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现今世界上有很多动物处于危险之中,请选一种濒危动物,以“An animal in danger”为题写一篇作文,包含以下内容。
提示:1. 所处现状;2. 濒危原因;3. 采取措施。
注意事项:1. 80词左右。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【写作指导】
这是一篇材料作文,根据提示可知:① 人称:用第一、三人称;② 时态:一般现在时、一般将来时;③ 写作步骤为:第一步,表明写作意图,介绍一种濒危动物;第二步,具体介绍这种濒危动物所处的现状、濒危的原因以及应采取什么措施保护它们;第三步,书写结语,呼吁人们保护濒危动物。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
An animal in danger
提示:1. 所处现状;2. 濒危原因;3. 采取措施。
注意事项:1. 80词左右。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【写作指导】
这是一篇材料作文,根据提示可知:① 人称:用第一、三人称;② 时态:一般现在时、一般将来时;③ 写作步骤为:第一步,表明写作意图,介绍一种濒危动物;第二步,具体介绍这种濒危动物所处的现状、濒危的原因以及应采取什么措施保护它们;第三步,书写结语,呼吁人们保护濒危动物。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
An animal in danger
Pandas live in the forests and mountains of the southwest of China. They are in danger and the situation is getting very difficult.
First, pandas do not have many babies, and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat a lot of bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
So scientists are doing a lot of research to help baby pandas live. The government is setting up nature parks with a lot of bamboo to feed and protect pandas. The WWF chose the panda to be its symbol and is working hard to save all animals in danger. If we try our best to protect them, the number of pandas will be larger and larger. Our world will become more beautiful.
答案
One possible version:
An animal in danger
Pandas live in the forests and mountains of the southwest of China. They are in danger and the situation is getting very difficult.
First, pandas do not have many babies, and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat a lot of bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
So scientists are doing a lot of research to help baby pandas live. The government is setting up nature parks with a lot of bamboo to feed and protect pandas. The WWF chose the panda to be its symbol and is working hard to save all animals in danger.
If we try our best to protect them, the number of pandas will be larger and larger. Our world will become more beautiful.
An animal in danger
Pandas live in the forests and mountains of the southwest of China. They are in danger and the situation is getting very difficult.
First, pandas do not have many babies, and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat a lot of bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
So scientists are doing a lot of research to help baby pandas live. The government is setting up nature parks with a lot of bamboo to feed and protect pandas. The WWF chose the panda to be its symbol and is working hard to save all animals in danger.
If we try our best to protect them, the number of pandas will be larger and larger. Our world will become more beautiful.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语材料作文，要求以“An animal in danger”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，需包含濒危动物的现状、濒危原因、保护措施三个核心内容。解题思路：1. 选定典型濒危动物（如熊猫），开篇介绍其栖息地及濒危现状；2. 从繁殖、生存环境等角度说明濒危原因；3. 阐述科学家、政府等采取的保护措施；4. 结尾呼吁保护濒危动物，展望未来。写作时以一般现在时为主，适当用一般将来时，确保语句连贯、要点齐全。
【解析】
按照写作要求分段落完成：
第一段：介绍熊猫的栖息地与现状，点明其濒危处境；
第二段：说明濒危原因，即繁殖数量少、幼崽存活率低，以及食物/栖息地减少；
第三段：阐述保护措施（科研、政府建自然公园等），最后总结呼吁保护。
【答案】
An animal in danger
Pandas live in the forests and mountains of the southwest of China. They are in danger and the situation is getting very difficult.
First, pandas do not have many babies, and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat a lot of bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
So scientists are doing a lot of research to help baby pandas live. The government is setting up nature parks with a lot of bamboo to feed and protect pandas. The WWF chose the panda to be its symbol and is working hard to save all animals in danger.
If we try our best to protect them, the number of pandas will be larger and larger. Our world will become more beautiful.
【知识点】
英语材料作文，濒危动物话题写作
【点评】
本题围绕濒危动物话题考查英语写作能力，要求学生紧扣给定提纲，合理组织语言，补充细节使行文连贯，既考查词汇运用，也考查语句衔接能力，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语材料作文，要求以“An animal in danger”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，需包含濒危动物的现状、濒危原因、保护措施三个核心内容。解题思路：1. 选定典型濒危动物（如熊猫），开篇介绍其栖息地及濒危现状；2. 从繁殖、生存环境等角度说明濒危原因；3. 阐述科学家、政府等采取的保护措施；4. 结尾呼吁保护濒危动物，展望未来。写作时以一般现在时为主，适当用一般将来时，确保语句连贯、要点齐全。
【解析】
按照写作要求分段落完成：
第一段：介绍熊猫的栖息地与现状，点明其濒危处境；
第二段：说明濒危原因，即繁殖数量少、幼崽存活率低，以及食物/栖息地减少；
第三段：阐述保护措施（科研、政府建自然公园等），最后总结呼吁保护。
【答案】
An animal in danger
Pandas live in the forests and mountains of the southwest of China. They are in danger and the situation is getting very difficult.
First, pandas do not have many babies, and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat a lot of bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
So scientists are doing a lot of research to help baby pandas live. The government is setting up nature parks with a lot of bamboo to feed and protect pandas. The WWF chose the panda to be its symbol and is working hard to save all animals in danger.
If we try our best to protect them, the number of pandas will be larger and larger. Our world will become more beautiful.
【知识点】
英语材料作文，濒危动物话题写作
【点评】
本题围绕濒危动物话题考查英语写作能力，要求学生紧扣给定提纲，合理组织语言，补充细节使行文连贯，既考查词汇运用，也考查语句衔接能力，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
