高分作文赏析
童话故事是世界文学宝库中的常青树，一直深受青少年的喜爱。你读过哪些童话故事？请你以“My Favourite Story”为题，讲述一个令你印象最深刻的童话故事。
提示:1. What’s the name of it?
2. Who is in it?
3. What’s the story?
4. What do you think of it?
注意:1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 词数80左右；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite Story


谋篇布局
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谋篇布局填空：
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时（介绍个人喜好）+一般过去时（讲述故事情节）
完整参考范文：
My Favourite Story
I love reading and I read many books. My favourite story is *The Three Little Pigs*.
There were three little pigs in the story. They built their own houses. The first pig built a straw house, the second built a wooden house, and the third built a strong brick house. A wolf destroyed the first two houses easily, but he could not break down the brick house. At last the clever third pig killed the wolf.
I love this story because it tells us the importance of hard work.

【分析】
本题要求以“My Favourite Story”为题写英语短文，需紧扣提示的四个核心要点（故事名称、角色、情节、个人看法），同时注意时态切换（介绍喜好用一般现在时，讲述故事情节用一般过去时）、人称（第一人称）、词数（80左右）及行文连贯的要求，需选择熟悉的经典童话故事，确保内容清晰易懂、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定写作内容：选取学生熟悉的经典童话《三只小猪》（The Three Little Pigs）；
2. 结构安排：开头点明最喜欢的故事；中间介绍故事角色（三只小猪）及核心情节（建不同材质的房子、狼来袭的过程）；结尾表达个人感悟；
3. 语言运用：注意时态正确切换，用词简洁准确，控制词数在要求范围内，避免出现真实姓名、学校等信息，保证行文连贯。
【答案】
My Favourite Story
I love reading and I read many books. My favourite story is *The Three Little Pigs*.
There were three little pigs in the story. They built their own houses. The first pig built a straw house, the second built a wooden house, and the third built a strong brick house. A wolf destroyed the first two houses easily, but he could not break down the brick house. At last the clever third pig killed the wolf.
I love this story because it tells us the importance of hard work.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、时态正确运用、故事类作文表达
【点评】
本题为英语话题作文，贴近学生日常阅读积累，提示清晰明确，既考查学生的英语语言组织能力，又引导学生表达对故事的理解，是基础且实用的写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.7