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Ⅲ. 书面表达
假如你所在的学校英语社团正在开展"我的职业梦想"主题征文活动，邀请同学们分享对职业的认知与个人职业追求。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。
(1) 简要阐述你对职业意义的看法(如职业与个人价值、生活的关系等)。
(2) 明确你的职业梦想是什么(如医生、程序员等)。
(3) 说明你喜欢这个职业的至少两个原因(可结合职业特点、个人兴趣、社会价值等)。
参考词汇：程序员 programmer
写作要求：
(1) 词数：80—100。
(2) 题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
My career dream
Everyone has their own views on careers and career dreams.
假如你所在的学校英语社团正在开展"我的职业梦想"主题征文活动，邀请同学们分享对职业的认知与个人职业追求。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。
(1) 简要阐述你对职业意义的看法(如职业与个人价值、生活的关系等)。
(2) 明确你的职业梦想是什么(如医生、程序员等)。
(3) 说明你喜欢这个职业的至少两个原因(可结合职业特点、个人兴趣、社会价值等)。
参考词汇：程序员 programmer
写作要求：
(1) 词数：80—100。
(2) 题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
My career dream
Everyone has their own views on careers and career dreams.
I think a career is not just a way to make a living. It is also a path to realize personal value.
My career dream is to be a programmer. First, I love creating things. Programmers can build useful apps or software to solve real-life problems. Doing the job can help me find a sense of achievement. Second, new technology springs up quickly, and this job lets me keep learning new skills.
I'll work hard now to make my dream come true, as every effort will help me get ready for this meaningful career.
My career dream is to be a programmer. First, I love creating things. Programmers can build useful apps or software to solve real-life problems. Doing the job can help me find a sense of achievement. Second, new technology springs up quickly, and this job lets me keep learning new skills.
I'll work hard now to make my dream come true, as every effort will help me get ready for this meaningful career.
答案
Ⅲ. (One possible version)
My Career Dream
Everyone has their own views on careers and career
dreams. I think a career is not just a way to make a
living. It is also a path to realize personal value.
My career dream is to be a programmer. First, I love
creating things. Programmers can build useful apps or
software to solve real-life problems. Doing the job can help
me find a sense of achievement. Second, new technology
springs up quickly, and this job lets me keep learning
new skills.
I'll work hard now to make my dream come true, as
every effort will help me get ready for this meaningful
career.
My Career Dream
Everyone has their own views on careers and career
dreams. I think a career is not just a way to make a
living. It is also a path to realize personal value.
My career dream is to be a programmer. First, I love
creating things. Programmers can build useful apps or
software to solve real-life problems. Doing the job can help
me find a sense of achievement. Second, new technology
springs up quickly, and this job lets me keep learning
new skills.
I'll work hard now to make my dream come true, as
every effort will help me get ready for this meaningful
career.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先标记出题干明确要求的三个核心要点，避免写作时出现遗漏：第一要阐述对职业意义的看法，关联职业和生活、个人价值的关系；第二要明确点明自己的梦想职业；第三要给出至少两个选择该职业的合理原因。接下来承接已经给出的开头句，先完成第一个要点，用简单地道的表达说明职业不只是谋生的手段，更是实现个人价值的路径；之后直接点明梦想职业是题干给出参考词汇的程序员，避免使用生僻词汇出错；再构思两个逻辑通顺的原因，第一个结合个人兴趣和社会价值，说明程序员可以开发实用软件解决现实问题、获得成就感，第二个结合职业特点，说明行业技术迭代快可以督促自己持续学习新技能；最后补充一句简短的奋斗表态，调整语句衔接，把总词数控制在80-100区间，检查语法无误就完成写作。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，完成第一个要点：清晰表达自己对职业的认知，说明职业不只是谋生的方式，更是实现个人价值的路径，符合题干对职业意义阐述的要求。
2. 点题明确梦想职业：直接说明自己的职业梦想是成为程序员，选用题干给出的参考词汇，避免拼写错误。
3. 完成原因阐述部分：依次给出两个支撑理由，一是自身热爱创造，程序员可以开发实用应用、软件解决现实问题，能获得成就感；二是科技行业更新速度快，这份工作可以让自己持续学习新技能，满足至少两个原因的要求。
4. 收尾补充表态：说明自己会努力奋斗实现梦想，行文连贯流畅，整体词数控制在要求的80-100范围内，所有要点无遗漏。
【答案】
My career dream
Everyone has their own views on careers and career dreams. I think a career is not just a way to make a living. It is also a path to realize personal value.
