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五、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
“A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.”这句谚语让我们体会到了朋友的珍贵之处。那么我们应如何与朋友交往，让友谊长存呢？请根据下面的图示，以“How to Get Along with Our Friends”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Get Along with Our Friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.
“A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.”这句谚语让我们体会到了朋友的珍贵之处。那么我们应如何与朋友交往，让友谊长存呢？请根据下面的图示，以“How to Get Along with Our Friends”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Get Along with Our Friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.
答案
How to Get Along with Our Friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to get along with our friends. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should trust our friends. We should learn to share with our friends, especially when we have problems. Sharing problems is like cutting them in half. Second, we should help each other. When our friends are in difficulty, we should try to help them to solve problems. Third, we should do something together. This can help us understand each other better.
In a word, we should treat each other with respect and kindness. It can make our friendship stronger.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语主题写作题，要求以“How to Get Along with Our Friends”为题完成短文写作。解题思路如下：1. 明确写作规范：体裁为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称，词数80左右，开头已给出，不得出现真实姓名和校名；2. 梳理核心要点：结合图示关键词（trust、share、help）及写作思路，需先引出与朋友相处的建议，再分点说明具体做法，最后总结呼吁；3. 组织语言：围绕要点用简单易懂的英语表达，符合写作要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头引出建议：It's important for us to get along with our friends. Here are some suggestions.；2. 分点阐述相处方法：①信任朋友；②学会分享，遇到问题时和朋友分享能分担烦恼；③互相帮助，朋友有困难时主动提供帮助，还可补充一起做事情增进彼此理解；3. 总结升华：用尊重和友善对待朋友，让友谊更牢固，确保符合一般现在时和词数要求。
【答案】
How to Get Along with Our Friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to get along with our friends. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should trust our friends. We should learn to share with our friends, especially when we have problems. Sharing problems is like cutting them in half. Second, we should help each other. When our friends are in difficulty, we should try to help them to solve problems. Third, we should do something together. This can help us understand each other better.
In a word, we should treat each other with respect and kindness. It can make our friendship stronger.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、友谊话题英语表达
【点评】
本题结合图示关键词考查学生围绕“友谊”话题的英语写作能力，结构清晰，要点明确，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，能有效检验学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语主题写作题，要求以“How to Get Along with Our Friends”为题完成短文写作。解题思路如下：1. 明确写作规范：体裁为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称，词数80左右，开头已给出，不得出现真实姓名和校名；2. 梳理核心要点：结合图示关键词（trust、share、help）及写作思路，需先引出与朋友相处的建议，再分点说明具体做法，最后总结呼吁；3. 组织语言：围绕要点用简单易懂的英语表达，符合写作要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头引出建议：It's important for us to get along with our friends. Here are some suggestions.；2. 分点阐述相处方法：①信任朋友；②学会分享，遇到问题时和朋友分享能分担烦恼；③互相帮助，朋友有困难时主动提供帮助，还可补充一起做事情增进彼此理解；3. 总结升华：用尊重和友善对待朋友，让友谊更牢固，确保符合一般现在时和词数要求。
【答案】
How to Get Along with Our Friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to get along with our friends. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should trust our friends. We should learn to share with our friends, especially when we have problems. Sharing problems is like cutting them in half. Second, we should help each other. When our friends are in difficulty, we should try to help them to solve problems. Third, we should do something together. This can help us understand each other better.
In a word, we should treat each other with respect and kindness. It can make our friendship stronger.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、友谊话题英语表达
【点评】
本题结合图示关键词考查学生围绕“友谊”话题的英语写作能力，结构清晰，要点明确，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，能有效检验学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.3
