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近年来，中学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数），谈谈你的看法和建议。
要求：①列举学生面临的健康问题，如go to school without breakfast、play computer games、watch TV、drink or smoke；②提出保持健康的合理建议；③发表自己的看法。
How to Keep Healthy
Everyone needs to keep healthy today, especially we students. But some of us don't know the importance of keeping healthy.
近年来，中学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数），谈谈你的看法和建议。
要求：①列举学生面临的健康问题，如go to school without breakfast、play computer games、watch TV、drink or smoke；②提出保持健康的合理建议；③发表自己的看法。
How to Keep Healthy
Everyone needs to keep healthy today, especially we students. But some of us don't know the importance of keeping healthy.
答案
One possible version:
Some of us go to school without breakfast. Some spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV. What's worse, a few students even drink or smoke. All these bad habits are really bad for our health.
Then what can we do to keep healthy? First, we must have breakfast every day, because it gives us enough energy for the morning's classes. Second, we should take exercise regularly, such as playing ball games or jogging after school. Third, we'd better not spend too much time in front of the screen, and we must stay away from drinking and smoking. Also, we need to get enough sleep by going to bed early.
In my opinion, good health is the basic of our study and growth. Only when we are healthy can we study better and make our dreams come true. So we should all pay attention to our health.
Some of us go to school without breakfast. Some spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV. What's worse, a few students even drink or smoke. All these bad habits are really bad for our health.
Then what can we do to keep healthy? First, we must have breakfast every day, because it gives us enough energy for the morning's classes. Second, we should take exercise regularly, such as playing ball games or jogging after school. Third, we'd better not spend too much time in front of the screen, and we must stay away from drinking and smoking. Also, we need to get enough sleep by going to bed early.
In my opinion, good health is the basic of our study and growth. Only when we are healthy can we study better and make our dreams come true. So we should all pay attention to our health.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以“How to Keep Healthy”为题续写短文，需完成三项任务：列举学生面临的健康问题、提出保持健康的合理建议、发表个人看法。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，列举题目指定的不良健康习惯（不吃早饭、长时间玩电脑/看电视、饮酒吸烟）；2. 针对每个不良习惯对应提出具体健康建议；3. 最后阐述健康对学习与成长的重要性，升华主题，确保词数达标。
【解析】续写部分分为三段：第一段列举学生的不良健康习惯，如不吃早饭、沉迷电子设备、饮酒吸烟等；第二段提出针对性建议，包括规律吃早饭、定期锻炼、远离烟酒、保证睡眠等；第三段发表看法，强调健康是学习成长的基础，呼吁关注自身健康。
【答案】One possible version:
Some of us go to school without breakfast. Some spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV. What's worse, a few students even drink or smoke. All these bad habits are really bad for our health.
Then what can we do to keep healthy? First, we must have breakfast every day, because it gives us enough energy for the morning's classes. Second, we should take exercise regularly, such as playing ball games or jogging after school. Third, we'd better not spend too much time in front of the screen, and we must stay away from drinking and smoking. Also, we need to get enough sleep by going to bed early.
In my opinion, good health is the basic of our study and growth. Only when we are healthy can we study better and make our dreams come true. So we should all pay attention to our health.
【知识点】英语话题书面表达、健康话题词汇运用、建议类句式
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，要点齐全，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言符合中学生写作水平，完整完成了书面表达任务。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】续写部分分为三段：第一段列举学生的不良健康习惯，如不吃早饭、沉迷电子设备、饮酒吸烟等；第二段提出针对性建议，包括规律吃早饭、定期锻炼、远离烟酒、保证睡眠等；第三段发表看法，强调健康是学习成长的基础，呼吁关注自身健康。
【答案】One possible version:
Some of us go to school without breakfast. Some spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV. What's worse, a few students even drink or smoke. All these bad habits are really bad for our health.
Then what can we do to keep healthy? First, we must have breakfast every day, because it gives us enough energy for the morning's classes. Second, we should take exercise regularly, such as playing ball games or jogging after school. Third, we'd better not spend too much time in front of the screen, and we must stay away from drinking and smoking. Also, we need to get enough sleep by going to bed early.
In my opinion, good health is the basic of our study and growth. Only when we are healthy can we study better and make our dreams come true. So we should all pay attention to our health.
【知识点】英语话题书面表达、健康话题词汇运用、建议类句式
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，要点齐全，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言符合中学生写作水平，完整完成了书面表达任务。
【难度系数】0.6
