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七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
假设你是李华，新西兰学生 Mike 将通过学校文化交流项目来苏州游学两周，并寄宿在你家，作为接待伙伴，请你用英文写一封欢迎信，帮助他了解即将开始的苏州生活，内容需包括：
参考词汇 Mini-dictionary：
要求：
1. 文章涵盖所有要点；
2. 词数 90 左右；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
Welcome to Suzhou! I'm Li Hua，your homestay partner for the next two weeks.
I'm sure you'll love Suzhou as much as I do. See you soon!
Best wishes，
Li Hua
假设你是李华，新西兰学生 Mike 将通过学校文化交流项目来苏州游学两周，并寄宿在你家，作为接待伙伴，请你用英文写一封欢迎信，帮助他了解即将开始的苏州生活，内容需包括：
参考词汇 Mini-dictionary：
要求：
1. 文章涵盖所有要点；
2. 词数 90 左右；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
Welcome to Suzhou! I'm Li Hua，your homestay partner for the next two weeks.
I'm sure you'll love Suzhou as much as I do. See you soon!
Best wishes，
Li Hua
答案
七、书面表达
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
Welcome to Suzhou! I'm Li Hua, your homestay partner for the next two weeks. I can't wait to share our culture and daily life with you!
You'll stay at my home, which is near a park full of greenery. There's also a local snack street nearby where you can taste delicious sweet osmanthus cakes.
I suggest visiting Pingjiang Road, where you can feel the ancient charm of Suzhou with its stone-paved streets and small bridges over flowing water.
We can experience Pingtan, a traditional art form that combines storytelling and singing. It helps to preserve and spread the local history and culture.
I'm sure you'll love Suzhou as much as I do. See you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
Welcome to Suzhou! I'm Li Hua, your homestay partner for the next two weeks. I can't wait to share our culture and daily life with you!
You'll stay at my home, which is near a park full of greenery. There's also a local snack street nearby where you can taste delicious sweet osmanthus cakes.
I suggest visiting Pingjiang Road, where you can feel the ancient charm of Suzhou with its stone-paved streets and small bridges over flowing water.
We can experience Pingtan, a traditional art form that combines storytelling and singing. It helps to preserve and spread the local history and culture.
I'm sure you'll love Suzhou as much as I do. See you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封给苏州游学寄宿伙伴Mike的欢迎信，目的是帮助他了解苏州生活。写作思路：1. 承接给定开头，补充表达期待与Mike分享苏州文化和日常的心情；2. 介绍住宿周边的环境（家附近的公园、小吃街），让Mike熟悉起居周边；3. 推荐苏州特色景点平江路，展现其古雅风貌；4. 提议体验当地传统艺术评弹，感受苏州文化，确保涵盖所有要求要点，同时控制词数在90左右。
【解析】
写作时需遵循以下步骤：1. 开头已给出，补充一句“I can't wait to share our culture and daily life with you!”衔接内容；2. 介绍住宿附近的公园（full of greenery）和小吃街（可品尝sweet osmanthus cakes），说明日常起居的便利；3. 推荐平江路，描述其stone-paved streets和small bridges over flowing water，体现苏州古色古香的特点；4. 提议体验Pingtan，说明是结合storytelling和singing的传统艺术，能感受当地历史文化；5. 结尾使用给定句子，整体词数符合要求，结构清晰。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Welcome to Suzhou! I'm Li Hua, your homestay partner for the next two weeks. I can't wait to share our culture and daily life with you!
You'll stay at my home, which is near a park full of greenery. There's also a local snack street nearby where you can taste delicious sweet osmanthus cakes.
I suggest visiting Pingjiang Road, where you can feel the ancient charm of Suzhou with its stone-paved streets and small bridges over flowing water.
We can experience Pingtan, a traditional art form that combines storytelling and singing. It helps to preserve and spread the local history and culture.
I'm sure you'll love Suzhou as much as I do. See you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、苏州文化英语表达、日常介绍类写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有要点，内容贴合苏州地域特色，语言简洁流畅，结构清晰，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的欢迎信范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一封给苏州游学寄宿伙伴Mike的欢迎信，目的是帮助他了解苏州生活。写作思路：1. 承接给定开头，补充表达期待与Mike分享苏州文化和日常的心情；2. 介绍住宿周边的环境（家附近的公园、小吃街），让Mike熟悉起居周边；3. 推荐苏州特色景点平江路，展现其古雅风貌；4. 提议体验当地传统艺术评弹，感受苏州文化，确保涵盖所有要求要点，同时控制词数在90左右。
【解析】
写作时需遵循以下步骤：1. 开头已给出，补充一句“I can't wait to share our culture and daily life with you!”衔接内容；2. 介绍住宿附近的公园（full of greenery）和小吃街（可品尝sweet osmanthus cakes），说明日常起居的便利；3. 推荐平江路，描述其stone-paved streets和small bridges over flowing water，体现苏州古色古香的特点；4. 提议体验Pingtan，说明是结合storytelling和singing的传统艺术，能感受当地历史文化；5. 结尾使用给定句子，整体词数符合要求，结构清晰。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Welcome to Suzhou! I'm Li Hua, your homestay partner for the next two weeks. I can't wait to share our culture and daily life with you!
You'll stay at my home, which is near a park full of greenery. There's also a local snack street nearby where you can taste delicious sweet osmanthus cakes.
I suggest visiting Pingjiang Road, where you can feel the ancient charm of Suzhou with its stone-paved streets and small bridges over flowing water.
We can experience Pingtan, a traditional art form that combines storytelling and singing. It helps to preserve and spread the local history and culture.
I'm sure you'll love Suzhou as much as I do. See you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、苏州文化英语表达、日常介绍类写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有要点，内容贴合苏州地域特色，语言简洁流畅，结构清晰，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的欢迎信范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
