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Ⅶ.书面表达(共15分)
2025年10月18日,我国受人尊敬的科学巨匠杨振宁(Chen-Ning Yang)先生于北京逝世。他毕生深耕物理科学领域,以卓越成就照亮科研之路,其爱国情怀与永不言弃的精神将永远激励我们前行。请你根据提示的内容,简要介绍并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下:
要求:1.内容须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;2.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Respected Scientific Giant
Chen-Ning Yang, a respected scientific giant in our country, passed away on October 18th, 2025.
2025年10月18日,我国受人尊敬的科学巨匠杨振宁(Chen-Ning Yang)先生于北京逝世。他毕生深耕物理科学领域,以卓越成就照亮科研之路,其爱国情怀与永不言弃的精神将永远激励我们前行。请你根据提示的内容,简要介绍并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下:
要求:1.内容须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;2.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Respected Scientific Giant
Chen-Ning Yang, a respected scientific giant in our country, passed away on October 18th, 2025.
He was born in 1922. From a young age, he showed great interest and talent in science. In 1942, he entered Tsinghua University to study. Later, he went to the United States for further education in 1945, where he met many scientists from around the world. As a scientist, he devoted his life to scientific research and his achievements have greatly influenced the world. He is best known for winning the Nobel Prize in Physics.
We should learn from his spirit of never giving up. No matter how many difficulties we meet in study or life, we should keep trying and never lose heart. His love for our country and his achievements will always inspire us to work harder.
答案
Ⅶ. One possible version:
A Respected Scientific Giant
Chen-Ning Yang, a respected scientific giant in our country, passed away on October 18th, 2025. He was born in 1922. From a young age, he showed great interest and talent in science. In 1942, he entered Tsinghua University to study. Later, he went to the United States for further education in 1945, where he met many scientists from around the world. As a scientist, he devoted his life to scientific research and his achievements have greatly influenced the world. He is best known for winning the Nobel Prize in Physics.
We should learn from his spirit of never giving up. No matter how many difficulties we meet in study or life, we should keep trying and never lose heart. His love for our country and his achievements will always inspire us to work harder.
思路梳理 总体分析:本文是一篇材料作文;主要为“一般过去时和一般现在时”;写作要点已给出,注意写作内容需涵盖所有给定要点,可适当发挥。
写作步骤:第一步:简要介绍杨振宁的生平背景(出生时间、地点、早期兴趣);第二步:描述他的学习经历和主要成就(清华大学、赴美深造、诺贝尔奖);第三步:表达个人观点(学习他的精神、爱国情怀的启示)。
A Respected Scientific Giant
Chen-Ning Yang, a respected scientific giant in our country, passed away on October 18th, 2025. He was born in 1922. From a young age, he showed great interest and talent in science. In 1942, he entered Tsinghua University to study. Later, he went to the United States for further education in 1945, where he met many scientists from around the world. As a scientist, he devoted his life to scientific research and his achievements have greatly influenced the world. He is best known for winning the Nobel Prize in Physics.
We should learn from his spirit of never giving up. No matter how many difficulties we meet in study or life, we should keep trying and never lose heart. His love for our country and his achievements will always inspire us to work harder.
思路梳理 总体分析:本文是一篇材料作文;主要为“一般过去时和一般现在时”;写作要点已给出,注意写作内容需涵盖所有给定要点,可适当发挥。
写作步骤:第一步:简要介绍杨振宁的生平背景(出生时间、地点、早期兴趣);第二步:描述他的学习经历和主要成就(清华大学、赴美深造、诺贝尔奖);第三步:表达个人观点(学习他的精神、爱国情怀的启示)。
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先明确写作定位：这是一篇人物介绍类的英语短文，需要覆盖所有给定要点，词数控制在100左右。首先梳理写作逻辑：第一步承接题目给出的开头，先介绍杨振宁先生的基础背景，对应表格里的出生年份、年少时的科学兴趣与天赋；第二步按时间顺序梳理他的求学经历，再介绍他的核心科研成就；第三步完成感悟部分，除了要求的永不放弃的精神，再补充至少1点合理感想，比如学习他的爱国情怀、树立追求理想的信念等。写作时注意介绍生平经历用一般过去时，描述他的精神影响用一般现在时，把中文要点转化为通顺的英语表达，适当补充少量衔接内容让行文流畅，避免遗漏任何给定信息。
【解析】
写作按照三步规范完成：
1. 生平背景铺垫：承接给定开头，依次写出他1922年出生，年少时就展现出对科学的浓厚兴趣与天赋，完成基础信息的介绍。
2. 求学与成就叙述：按时间线说明1942年他考入清华大学学习，1945年前往美国深造；之后点明他毕生投身科学研究，取得了极高成就，获得了诺贝尔物理学奖，可适当补充细节让内容更饱满自然。
3. 感想部分输出：第一点点明要学习他永不放弃的精神，在学习生活遇到困难时也不要丧失信心；第二点补充说明他的爱国情怀和卓越成就会一直激励我们更努力奋斗，满足至少2点感悟的要求。
最后调整语句，保证语法正确、衔接自然，总词数符合100左右的要求。
【答案】
A Respected Scientific Giant
Chen-Ning Yang, a respected scientific giant in our country, passed away on October 18th, 2025. He was born in 1922. From a young age, he showed great interest and talent in science. In 1942, he entered Tsinghua University to study. Later, he went to the United States for further education in 1945, where he met many scientists from around the world. As a scientist, he devoted his life to scientific research and his achievements have greatly influenced the world. He is best known for winning the Nobel Prize in Physics.
