素材积累
【开头句】
1. ... is my favourite day.
2. I go to school from Monday to Friday.
3. Let me tell you something about my school day.
【中间句】
1. Our class begins at ...
2. I have ... in the morning.
3. There are different activities ... in the afternoon.
【结尾句】
1. That's my life.
2. I have a good time ... at school.
3. It's a great school day—busy but good fun.
实战演练
为展现丰富多彩的校园生活,学校将举办题为“My favourite day at school”的英语征文活动。请你选择你最喜欢的一天,结合当天相关活动的安排,与同学们分享你的感受。内容包括:● What day do you like best?
● What is your favourite subject?
● What activities do you have after class?
要求:1.词数不少于70(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
【写作指导】
本文要求选择你最喜欢的一天,结合活动安排,并分享你的感受。根据提示可知:① 人称:用第一人称;② 时态:用一般现在时;③ 开头引出主题,中间介绍各项活动,结尾表达感受。
【写作提纲】
| My favourite day at school | 分类 | 内容 |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
| | Favourite day | ... is my favourite day. It is a really ... day. |
| | Activities | On Friday morning, I have ... classes. |
| | | In th图fternoon, there are different activities ... |
| | | I am in/on ... team. |
| | Feeling(感受) | I have a good time ... |
【小试身手】
My favourite day at school
Friday is my favourite day. It is a really busy day.
I have a good time every Friday at school.
【开头句】
1. ... is my favourite day.
2. I go to school from Monday to Friday.
3. Let me tell you something about my school day.
【中间句】
1. Our class begins at ...
2. I have ... in the morning.
3. There are different activities ... in the afternoon.
【结尾句】
1. That's my life.
2. I have a good time ... at school.
3. It's a great school day—busy but good fun.
实战演练
为展现丰富多彩的校园生活,学校将举办题为“My favourite day at school”的英语征文活动。请你选择你最喜欢的一天,结合当天相关活动的安排,与同学们分享你的感受。内容包括:● What day do you like best?
● What is your favourite subject?
● What activities do you have after class?
要求:1.词数不少于70(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
【写作指导】
本文要求选择你最喜欢的一天,结合活动安排,并分享你的感受。根据提示可知:① 人称:用第一人称;② 时态:用一般现在时;③ 开头引出主题,中间介绍各项活动,结尾表达感受。
【写作提纲】
| My favourite day at school | 分类 | 内容 |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
| | Favourite day | ... is my favourite day. It is a really ... day. |
| | Activities | On Friday morning, I have ... classes. |
| | | In th图fternoon, there are different activities ... |
| | | I am in/on ... team. |
| | Feeling(感受) | I have a good time ... |
【小试身手】
My favourite day at school
Friday is my favourite day. It is a really busy day.
I have a good time every Friday at school.
答案
Period 7 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
My favourite day at school
Friday is my favourite day. It is a really busy day.
On Friday morning, I have four different classes. Of all the subjects, I like English best because my English teacher is great. He always makes his classes interesting. He also tells us something about English festivals and art. In the afternoon, there are different activities in the school. I am on the basketball team. We often have basketball games with students from other schools. The games are always exciting because everyone tries their best to win.
I have a good time every Friday at school.
One possible version:
My favourite day at school
Friday is my favourite day. It is a really busy day.
On Friday morning, I have four different classes. Of all the subjects, I like English best because my English teacher is great. He always makes his classes interesting. He also tells us something about English festivals and art. In the afternoon, there are different activities in the school. I am on the basketball team. We often have basketball games with students from other schools. The games are always exciting because everyone tries their best to win.
I have a good time every Friday at school.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是围绕“My favourite day at school”写英语征文,需涵盖三个核心要点:最喜欢的日期、最喜欢的科目、课后活动。解题思路:1. 开头用给定句子引出最喜欢的一天(如周五);2. 中间部分先介绍上午课程,自然点明最喜欢的科目及原因,再说明下午的课后活动;3. 结尾用给定感受句总结,确保用一般现在时、第一人称,词数达标且无真实人名校名。
【解析】
写作步骤:① 确定主题核心:选定周五作为最喜欢的一天;② 中间段落:上午介绍课程,引出最喜欢的科目(英语),结合老师的特点说明喜欢的原因;下午介绍课后活动(加入篮球队,参与校际篮球赛);③ 结尾表达在周五的愉快感受,完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点,语言连贯,时态正确,满足词数要求。
【答案】
My favourite day at school
Friday is my favourite day. It is a really busy day.
On Friday morning, I have four different classes. Of all the subjects, I like English best because my English teacher is great. He always makes his classes interesting. He also tells us something about English festivals and art. In the afternoon, there are different activities in the school. I am on the basketball team. We often have basketball games with students from other schools. The games are always exciting because everyone tries their best to win.
I have a good time every Friday at school.
【知识点】
英语单元主题写作、一般现在时运用、校园话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文要求,完整覆盖指定要点,时态正确,语言流畅自然,符合初中英语写作规范,是一篇优秀的单元主题写作范文,能为学生提供清晰的写作思路参考。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作任务是围绕“My favourite day at school”写英语征文,需涵盖三个核心要点:最喜欢的日期、最喜欢的科目、课后活动。解题思路:1. 开头用给定句子引出最喜欢的一天(如周五);2. 中间部分先介绍上午课程,自然点明最喜欢的科目及原因,再说明下午的课后活动;3. 结尾用给定感受句总结,确保用一般现在时、第一人称,词数达标且无真实人名校名。
【解析】
写作步骤:① 确定主题核心:选定周五作为最喜欢的一天;② 中间段落:上午介绍课程,引出最喜欢的科目(英语),结合老师的特点说明喜欢的原因;下午介绍课后活动(加入篮球队,参与校际篮球赛);③ 结尾表达在周五的愉快感受,完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点,语言连贯,时态正确,满足词数要求。
【答案】
My favourite day at school
Friday is my favourite day. It is a really busy day.
On Friday morning, I have four different classes. Of all the subjects, I like English best because my English teacher is great. He always makes his classes interesting. He also tells us something about English festivals and art. In the afternoon, there are different activities in the school. I am on the basketball team. We often have basketball games with students from other schools. The games are always exciting because everyone tries their best to win.
I have a good time every Friday at school.
【知识点】
英语单元主题写作、一般现在时运用、校园话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文要求,完整覆盖指定要点,时态正确,语言流畅自然,符合初中英语写作规范,是一篇优秀的单元主题写作范文,能为学生提供清晰的写作思路参考。
【难度系数】
0.5
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