假设你是“绿色家园”环保组织的成员李明,现在正在向初中学生讲述植物的重要性并倡议学生们要保护它们。请你围绕下图所示的两个问题,用英语写一篇关于植物重要性的作文。

注意:1. 根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2. 词数 80 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The Importance of Plants
My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants.
注意:1. 根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2. 词数 80 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The Importance of Plants
My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants.
答案
Plants are very common in our daily life. There are many trees and flowers around us. They are very important to us. First, plants give out fresh air for humans to breathe. Second, many of the things in our daily lives come from plants. For example, plants can give us food, wood and so on. What's more, plants can also give homes and food to animals. They help to keep the ecosystem healthy.
In a word, plants play an important part in our lives. We can't live without them. We should protect them and try our best to plant more trees every year.
In a word, plants play an important part in our lives. We can't live without them. We should protect them and try our best to plant more trees every year.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务是围绕“植物的重要性”,结合两个核心问题(日常生活中常见的植物、至少3个植物重要性的原因)完成英语作文,开头已给出。思考时先承接开头,说明日常中常见的植物(如树木、花朵),再分点阐述植物的重要性,最后总结并发出保护植物的倡议,同时注意词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 承接给定开头,点明日常生活中常见的植物(如树木、花朵);2. 分三点说明植物的重要性:① 植物释放新鲜空气,供人类呼吸;② 植物为我们提供食物、木材等日常用品;③ 植物为动物提供住所和食物,维持生态系统健康;3. 总结全文,强调植物对人类的重要性,发出保护植物、每年多种树的倡议,确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
Plants are very common in our daily life. There are many trees and flowers around us. They are very important to us. First, plants give out fresh air for humans to breathe. Second, many of the things in our daily lives come from plants. For example, plants can give us food, wood and so on. What's more, plants can also give homes and food to animals. They help to keep the ecosystem healthy.
In a word, plants play an important part in our lives. We can't live without them. We should protect them and try our best to plant more trees every year.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作,植物话题,英语作文表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,结合提示的两个问题,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言简洁明了,符合初中英语写作的要求,同时融入了环保意识,完成了倡议的任务。
【难度系数】
0.3
首先明确写作任务是围绕“植物的重要性”,结合两个核心问题(日常生活中常见的植物、至少3个植物重要性的原因)完成英语作文,开头已给出。思考时先承接开头,说明日常中常见的植物(如树木、花朵),再分点阐述植物的重要性,最后总结并发出保护植物的倡议,同时注意词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 承接给定开头,点明日常生活中常见的植物(如树木、花朵);2. 分三点说明植物的重要性:① 植物释放新鲜空气,供人类呼吸;② 植物为我们提供食物、木材等日常用品;③ 植物为动物提供住所和食物,维持生态系统健康;3. 总结全文,强调植物对人类的重要性,发出保护植物、每年多种树的倡议,确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
Plants are very common in our daily life. There are many trees and flowers around us. They are very important to us. First, plants give out fresh air for humans to breathe. Second, many of the things in our daily lives come from plants. For example, plants can give us food, wood and so on. What's more, plants can also give homes and food to animals. They help to keep the ecosystem healthy.
In a word, plants play an important part in our lives. We can't live without them. We should protect them and try our best to plant more trees every year.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作,植物话题,英语作文表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,结合提示的两个问题,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言简洁明了,符合初中英语写作的要求,同时融入了环保意识,完成了倡议的任务。
【难度系数】
0.3
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