We should learn from his spirit of never giving up. No matter how many difficulties we meet in study or life, we should keep trying and never lose heart. His love for our country and his achievements will always inspire us to work harder.
【知识点】
人物类英语写作，时态灵活运用，要点整合输出
【点评】
本题属于中学阶段非常典型的人物介绍类材料作文，既考查学生对基础核心词汇、固定搭配的掌握能力，也要求学生具备梳理时间线、整合要点的写作逻辑，同时通过介绍杰出科学家的事迹引导学生树立正向的学习榜样意识，难度适中，只要学生覆盖全部要点、语法没有明显错误就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先明确写作定位：这是一篇人物介绍类的英语短文，需要覆盖所有给定要点，词数控制在100左右。首先梳理写作逻辑：第一步承接题目给出的开头，先介绍杨振宁先生的基础背景，对应表格里的出生年份、年少时的科学兴趣与天赋；第二步按时间顺序梳理他的求学经历，再介绍他的核心科研成就；第三步完成感悟部分，除了要求的永不放弃的精神，再补充至少1点合理感想，比如学习他的爱国情怀、树立追求理想的信念等。写作时注意介绍生平经历用一般过去时，描述他的精神影响用一般现在时，把中文要点转化为通顺的英语表达，适当补充少量衔接内容让行文流畅，避免遗漏任何给定信息。
【解析】
写作按照三步规范完成：
1. 生平背景铺垫：承接给定开头，依次写出他1922年出生，年少时就展现出对科学的浓厚兴趣与天赋，完成基础信息的介绍。
2. 求学与成就叙述：按时间线说明1942年他考入清华大学学习，1945年前往美国深造；之后点明他毕生投身科学研究，取得了极高成就，获得了诺贝尔物理学奖，可适当补充细节让内容更饱满自然。
3. 感想部分输出：第一点点明要学习他永不放弃的精神，在学习生活遇到困难时也不要丧失信心；第二点补充说明他的爱国情怀和卓越成就会一直激励我们更努力奋斗，满足至少2点感悟的要求。
最后调整语句，保证语法正确、衔接自然，总词数符合100左右的要求。
【答案】
A Respected Scientific Giant
Chen-Ning Yang, a respected scientific giant in our country, passed away on October 18th, 2025. He was born in 1922. From a young age, he showed great interest and talent in science. In 1942, he entered Tsinghua University to study. Later, he went to the United States for further education in 1945, where he met many scientists from around the world. As a scientist, he devoted his life to scientific research and his achievements have greatly influenced the world. He is best known for winning the Nobel Prize in Physics.
We should learn from his spirit of never giving up. No matter how many difficulties we meet in study or life, we should keep trying and never lose heart. His love for our country and his achievements will always inspire us to work harder.
【知识点】
人物类英语写作，时态灵活运用，要点整合输出
【点评】
本题属于中学阶段非常典型的人物介绍类材料作文，既考查学生对基础核心词汇、固定搭配的掌握能力，也要求学生具备梳理时间线、整合要点的写作逻辑，同时通过介绍杰出科学家的事迹引导学生树立正向的学习榜样意识，难度适中，只要学生覆盖全部要点、语法没有明显错误就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
