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所有生物都是地球的主人，人与野生动物共享同一家园。学校英语校刊Teens将要举行以“One Earth，One Home”为题的英语作文竞赛活动。请你围绕下面三个问题，用英语写一篇作文。
What problems are wild animals facing?
Why do we need to protect wild animals?
What can we students do to protect them?
注意：1. 根据提示问题，适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
One Earth，One Home
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
Let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us humans and the wild animals as well.
【审题立意】
1. 审主题：呼吁保护野生动物
2. 审体裁：说明文
3. 审人称：以第一人称为主
4. 审时态：一般现在时态
【思路点拨】
引出话题→The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
↓
具体阐述→Problems: Cut down trees; Kill animals.
Purpose: Our earth will become more comfortable to live in and the wild animals can live more happily.
Ways: Plant more trees; We shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere or buy fur coats; We should make more people understand the importance of protecting the earth and loving the wild animals.
↓
总结呼吁→Let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us humans and the wild animals as well.
【佳作欣赏】
One Earth，One Home
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
People often cut down trees for money. What’s worse，people kill animals for their fur or meat. So many wild animals are in danger.
It’s time for us to save the earth and the wild animals. If we take action to protect our earth and the wild animals right away，our earth will become more comfortable to live in and the wild animals can live more happily. First，as students，we can plant more trees. What’s more，we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere or buy fur coats. Last but not least，we should make more people understand the importance of protecting the earth and loving the wild animals.
Let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us humans and the wild animals as well.
What problems are wild animals facing?
Why do we need to protect wild animals?
What can we students do to protect them?
注意：1. 根据提示问题，适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
One Earth，One Home
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
Let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us humans and the wild animals as well.
【审题立意】
1. 审主题：呼吁保护野生动物
2. 审体裁：说明文
3. 审人称：以第一人称为主
4. 审时态：一般现在时态
【思路点拨】
引出话题→The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
↓
具体阐述→Problems: Cut down trees; Kill animals.
Purpose: Our earth will become more comfortable to live in and the wild animals can live more happily.
Ways: Plant more trees; We shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere or buy fur coats; We should make more people understand the importance of protecting the earth and loving the wild animals.
↓
总结呼吁→Let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us humans and the wild animals as well.
【佳作欣赏】
One Earth，One Home
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
People often cut down trees for money. What’s worse，people kill animals for their fur or meat. So many wild animals are in danger.
It’s time for us to save the earth and the wild animals. If we take action to protect our earth and the wild animals right away，our earth will become more comfortable to live in and the wild animals can live more happily. First，as students，we can plant more trees. What’s more，we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere or buy fur coats. Last but not least，we should make more people understand the importance of protecting the earth and loving the wild animals.
Let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us humans and the wild animals as well.
答案
People often cut down trees for money, which takes away wild animals' living areas. What's worse, people kill animals for their fur or meat. So many wild animals are now in great danger.
Protecting wild animals is protecting our own home. If we take action right away, our earth will be more comfortable to live on, and wild animals can live more happily. As students, we can plant more trees, never buy fur coats, and tell more people the importance of loving and protecting wild animals.
Protecting wild animals is protecting our own home. If we take action right away, our earth will be more comfortable to live on, and wild animals can live more happily. As students, we can plant more trees, never buy fur coats, and tell more people the importance of loving and protecting wild animals.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语说明文写作题，主题为“One Earth，One Home”，要求围绕三个核心问题展开：野生动物面临的问题、保护野生动物的原因、学生可采取的保护措施。写作需遵循给定结构：开头已提供引出话题，中间分三部分阐述，结尾已给出呼吁；时态以一般现在时为主，人称结合第一、第三人称，词数控制在80左右，适当补充细节使内容完整。
【解析】
1. 阐述野生动物面临的问题：人们砍树获利，夺走野生动物栖息地；更严重的是，人们为皮毛或肉猎杀动物，导致许多野生动物处于极大危险中。
2. 说明保护原因：保护野生动物就是保护自身家园，立刻行动能让地球更宜居，野生动物也能更快乐生活。
3. 列举学生做法：作为学生，可种更多树、不买皮草、告知更多人保护野生动物的重要性；最后衔接给定结尾完成作文。
【答案】
People often cut down trees for money, which takes away wild animals' living areas. What's worse, people kill animals for their fur or meat. So many wild animals are now in great danger.
Protecting wild animals is protecting our own home. If we take action right away, our earth will be more comfortable to live on, and wild animals can live more happily. As students, we can plant more trees, never buy fur coats, and tell more people the importance of loving and protecting wild animals.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、保护野生动物主题、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个问题，结构清晰，语言通顺，符合词数要求，适当补充细节使内容充实，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语说明文写作题，主题为“One Earth，One Home”，要求围绕三个核心问题展开：野生动物面临的问题、保护野生动物的原因、学生可采取的保护措施。写作需遵循给定结构：开头已提供引出话题，中间分三部分阐述，结尾已给出呼吁；时态以一般现在时为主，人称结合第一、第三人称，词数控制在80左右，适当补充细节使内容完整。
【解析】
1. 阐述野生动物面临的问题：人们砍树获利，夺走野生动物栖息地；更严重的是，人们为皮毛或肉猎杀动物，导致许多野生动物处于极大危险中。
2. 说明保护原因：保护野生动物就是保护自身家园，立刻行动能让地球更宜居，野生动物也能更快乐生活。
3. 列举学生做法：作为学生，可种更多树、不买皮草、告知更多人保护野生动物的重要性；最后衔接给定结尾完成作文。
【答案】
People often cut down trees for money, which takes away wild animals' living areas. What's worse, people kill animals for their fur or meat. So many wild animals are now in great danger.
Protecting wild animals is protecting our own home. If we take action right away, our earth will be more comfortable to live on, and wild animals can live more happily. As students, we can plant more trees, never buy fur coats, and tell more people the importance of loving and protecting wild animals.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、保护野生动物主题、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个问题，结构清晰，语言通顺，符合词数要求，适当补充细节使内容充实，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
