三、书面表达
假如你是李辉,学校英文社团即将举办主题为“A person I admire”的英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文参加比赛,介绍你钦佩的一个人。内容包括:
1. 他/她的基本信息;
2. 他/她的主要成就;
3. 他/她对你的影响。
要求:
1. 字数80—100;
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A person I admire
假如你是李辉,学校英文社团即将举办主题为“A person I admire”的英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文参加比赛,介绍你钦佩的一个人。内容包括:
1. 他/她的基本信息;
2. 他/她的主要成就;
3. 他/她对你的影响。
要求:
1. 字数80—100;
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A person I admire
Many people have made great achievements and they influenced our lives a lot. Among them, I admire Tu Youyou most.
Tu Youyou is a great Chinese scientist. She was born in 1930. Tu Youyou is famous for discovering a medicine that helps fight malaria.
Her discovery saves millions of lives around the world. She even won the Nobel Prize in 2015.
Tu Youyou is my role model. She works hard and never gives up, even when her research is difficult.
Her story teaches me to be patient and hard-working. She also shows me that science can make a big difference in people's lives.
I want to learn from her and help others in my own way.
答案
(参考范文)
A person I admire
Many people have made great achievements and they influenced our lives a lot. Among them, I admire Tu Youyou most.
Tu Youyou is a great Chinese scientist. She was born in 1930. Tu Youyou is famous for discovering a medicine that helps fight malaria. Her discovery saves millions of lives around the world. She even won the Nobel Prize in 2015.
Tu Youyou is my role model. She works hard and never gives up, even when her research is difficult. Her story teaches me to be patient and hard-working. She also shows me that science can make a big difference in people's lives. I want to learn from her and help others in my own way.
A person I admire
Many people have made great achievements and they influenced our lives a lot. Among them, I admire Tu Youyou most.
Tu Youyou is a great Chinese scientist. She was born in 1930. Tu Youyou is famous for discovering a medicine that helps fight malaria. Her discovery saves millions of lives around the world. She even won the Nobel Prize in 2015.
Tu Youyou is my role model. She works hard and never gives up, even when her research is difficult. Her story teaches me to be patient and hard-working. She also shows me that science can make a big difference in people's lives. I want to learn from her and help others in my own way.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以李辉的身份参加主题为“A person I admire”的英语征文比赛,需涵盖三个核心要点:一是钦佩之人的基本信息,二是其主要成就,三是该人物对自己的影响。解题思路:首先选取有明确典型成就、适合作为钦佩对象的人物(如屠呦呦,事迹清晰且符合主题);其次按照“引出钦佩对象→介绍基本信息与成就→阐述对自身的影响”的逻辑结构组织内容;最后调整语言,确保行文连贯,字数控制在80-100之间,完整覆盖所有要求要点。
【解析】1. 确定写作对象:选择屠呦呦,她是中国著名科学家,拥有明确的标志性成就,符合征文主题需求;2. 搭建内容框架:开头点明自己最钦佩屠呦呦,中间介绍其基本信息(1930年出生,中国科学家)与主要成就(发现抗疟药物,拯救全球数百万人,2015年获诺贝尔生理学或医学奖),结尾阐述其对自己的影响(教会自己努力、不放弃,要以她为榜样帮助他人);3. 润色语言,确保语句通顺,符合字数要求。
【答案】A person I admire
Many people have made great achievements and they influenced our lives a lot. Among them, I admire Tu Youyou most.
Tu Youyou is a great Chinese scientist. She was born in 1930. Tu Youyou is famous for discovering a medicine that helps fight malaria. Her discovery saves millions of lives around the world. She even won the Nobel Prize in 2015.
Tu Youyou is my role model. She works hard and never gives up, even when her research is difficult. Her story teaches me to be patient and hard-working. She also shows me that science can make a big difference in people's lives. I want to learn from her and help others in my own way.
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物介绍类写作
【点评】范文紧扣征文主题,完整覆盖所有要求的要点,内容具体充实,语言流畅自然,符合字数要求,是一篇符合参赛标准的优秀短文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 确定写作对象:选择屠呦呦,她是中国著名科学家,拥有明确的标志性成就,符合征文主题需求;2. 搭建内容框架:开头点明自己最钦佩屠呦呦,中间介绍其基本信息(1930年出生,中国科学家)与主要成就(发现抗疟药物,拯救全球数百万人,2015年获诺贝尔生理学或医学奖),结尾阐述其对自己的影响(教会自己努力、不放弃,要以她为榜样帮助他人);3. 润色语言,确保语句通顺,符合字数要求。
【答案】A person I admire
Many people have made great achievements and they influenced our lives a lot. Among them, I admire Tu Youyou most.
