假如李明是你的好朋友,请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,介绍一下李明的业余爱好。
提示:
1. 以前是一个电影迷,一周至少(at least)去两次电影院。
2. 现在的兴趣是集邮(collect stamps),认为集邮非常有趣,可以从邮票上学到很多有关人文、地理、历史等方面的知识,有些旧邮票非常有价值(valuable)。
3. 上周五是李明的生日,他从朋友那里得到了很多邮票,他非常高兴。
要求:
(1) 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2) 词数:不少于 70(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Li Ming is my good friend.


【高分范文】

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He was a film fan. He went to the film theatre at least twice a week.
Now Li Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it's great fun. He can learn a lot about people, geography, history and many other things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable.
Last Friday was Li Ming's birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy.
素材积累
【开头句】
1. My favourite hobby is ...
2. I like/love/enjoy ...
亮点赏析
文章符合写作提示要求，思路清晰，要点全面，分段明确，文章整体有层次感，时态句型运用得当。
连用“a film fan, twice a week, be interested in, learn a lot about”等单元目标短语，自然流畅地引出文章核心内容。
结合上文叙述，并用“He got many stamps from his friends.”交代出他开心的原因，逻辑性强，令人信服，给人以兴趣爱好带来的良好的价值体验。

【分析】本题要求根据提示写一篇介绍朋友李明业余爱好的英语短文，解题思路为：1. 承接已给开头句，先以一般过去时描述李明以前的爱好（电影迷，一周至少两次去电影院）；2. 转换为一般现在时介绍现在的爱好（集邮，说明集邮的乐趣、能学到的知识及旧邮票的价值）；3. 用一般过去时讲述上周五生日收到朋友邮票的事，确保所有提示要点覆盖，语句连贯，词数达标。
【解析】首先承接开头句“Li Ming is my good friend.”，补充说明李明有很多爱好，接着用一般过去时写他以前是电影迷，一周至少两次去电影院；再转用一般现在时，说明他现在对集邮感兴趣，认为集邮有趣，能从邮票上学到人文、地理、历史等知识，旧邮票很有价值；最后写他上周五生日时从朋友那里得到很多邮票，非常开心，确保所有提示要点齐全，行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He was a film fan. He went to the film theatre at least twice a week.
Now Li Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it's great fun. He can learn a lot about people, geography, history and many other things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable.
Last Friday was Li Ming's birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语时态运用、常用短语运用
【点评】短文紧扣写作提示，要点全面，时态运用准确（过去时对应过去事件、现在时对应当前爱好），语句连贯自然，使用了“at least”“be interested in”等常用短语，逻辑清晰，符合词数要求，很好地完成了介绍朋友业余爱好的写作任务。
【难度系数】0.3