七、书面表达(本题有1小题,共计20分)(真题·台州温岭)
76. 八年级生活即将结束,你会迎来一个轻松且漫长的暑假。这是一个放松身心、探索兴趣、承担责任,并为即将到来的九年级冲刺积蓄力量的黄金时期。你有什么暑期计划呢?请根据下图提示,以“My Summer Vacation”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你将如何安排假期,丰富你的暑假生活。
My Summer Vacation

要求:(1)短文须包含图中至少两方面信息以及所选择方面的所有要点,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)80词左右。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Summer Vacation
Summer vacation has always been a perfect time for me to explore new things.

One possible version:
My Summer Vacation
Summer vacation has always been a perfect time for me to explore new things.
In terms of health, I'll develop good eating habits, like eating more fruits and vegetables. Also, I'll make sure to get enough sleep, at least 8 hours every night. For hobbies, I plan to read two interesting books and watch some wonderful movies. I think reading can open my mind and movies can bring me fun. When it comes to housework, I'll help my mum do the dishes after meals and sweep the floor on weekends. It's a good way to learn life skills and show my love to my family.
I'm sure this summer vacation will be colourful and meaningful.
(101 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本文是一篇计划类记叙文,主题为“我的暑假安排”,需围绕“暑假的不同维度计划(健康、爱好、家务)”展开,突出“充实且有意义”的核心。写作需覆盖“what(具体计划)、why(计划的意义)”两个维度;时态以一般将来时(描述计划)为主;需分模块(健康、爱好、家务)呈现内容,每个模块补充具体细节与价值,使计划更具体、有说服力。
【提纲演示】
开篇:
点明暑假的定位
示例:Summer vacation has always been a perfect time for me to explore new things.
主体:
分模块阐述暑假计划
健康计划:
示例:In terms of health, I'll develop good eating habits ... Also, I'll make sure to get enough sleep.
爱好计划:
示例:For hobbies, I plan to read two interesting books and watch some wonderful movies ...
家务计划:
示例:When it comes to housework, I'll help my mum do the dishes ... It's a good way to learn life skills.
结尾:
展望暑假的效果
示例:I'm sure this summer vacation will be colourful and meaningful.
【写作要点】
分类逻辑:
用 in terms of/for/when it comes to 划分不同计划模块,使结构清晰
细节具象化:
将计划具体为“eat more fruits and vegetables”“read two books”“do the dishes”,避免空泛
价值关联:
为每个计划补充意义(如“reading can open my mind”“learn life skills”),提升内容深度
【主题拓展】
此类“假期计划”主题可延伸至寒假、小长假,核心逻辑为“分维度列计划+说明计划价值”,可替换模块(如“学习计划”“旅行计划”),通过补充具体任务(如“预习数学章节”“去海边旅行”)适配不同假期场景。

【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以“My Summer Vacation”为题写暑假计划，需包含图中至少两方面的所有要点，可适当发挥，80词左右，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 确定时态为一般将来时，用于描述计划；2. 围绕图中“Health（eating habits、enough sleep）、Hobbies（read books、watch movies）、Housework（do the dishes、sweep the floor）”三个模块展开，选择至少两个模块（此处选三个更贴合要求）；3. 每个模块补充具体细节和意义，让内容充实；4. 结尾总结展望，使文章完整。
【解析】
1. 开头：承接给定句子，自然过渡到暑假计划的阐述；
2. 主体部分：
健康方面：用“In terms of health”引出，对应图中“eating habits、enough sleep”，补充细节“多吃蔬果、每天至少睡8小时”；
爱好方面：用“For hobbies”引出，对应图中“read books、watch movies”，补充细节“读两本有趣的书、看精彩电影”，并说明意义“读书开阔思维、电影带来乐趣”；
家务方面：用“When it comes to housework”引出，对应图中“do the dishes、sweep the floor”，补充细节“饭后洗碗、周末扫地”，说明意义“学习生活技能、表达对家人的爱”；
3. 结尾：总结展望，表达对暑假的期待，符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Summer Vacation
Summer vacation has always been a perfect time for me to explore new things.
In terms of health, I'll develop good eating habits, like eating more fruits and vegetables. Also, I'll make sure to get enough sleep, at least 8 hours every night. For hobbies, I plan to read two interesting books and watch some wonderful movies. I think reading can open my mind and movies can bring me fun. When it comes to housework, I'll help my mum do the dishes after meals and sweep the floor on weekends. It's a good way to learn life skills and show my love to my family.
I'm sure this summer vacation will be colourful and meaningful.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；一般将来时；假期计划类写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，覆盖图中所有要点，结构清晰，分模块阐述计划，补充合理细节与意义，语言流畅自然，符合八年级英语写作要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6