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【写作导引】
本单元以“介绍自己和朋友”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①介绍自己或朋友；②如何交新朋友。
【写作任务】
假如你是Jenny，你到了一个新的班级后，想交到更多的朋友。请你根据下面的图片提示写一篇短文，向大家做一个自我介绍。
要求：1. 语言表达准确，语句通顺连贯，书写规范整洁。
2. 词数60左右。
Hello.
本单元以“介绍自己和朋友”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①介绍自己或朋友；②如何交新朋友。
【写作任务】
假如你是Jenny，你到了一个新的班级后，想交到更多的朋友。请你根据下面的图片提示写一篇短文，向大家做一个自我介绍。
要求：1. 语言表达准确，语句通顺连贯，书写规范整洁。
2. 词数60左右。
Hello.
答案
Hello. My name is Jenny Smith. I'm 12 years old. I come from Australia, but now I live in Shanghai. I like playing tennis very much. I have a pet cat and its name is Yoyo. My favourite food is roast duck. I have a good friend Tony, and I really want to make friends with all of you.
解析
【分析】本题要求以Jenny的身份进行自我介绍，需结合思维导图中的关键信息（姓名、年龄、国籍、居住地、爱好、宠物、喜爱的食物、朋友），按照逻辑顺序组织语言，做到语句通顺、要点齐全，词数符合要求。
【解析】首先点明自己的姓名Jenny Smith，接着说明年龄12岁；然后介绍国籍来自澳大利亚，现在居住在上海；再说明爱好是打网球，拥有一只叫Yoyo的宠物猫，最喜欢的食物是烤鸭；最后提及自己有个好朋友Tony，表达想和大家交朋友的意愿，将这些信息连贯地组织成短文即可。
【答案】Hello. My name is Jenny Smith. I'm 12 years old. I come from Australia, but now I live in Shanghai. I like playing tennis very much. I have a pet cat and its name is Yoyo. My favourite food is roast duck. I have a good friend Tony, and I really want to make friends with all of you.
【知识点】英语自我介绍写作、词汇运用、句子表达
【点评】短文完整涵盖了思维导图的所有要点，语言表达准确流畅，符合题目要求的词数，是一篇优秀的自我介绍范文。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】首先点明自己的姓名Jenny Smith，接着说明年龄12岁；然后介绍国籍来自澳大利亚，现在居住在上海；再说明爱好是打网球，拥有一只叫Yoyo的宠物猫，最喜欢的食物是烤鸭；最后提及自己有个好朋友Tony，表达想和大家交朋友的意愿，将这些信息连贯地组织成短文即可。
【答案】Hello. My name is Jenny Smith. I'm 12 years old. I come from Australia, but now I live in Shanghai. I like playing tennis very much. I have a pet cat and its name is Yoyo. My favourite food is roast duck. I have a good friend Tony, and I really want to make friends with all of you.
【知识点】英语自我介绍写作、词汇运用、句子表达
【点评】短文完整涵盖了思维导图的所有要点，语言表达准确流畅，符合题目要求的词数，是一篇优秀的自我介绍范文。
【难度系数】0.3
跟踪演练
时光飞逝，一个学期的初中生活马上就要结束了！相信你遇见了不少新朋友，请根据思维导图以“My Best Friend”为题写一篇英语短文介绍一下你最好的朋友。
要求：1. 必须包含导图中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名。
My Best Friend
Hello, everyone! I have a friend.
时光飞逝，一个学期的初中生活马上就要结束了！相信你遇见了不少新朋友，请根据思维导图以“My Best Friend”为题写一篇英语短文介绍一下你最好的朋友。
要求：1. 必须包含导图中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名。
My Best Friend
Hello, everyone! I have a friend.
His name is Wei Hui. He is 12 years old. He likes sports, and basketball is his favourite sport.
He always plays it with me after school.
Fruit and vegetables are his favourite food.
He says eating fruit and vegetables makes him healthy.
I like to play with Wei Hui because he always helps me a lot. Would you like to be his friend?
答案
写作提优练
范文：
My Best Friend
Hello, everyone! I have a friend. His name is Wei Hui. He is 12 years old. He likes sports, and basketball is his favourite sport. He always plays it with me after school. Fruit and vegetables are his favourite food. He says eating fruit and vegetables makes him healthy. I like to play with Wei Hui because he always helps me a lot. Would you like to be his friend?
范文：
My Best Friend
Hello, everyone! I have a friend. His name is Wei Hui. He is 12 years old. He likes sports, and basketball is his favourite sport. He always plays it with me after school. Fruit and vegetables are his favourite food. He says eating fruit and vegetables makes him healthy. I like to play with Wei Hui because he always helps me a lot. Would you like to be his friend?
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My Best Friend”为题写英语短文，需覆盖思维导图的所有信息（姓名、年龄、最喜欢的食物、最喜欢的运动、爱好等），开头已给出，需补充内容，字数60左右，且不能出现真实人名、地名、校名。解题思路：1. 承接开头，依次介绍朋友的姓名、年龄；2. 对应思维导图的“最喜欢的运动”，补充相关细节（如和自己课后一起玩）；3. 对应“最喜欢的食物”，补充简单原因；4. 可适当添加与朋友相处的小细节，确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头，介绍朋友的姓名与年龄；接着说明其最喜欢的运动（如篮球），补充课后一起玩的细节；再说明最喜欢的食物（如水果和蔬菜），简单提及原因；最后添加与朋友相处的细节，使内容完整，覆盖所有导图要点，语言通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】
My Best Friend
Hello, everyone! I have a friend. His name is Wei Hui. He is 12 years old. He likes sports, and basketball is his favourite sport. He always plays it with me after school. Fruit and vegetables are his favourite food. He says eating fruit and vegetables makes him healthy. I like to play with Wei Hui because he always helps me a lot. Would you like to be his friend?
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图所有要点，内容完整，语言通顺，符合字数要求，适当添加了合理细节，满足题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以“My Best Friend”为题写英语短文，需覆盖思维导图的所有信息（姓名、年龄、最喜欢的食物、最喜欢的运动、爱好等），开头已给出，需补充内容，字数60左右，且不能出现真实人名、地名、校名。解题思路：1. 承接开头，依次介绍朋友的姓名、年龄；2. 对应思维导图的“最喜欢的运动”，补充相关细节（如和自己课后一起玩）；3. 对应“最喜欢的食物”，补充简单原因；4. 可适当添加与朋友相处的小细节，确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头，介绍朋友的姓名与年龄；接着说明其最喜欢的运动（如篮球），补充课后一起玩的细节；再说明最喜欢的食物（如水果和蔬菜），简单提及原因；最后添加与朋友相处的细节，使内容完整，覆盖所有导图要点，语言通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】
My Best Friend
Hello, everyone! I have a friend. His name is Wei Hui. He is 12 years old. He likes sports, and basketball is his favourite sport. He always plays it with me after school. Fruit and vegetables are his favourite food. He says eating fruit and vegetables makes him healthy. I like to play with Wei Hui because he always helps me a lot. Would you like to be his friend?
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图所有要点，内容完整，语言通顺，符合字数要求，适当添加了合理细节，满足题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
