy. I want to climb some high mountains in the future.
【知识点】
英语话题写作, 记叙文写作, 英语应用文写作
【点评】
本题围绕单元主题“My hobby”展开，提供明确要点提示，既考查话题词汇、句型运用，又考查语言组织与连贯表达能力，符合初中英语写作考查要求，助力提升学生话题写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是英语话题写作题，要求以“My hobby”为题，结合给定表格要点完成短文。解题思路为：1. 承接已给开头，先点明不同人有不同爱好及自己的爱好；2. 用一般过去时叙述爱好形成过程，包括开始时间、当时擅长的情况、加入相关俱乐部学习的经历；3. 阐述爱好的影响，说明带来的快乐和能量，可适当增加合理细节使内容充实；4. 注意人称用第一人称，时态结合一般现在时和一般过去时，字数控制在70左右，避免真实信息，确保行文连贯，覆盖所有给定要点。
【解析】
按照以下步骤写作：
1. 开头：承接已给句子，写出“Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is climbing mountains.”，明确爱好主题；
2. 爱好形成：用一般过去时表述：“I started climbing near my home when I was five years old. I was good at climbing at that time. I joined a climbing club to learn more when I was fourteen years old.”，覆盖表格中爱好形成的所有要点；
3. 爱好影响：写出“Climbing makes me feel happy. It gives me energy.”，覆盖影响要点，补充细节“I often climb mountains during the holidays.”使内容更丰富；
4. 确保语句通顺，时态正确，无真实姓名和校名，符合字数要求。
【答案】
My hobby
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is climbing mountains.
I started climbing near my home when I was five years old. I was good at climbing at that time. I joined a climbing club to learn more when I was fourteen years old. Climbing is my only hobby. I often climb mountains during the holidays.
Climbing makes me feel happy. It gives me energy. I want to climb some high mountains in the future.
【知识点】
英语话题写作, 记叙文写作, 英语应用文写作
【点评】
本题围绕单元主题“My hobby”展开，提供明确要点提示，既考查话题词汇、句型运用，又考查语言组织与连贯表达能力，符合初中英语写作考查要求，助力提升学生话题写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
