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七、书面表达。假如你是某学校六年级的学生圳圳，你所在的社团正举办以“我认为重要的发明”为主题的分享会。请根据以下要点来完成你的发言稿。
要点:1.说出你认为重要的发明是什么;2.简述有该发明之前,人们的生活是什么样的;3.简述有了该发明后,人们的生活有什么变化。
要求:1.标点正确,书写规范;2.文中不得出现真实校名和姓名;3.不少于70词。
The important invention of
要点:1.说出你认为重要的发明是什么;2.简述有该发明之前,人们的生活是什么样的;3.简述有了该发明后,人们的生活有什么变化。
要求:1.标点正确,书写规范;2.文中不得出现真实校名和姓名;3.不少于70词。
The important invention of
答案
The important invention of smartphones
I think the smartphone is an important in-
vention in our lives. Before the invention of
smartphones, people used computers to find in-
formation. They could talk to others on comput-
ers. They also listened to music or watched vid-
eos on computers for fun. But people only used
computers at home. If they went out, they could
not go with computers and surf the internet. But
after the invention of smartphones, people ’s
lives change a lot. People can look up some-
thing anywhere they go. People can talk to oth-
ers anytime. It’s easier for people to listen to mu-
sic or watch videos on the internet with smart-
phones.
I think the smartphone is an important in-
vention in our lives. Before the invention of
smartphones, people used computers to find in-
formation. They could talk to others on comput-
ers. They also listened to music or watched vid-
eos on computers for fun. But people only used
computers at home. If they went out, they could
not go with computers and surf the internet. But
after the invention of smartphones, people ’s
lives change a lot. People can look up some-
thing anywhere they go. People can talk to oth-
ers anytime. It’s easier for people to listen to mu-
sic or watch videos on the internet with smart-
phones.
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书面表达题，主题为“我认为重要的发明”，需紧扣三个核心要点完成发言稿：一是明确自己认为重要的发明；二是简述该发明出现前人们的生活状态；三是简述该发明出现后人们的生活变化。解题时需先选定贴近日常的发明（如智能手机），再分别围绕发明前后的生活场景展开描述，确保语言通顺、符合词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 确定核心发明：选取智能手机作为重要发明；2. 描述发明前的生活：人们主要依赖电脑获取信息、交流、娱乐，但电脑仅能在家使用，外出时无法携带使用；3. 描述发明后的变化：智能手机让人们可随时随地查信息、随时沟通，便捷开展娱乐活动，生活更便利；4. 组织语言，保证标点正确、书写规范，词数不少于70，不出现真实校名和姓名。
【答案】The important invention of smartphones
I think the smartphone is an important invention in our lives. Before the invention of smartphones, people used computers to find information. They could talk to others on computers. They also listened to music or watched videos on computers for fun. But people only used computers at home. If they went out, they could not go with computers and surf the internet. But after the invention of smartphones, people’s lives change a lot. People can look up something anywhere they go. People can talk to others anytime. It’s easier for people to listen to music or watch videos on the internet with smartphones.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作、话题写作
【点评】本题考查六年级学生的英语写作能力，要求学生围绕指定主题梳理要点，清晰对比发明前后的生活变化，注重语言的实用性和规范性，符合学生的英语学习水平，是常见的话题写作题型。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 确定核心发明：选取智能手机作为重要发明；2. 描述发明前的生活：人们主要依赖电脑获取信息、交流、娱乐，但电脑仅能在家使用，外出时无法携带使用；3. 描述发明后的变化：智能手机让人们可随时随地查信息、随时沟通，便捷开展娱乐活动，生活更便利；4. 组织语言，保证标点正确、书写规范，词数不少于70，不出现真实校名和姓名。
【答案】The important invention of smartphones
I think the smartphone is an important invention in our lives. Before the invention of smartphones, people used computers to find information. They could talk to others on computers. They also listened to music or watched videos on computers for fun. But people only used computers at home. If they went out, they could not go with computers and surf the internet. But after the invention of smartphones, people’s lives change a lot. People can look up something anywhere they go. People can talk to others anytime. It’s easier for people to listen to music or watch videos on the internet with smartphones.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作、话题写作
【点评】本题考查六年级学生的英语写作能力，要求学生围绕指定主题梳理要点，清晰对比发明前后的生活变化，注重语言的实用性和规范性，符合学生的英语学习水平，是常见的话题写作题型。
【难度系数】0.7
A
(体裁:说明文 话题:出行方式的变化与发展 难易度:☆☆☆)
① Long ago, people walked everywhere.