Tu Youyou is a great Chinese scientist. She was born in 1930. Tu Youyou is famous for discovering a medicine that helps fight malaria. Her discovery saves millions of lives around the world. She even won the Nobel Prize in 2015.
Tu Youyou is my role model. She works hard and never gives up, even when her research is difficult. Her story teaches me to be patient and hard-working. She also shows me that science can make a big difference in people's lives. I want to learn from her and help others in my own way.
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物介绍类写作
【点评】范文紧扣征文主题,完整覆盖所有要求的要点,内容具体充实,语言流畅自然,符合字数要求,是一篇符合参赛标准的优秀短文。
【难度系数】0.6
一、根据句意及汉语提示填写单词或词组。注意使用其正确形式。
1. Justin gave a speech to the
2. We can find a lot of useful
3. Betty has a habit of keeping a
4. All the students' names are listed in the
5. This is an article on the
6.
7. A British afternoon tea usually
8. Many buildings in Shenyang can
9. Body language
10. Mr Li's teaching style is
1. Justin gave a speech to the
whole
(全部的)school yesterday.2. We can find a lot of useful
information
(信息)in this encyclopaedia.3. Betty has a habit of keeping a
record
(记录)of her spending.4. All the students' names are listed in the
alphabetical order
(字母顺序).5. This is an article on the
subject
(主题)of climate change.6.
General education
(通识教育)helps us learn a lot about the world.7. A British afternoon tea usually
includes
(包括)tea and cakes.8. Many buildings in Shenyang can
go back a long way
(追溯久远)in history.9. Body language
plays an important role
(起到重要作用)in communication.10. Mr Li's teaching style is
similar to
(与……相似)that of most other teachers.答案
1. whole
2. information
3. record
4. alphabetical order
5. subject
6. General education
7. includes
8. go back a long way
9. plays an important role
10. similar to
2. information
3. record
4. alphabetical order
5. subject
6. General education
7. includes
8. go back a long way
9. plays an important role
10. similar to
解析
【分析】
本题为根据汉语提示填写单词或词组的基础题型,解题思路如下:①先准确匹配每个汉语提示对应的英文词汇或短语;②结合句子的语法规则(如名词的数、动词的单三形式、固定搭配等)调整词汇的正确形式;③确保填写内容符合句子语境与语法要求。
【解析】
1. 修饰名词school需用形容词,“全部的”对应whole;
2. “信息”为不可数名词,直接用information;
3. 固定搭配keep a record表示“记录”,填record;
4. “字母顺序”对应固定词组alphabetical order;
5. “主题”对应名词subject;
6. “通识教育”为专有名词,首字母大写,填General education;
7. 主语A British afternoon tea是第三人称单数,一般现在时中动词用单三形式,故include变includes;
8. 情态动词can后接动词原形,“追溯久远”对应go back a long way;
9. 主语Body language是第三人称单数,一般现在时中短语用单三形式,故“起到重要作用”对应plays an important role;
10. 固定搭配be similar to表示“与……相似”,填similar to。
【答案】
1. whole
2. information
3. record
4. alphabetical order
5. subject
6. General education
7. includes
8. go back a long way
9. plays an important role
10. similar to
【知识点】
固定短语搭配、动词第三人称单数变化、英语单词拼写
【点评】
本题考查英语基础词汇与常用短语的运用,侧重语法变形和固定搭配的掌握,是英语学习的核心基础题型,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为根据汉语提示填写单词或词组的基础题型,解题思路如下:①先准确匹配每个汉语提示对应的英文词汇或短语;②结合句子的语法规则(如名词的数、动词的单三形式、固定搭配等)调整词汇的正确形式;③确保填写内容符合句子语境与语法要求。
【解析】
1. 修饰名词school需用形容词,“全部的”对应whole;
2. “信息”为不可数名词,直接用information;
3. 固定搭配keep a record表示“记录”,填record;
4. “字母顺序”对应固定词组alphabetical order;
5. “主题”对应名词subject;
6. “通识教育”为专有名词,首字母大写,填General education;
7. 主语A British afternoon tea是第三人称单数,一般现在时中动词用单三形式,故include变includes;
8. 情态动词can后接动词原形,“追溯久远”对应go back a long way;
9. 主语Body language是第三人称单数,一般现在时中短语用单三形式,故“起到重要作用”对应plays an important role;
10. 固定搭配be similar to表示“与……相似”,填similar to。
【答案】
1. whole
2. information
3. record
4. alphabetical order
5. subject
6. General education
7. includes
8. go back a long way
9. plays an important role
10. similar to
【知识点】
固定短语搭配、动词第三人称单数变化、英语单词拼写
【点评】
本题考查英语基础词汇与常用短语的运用,侧重语法变形和固定搭配的掌握,是英语学习的核心基础题型,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
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