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三、教材佳句仿写·核心句式训练
1. 教材原句:And the trees are so glad that they have covered themselves with flowers.
仿写:她太紧张了,一句话也说不出来。
2. 教材原句:How selfish I've been!
仿写:Judy 真是乐于助人啊!
3. 教材原句:It is often difficult for people to talk about their fears with others.
仿写:对我来说,做些改变很有必要。
1. 教材原句:And the trees are so glad that they have covered themselves with flowers.
仿写:她太紧张了,一句话也说不出来。
She was so nervous that she couldn't say a word.
2. 教材原句:How selfish I've been!
仿写:Judy 真是乐于助人啊!
How helpful Judy is!
3. 教材原句:It is often difficult for people to talk about their fears with others.
仿写:对我来说,做些改变很有必要。
It is quite necessary for me to make some changes.
答案
1. She was so nervous that she couldn't say a word.
2. How helpful Judy is!
3. It is quite necessary for me to make some changes.
2. How helpful Judy is!
3. It is quite necessary for me to make some changes.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语核心句式仿写题，需掌握三个教材重点句式：1. so...that...（如此……以至于……）；2. How引导的感叹句（How + 形容词 + 主语 + 谓语！）；3. It作形式主语的句式（It is + adj + for sb + to do sth）。仿写时需对应中文语义，严格遵循原句句式结构，注意时态、用词的准确性。
【解析】
1. 对应so...that...结构：“她太紧张了”译为She was so nervous，“一句话也说不出来”译为she couldn't say a word，组合为She was so nervous that she couldn't say a word。
2. 对应How引导的感叹句：“乐于助人”译为helpful，按结构How + adj + 主语 + 谓语，组合为How helpful Judy is!。
3. 对应It作形式主语的句式：“很有必要”译为quite necessary，“对我来说”译为for me，“做些改变”译为make some changes，组合为It is quite necessary for me to make some changes.
【答案】
1. She was so nervous that she couldn't say a word.
2. How helpful Judy is!
3. It is quite necessary for me to make some changes.
【知识点】
so...that...句式；How引导的感叹句；It作形式主语的句式
【点评】
本题考查教材核心英语句式的仿写，需熟练掌握重点句型结构，准确运用词汇与语法，难度适中，适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语核心句式仿写题，需掌握三个教材重点句式：1. so...that...（如此……以至于……）；2. How引导的感叹句（How + 形容词 + 主语 + 谓语！）；3. It作形式主语的句式（It is + adj + for sb + to do sth）。仿写时需对应中文语义，严格遵循原句句式结构，注意时态、用词的准确性。
【解析】
1. 对应so...that...结构：“她太紧张了”译为She was so nervous，“一句话也说不出来”译为she couldn't say a word，组合为She was so nervous that she couldn't say a word。
2. 对应How引导的感叹句：“乐于助人”译为helpful，按结构How + adj + 主语 + 谓语，组合为How helpful Judy is!。
3. 对应It作形式主语的句式：“很有必要”译为quite necessary，“对我来说”译为for me，“做些改变”译为make some changes，组合为It is quite necessary for me to make some changes.
【答案】
1. She was so nervous that she couldn't say a word.
2. How helpful Judy is!
3. It is quite necessary for me to make some changes.
【知识点】
so...that...句式；How引导的感叹句；It作形式主语的句式
【点评】
本题考查教材核心英语句式的仿写，需熟练掌握重点句型结构，准确运用词汇与语法，难度适中，适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.5
四、典例剖析·主题写作行文指导
你校英文报正在就中学生对于友谊的看法进行征文。假设你是李华,请你给主编 Jesse 写一封信,谈谈你的想法。→时态:一般现在时为主
语篇类型:应用文 人称:第一、三人称
写作要点:
1. How do you understand the meaning of "friendship"?
2. Who is your best friend and how do you get along well with him or her?
3. How can we develop friendships?
写作要求:
1. 短文须包含写作要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现任何真实姓名、校名和地名等;
3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jesse,
I am glad to share with you my ideas about friendship.
Yours,
Li Hua
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. Friends are important in our life. (用短语 play an important part in 升格)
2. I can't speak English well, so he helps me improve it. (用短语 have difficulty doing sth 升格)
Step 3 佳作展示评析
Dear Jesse,
I am glad to share with you my ideas about friendship. Friends play an important part in ① our life. They not only make us feel less lonely but also bring us pleasure.