My career dream is to be a programmer. First, I love creating things. Programmers can build useful apps or software to solve real-life problems. Doing the job can help me find a sense of achievement. Second, new technology springs up quickly, and this job lets me keep learning new skills.
I'll work hard now to make my dream come true, as every effort will help me get ready for this meaningful career.
【知识点】
职业主题写作，要点类书面表达，英语短文谋篇布局
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题干所有写作要求，三个核心要点全部覆盖，行文逻辑层层递进，从职业认知到点明梦想，再到原因阐述、收尾表态衔接自然，用到的短语表达地道准确，词数符合80-100的限定要求，没有冗余内容，适配本次征文投稿的场景，学生可以参考这类提示类作文的写作思路，优先选用题干给出的参考词汇降低出错概率。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先标记出题干明确要求的三个核心要点，避免写作时出现遗漏：第一要阐述对职业意义的看法，关联职业和生活、个人价值的关系；第二要明确点明自己的梦想职业；第三要给出至少两个选择该职业的合理原因。接下来承接已经给出的开头句，先完成第一个要点，用简单地道的表达说明职业不只是谋生的手段，更是实现个人价值的路径；之后直接点明梦想职业是题干给出参考词汇的程序员，避免使用生僻词汇出错；再构思两个逻辑通顺的原因，第一个结合个人兴趣和社会价值，说明程序员可以开发实用软件解决现实问题、获得成就感，第二个结合职业特点，说明行业技术迭代快可以督促自己持续学习新技能；最后补充一句简短的奋斗表态，调整语句衔接，把总词数控制在80-100区间，检查语法无误就完成写作。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，完成第一个要点：清晰表达自己对职业的认知，说明职业不只是谋生的方式，更是实现个人价值的路径，符合题干对职业意义阐述的要求。
2. 点题明确梦想职业：直接说明自己的职业梦想是成为程序员，选用题干给出的参考词汇，避免拼写错误。
3. 完成原因阐述部分：依次给出两个支撑理由，一是自身热爱创造，程序员可以开发实用应用、软件解决现实问题，能获得成就感；二是科技行业更新速度快，这份工作可以让自己持续学习新技能，满足至少两个原因的要求。
4. 收尾补充表态：说明自己会努力奋斗实现梦想，行文连贯流畅，整体词数控制在要求的80-100范围内，所有要点无遗漏。
【答案】
My career dream
Everyone has their own views on careers and career dreams. I think a career is not just a way to make a living. It is also a path to realize personal value.
My career dream is to be a programmer. First, I love creating things. Programmers can build useful apps or software to solve real-life problems. Doing the job can help me find a sense of achievement. Second, new technology springs up quickly, and this job lets me keep learning new skills.
I'll work hard now to make my dream come true, as every effort will help me get ready for this meaningful career.
【知识点】
职业主题写作，要点类书面表达，英语短文谋篇布局
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题干所有写作要求，三个核心要点全部覆盖，行文逻辑层层递进，从职业认知到点明梦想，再到原因阐述、收尾表态衔接自然，用到的短语表达地道准确，词数符合80-100的限定要求，没有冗余内容，适配本次征文投稿的场景，学生可以参考这类提示类作文的写作思路，优先选用题干给出的参考词汇降低出错概率。
【难度系数】
0.6
