假设你是某中学的七年级学生玲玲,最近你们校报的英语专栏以“My favourite food”为主题向同学们征稿。请你根据下面的表格提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍自己最爱的食物——炸酱面,给校报投稿。

要求:(1)包括所给提示信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(2)条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;(3)70词左右;(4)短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My favourite food is zhajiangmian. It is a very popular noodle dish in the north of China.
要求:(1)包括所给提示信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(2)条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;(3)70词左右;(4)短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My favourite food is zhajiangmian. It is a very popular noodle dish in the north of China.
Zhajiangmian is noodles with soy bean paste. And people like to add fresh vegetables like cucumber pieces, carrot pieces and soy beans to the noodles. Zhajiangmian came from Beijing. It first appeared at the end of the Qing Dynasty and got popular soon. I like zhajiangmian because it is healthy and delicious. My mum is very good at cooking zhajiangmian and a bowl of her zhajiangmian always fills me with happiness and warmth.
答案
Zhajiangmian is noodles with soy bean paste. And people like to add fresh vegetables like cucumber pieces, carrot pieces and soy beans to the noodles. Zhajiangmian came from Beijing. It first appeared at the end of the Qing Dynasty and got popular soon. I like zhajiangmian because it is healthy and delicious. My mum is very good at cooking zhajiangmian and a bowl of her zhajiangmian always fills me with happiness and warmth.
解析
【分析】这是一篇英语介绍类短文写作题,要求以七年级学生玲玲的身份,围绕“My favourite food”主题,结合表格提示介绍炸酱面。写作时需先承接给定开头,依次说明炸酱面的食材、来源地、历史,再阐述喜欢的原因,可适当添加个人相关细节(如妈妈做的炸酱面),确保涵盖所有提示信息,语句连贯、语法正确,符合字数要求。
【解析】1. 承接开头后,介绍炸酱面的食材:由黄豆酱面条搭配黄瓜片、胡萝卜片、黄豆组成;2. 说明炸酱面的来源是北京,历史为清末出现并很快流行;3. 说明喜欢的原因是健康美味,再添加妈妈做的炸酱面带来温暖的细节,使内容更丰富,符合写作要求。
【答案】Zhajiangmian is noodles with soy bean paste. And people like to add fresh vegetables like cucumber pieces, carrot pieces and soy beans to the noodles. Zhajiangmian came from Beijing. It first appeared at the end of the Qing Dynasty and got popular soon. I like zhajiangmian because it is healthy and delicious. My mum is very good at cooking zhajiangmian and a bowl of her zhajiangmian always fills me with happiness and warmth.
【知识点】英语应用文写作,介绍类短文
【点评】该短文完整覆盖题目所有提示信息,结构清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,适当添加个人细节,符合七年级学生的写作要求,很好地完成了投稿任务。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 承接开头后,介绍炸酱面的食材:由黄豆酱面条搭配黄瓜片、胡萝卜片、黄豆组成;2. 说明炸酱面的来源是北京,历史为清末出现并很快流行;3. 说明喜欢的原因是健康美味,再添加妈妈做的炸酱面带来温暖的细节,使内容更丰富,符合写作要求。
【答案】Zhajiangmian is noodles with soy bean paste. And people like to add fresh vegetables like cucumber pieces, carrot pieces and soy beans to the noodles. Zhajiangmian came from Beijing. It first appeared at the end of the Qing Dynasty and got popular soon. I like zhajiangmian because it is healthy and delicious. My mum is very good at cooking zhajiangmian and a bowl of her zhajiangmian always fills me with happiness and warmth.
【知识点】英语应用文写作,介绍类短文
【点评】该短文完整覆盖题目所有提示信息,结构清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,适当添加个人细节,符合七年级学生的写作要求,很好地完成了投稿任务。
【难度系数】0.5
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