登录
写作实战演练
讲好中国故事,传播中国声音。China Daily网站中的Culture版块正在进行以“Tell a Traditional Chinese Story”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据提示以“My Favourite Traditional Chinese Story”为题写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:1. 可描述愚公移山的故事内容；
2. 故事给你的影响和启发。
注意:1. 提示内容仅供参考；
2. 词数90左右；标题已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Story
讲好中国故事,传播中国声音。China Daily网站中的Culture版块正在进行以“Tell a Traditional Chinese Story”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据提示以“My Favourite Traditional Chinese Story”为题写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:1. 可描述愚公移山的故事内容；
2. 故事给你的影响和启发。
注意:1. 提示内容仅供参考；
2. 词数90左右；标题已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Story
There are many traditional stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like Yugong Moves the Mountains best.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yugong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains.
Yugong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
答案
One possible version:
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Story
There are many traditional stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like Yugong Moves the Mountains best.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yugong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yugong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Story
There are many traditional stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like Yugong Moves the Mountains best.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yugong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yugong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是China Daily Culture版块的征文，主题为“Tell a Traditional Chinese Story”，要求以李华身份写“My Favourite Traditional Chinese Story”，需包含故事内容和启发，词数90左右。解题思路：1. 选经典易写的中国传统故事“愚公移山”；2. 采用三段式结构：开头点出最喜欢的故事，中间简述核心情节，结尾点明启发；3. 用简单英语词汇和句式，控制词数，符合征文要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头段：直接点明最喜欢的中国传统故事是愚公移山，呼应主题；2. 主体段：简述故事核心：从前愚公家旁有两座大山，出行不便，他带家人日复一日移山，感动神仙，神仙移走了山；3. 结尾段：点明启发：只要努力不放弃，没有不可能。注意语言简洁，词数控制在90左右，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Story
There are many traditional stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like Yugong Moves the Mountains best.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yugong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yugong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、中国传统故事英语表达、英语写作结构安排
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，先点题再叙事再谈启发，内容完整覆盖提示要求，语言简单规范，准确传达了故事内涵和积极向上的启发，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的参赛短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作任务是China Daily Culture版块的征文，主题为“Tell a Traditional Chinese Story”，要求以李华身份写“My Favourite Traditional Chinese Story”，需包含故事内容和启发，词数90左右。解题思路：1. 选经典易写的中国传统故事“愚公移山”；2. 采用三段式结构：开头点出最喜欢的故事，中间简述核心情节，结尾点明启发；3. 用简单英语词汇和句式，控制词数，符合征文要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头段：直接点明最喜欢的中国传统故事是愚公移山，呼应主题；2. 主体段：简述故事核心：从前愚公家旁有两座大山，出行不便，他带家人日复一日移山，感动神仙，神仙移走了山；3. 结尾段：点明启发：只要努力不放弃，没有不可能。注意语言简洁，词数控制在90左右，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Story
There are many traditional stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like Yugong Moves the Mountains best.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yugong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yugong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、中国传统故事英语表达、英语写作结构安排
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，先点题再叙事再谈启发，内容完整覆盖提示要求，语言简单规范，准确传达了故事内涵和积极向上的启发，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的参赛短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