My best friend is Mike. He is very friendly and funny. He is good at English. I have difficulty speaking ② English well, so he helps me improve it. I also give him tips on how to learn maths.
To be a good friend, it's important to care about each other and help our friends out in hard times. Just as the well-known saying goes, "The only way to have a friend is to be one." ③
Yours,
Li Hua
你校英文报正在就中学生对于友谊的看法进行征文。假设你是李华,请你给主编 Jesse 写一封信,谈谈你的想法。→时态:一般现在时为主
语篇类型:应用文 人称:第一、三人称
写作要点:
1. How do you understand the meaning of "friendship"?
2. Who is your best friend and how do you get along well with him or her?
3. How can we develop friendships?
写作要求:
1. 短文须包含写作要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现任何真实姓名、校名和地名等;
3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jesse,
I am glad to share with you my ideas about friendship.
Yours,
Li Hua
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. Friends are important in our life. (用短语 play an important part in 升格)
Friends play an important part in our life.
2. I can't speak English well, so he helps me improve it. (用短语 have difficulty doing sth 升格)
I have difficulty speaking English well, so he helps me improve it.
Step 3 佳作展示评析
Dear Jesse,
I am glad to share with you my ideas about friendship. Friends play an important part in ① our life. They not only make us feel less lonely but also bring us pleasure.
My best friend is Mike. He is very friendly and funny. He is good at English. I have difficulty speaking ② English well, so he helps me improve it. I also give him tips on how to learn maths.
To be a good friend, it's important to care about each other and help our friends out in hard times. Just as the well-known saying goes, "The only way to have a friend is to be one." ③
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
1. Friends play an important part in our life.
2. I have difficulty speaking English well, so he helps me improve it.
2. I have difficulty speaking English well, so he helps me improve it.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份给校英文报主编Jesse写信，围绕“中学生对友谊的看法”展开，需包含三个写作要点，同时运用指定短语升格句子以提升表达。解题思路为：先紧扣写作要点，明确时态（一般现在时）、人称（第一、三人称）；再将原句用指定短语替换，确保表达准确；最后组织内容，使行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 谋篇布局：围绕“友谊的理解、最好的朋友及相处、发展友谊的方法”三个要点展开，采用一般现在时、第一/三人称写作；
2. 高阶表达：将原句“Friends are important in our life.”用短语“play an important part in”升格为“Friends play an important part in our life.”；将原句“I can't speak English well, so he helps me improve it.”用短语“have difficulty doing sth”升格为“I have difficulty speaking English well, so he helps me improve it.”；
3. 内容组织：结合升格后的句子补充合理细节，使行文连贯，符合词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【答案】
1. Friends play an important part in our life.
2. I have difficulty speaking English well, so he helps me improve it.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；短语运用；主题表达
【点评】
本题聚焦英语写作的语言升格训练，既考查学生对友谊主题的理解，又要求学生掌握指定短语的正确运用，有助于提升学生的书面表达能力，符合中学生英语写作的训练要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份给校英文报主编Jesse写信，围绕“中学生对友谊的看法”展开，需包含三个写作要点，同时运用指定短语升格句子以提升表达。解题思路为：先紧扣写作要点，明确时态（一般现在时）、人称（第一、三人称）；再将原句用指定短语替换，确保表达准确；最后组织内容，使行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 谋篇布局：围绕“友谊的理解、最好的朋友及相处、发展友谊的方法”三个要点展开，采用一般现在时、第一/三人称写作；
2. 高阶表达：将原句“Friends are important in our life.”用短语“play an important part in”升格为“Friends play an important part in our life.”；将原句“I can't speak English well, so he helps me improve it.”用短语“have difficulty doing sth”升格为“I have difficulty speaking English well, so he helps me improve it.”；
3. 内容组织：结合升格后的句子补充合理细节，使行文连贯，符合词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【答案】
1. Friends play an important part in our life.
2. I have difficulty speaking English well, so he helps me improve it.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；短语运用；主题表达
【点评】
本题聚焦英语写作的语言升格训练，既考查学生对友谊主题的理解，又要求学生掌握指定短语的正确运用，有助于提升学生的书面表达能力，符合中学生英语写作的训练要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