② Then, the wheel changed everything. People invented carts. They used carts to travel or carry things.
③ The steam engine(蒸汽机) arrived. It made trains move fast.
④ Soon, cars appeared. Cars let people travel by road easily.
⑤ The biggest change came with airplanes. The Wright Brothers flew the first plane. Then jets made air travel common.
⑥ Today, we have high-speed trains and electric cars. The electric cars are good for the environment(环境). They make our lives more convenient.
[新趋势·多模态语篇]阅读上面的绘本,判断句子正误,正确的写"A",错误的写"B"。
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(体裁:说明文 话题:出行方式的变化与发展 难易度:☆☆☆)
① Long ago, people walked everywhere.
② Then, the wheel changed everything. People invented carts. They used carts to travel or carry things.
③ The steam engine(蒸汽机) arrived. It made trains move fast.
④ Soon, cars appeared. Cars let people travel by road easily.
⑤ The biggest change came with airplanes. The Wright Brothers flew the first plane. Then jets made air travel common.
⑥ Today, we have high-speed trains and electric cars. The electric cars are good for the environment(环境). They make our lives more convenient.
[新趋势·多模态语篇]阅读上面的绘本,判断句子正误,正确的写"A",错误的写"B"。
(
A
) 1. The cart was pulled by a horse. It could be used to carry heavy things.(
A
) 2. The train came earlier than the car.(
A
) 3. The Wright Brothers flew the first plane.(
B
) 4. Electric cars are good for the environment. They are powered by steam engines.(
B
) 5. The word "convenient" means "智慧的".答案
1.A 2.A 3.A 4.B 5.B
解析
【分析】
本题为阅读理解正误判断题，需逐题定位原文对应信息，对比题干表述与原文内容是否一致，同时注意词义猜测的准确性，逐一判断每道题的对错。
【解析】
1. 定位原文第②段：“People invented carts. They used carts to travel or carry things.” 题干表述马车可用于搬运重物，与原文一致，故正确，填A。
2. 定位原文第③段（火车出现）和第④段（汽车出现）：火车出现早于汽车，题干表述正确，填A。
3. 定位原文第⑤段：“The Wright Brothers flew the first plane.” 与题干表述一致，填A。
4. 定位原文第⑥段：“The electric cars are good for the environment.” 但蒸汽机是火车的动力，电动车并非由蒸汽机驱动，题干后半句错误，整体填B。
5. convenient意为“方便的”，并非“智慧的”，题干表述错误，填B。
【答案】
1.A 2.A 3.A 4.B 5.B
【知识点】
细节理解、词义猜测、阅读理解
【点评】
本题围绕出行方式的发展展开，通过判断正误考查学生对原文细节的定位能力和词义理解，难度不大，需细心比对原文信息。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为阅读理解正误判断题，需逐题定位原文对应信息，对比题干表述与原文内容是否一致，同时注意词义猜测的准确性，逐一判断每道题的对错。
【解析】
1. 定位原文第②段：“People invented carts. They used carts to travel or carry things.” 题干表述马车可用于搬运重物，与原文一致，故正确，填A。
2. 定位原文第③段（火车出现）和第④段（汽车出现）：火车出现早于汽车，题干表述正确，填A。
3. 定位原文第⑤段：“The Wright Brothers flew the first plane.” 与题干表述一致，填A。
4. 定位原文第⑥段：“The electric cars are good for the environment.” 但蒸汽机是火车的动力，电动车并非由蒸汽机驱动，题干后半句错误，整体填B。
5. convenient意为“方便的”，并非“智慧的”，题干表述错误，填B。
【答案】
1.A 2.A 3.A 4.B 5.B
【知识点】
细节理解、词义猜测、阅读理解
【点评】
本题围绕出行方式的发展展开，通过判断正误考查学生对原文细节的定位能力和词义理解，难度不大，需细心比对原文信息。
【难度系数】
0.5
