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七、书面表达
本周末我们学校将去社区中心进行志愿者活动。请根据以下提
示,用英语帮苏茜(Suzy)写一封邀请信。
(1) 早上8点在学校大门口集合,乘坐公共汽车半个小时到达社
区中心；
(2) 活动:修自行车,帮助老人打扫房间,给老人讲故事,给小孩
辅导作业,传播民间传统艺术……
(3) 希望你能来参加这次活动,度过愉快的时光。
注意:
(1) 短文应包含所有要点,可作适当发挥,要求意思连贯、语句
通顺；
(2) 词数70左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数；
(3) 不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
Dear friends,
We'll be volunteers at the community centre this weekend.
Yours,
Suzy
本周末我们学校将去社区中心进行志愿者活动。请根据以下提
示,用英语帮苏茜(Suzy)写一封邀请信。
(1) 早上8点在学校大门口集合,乘坐公共汽车半个小时到达社
区中心；
(2) 活动:修自行车,帮助老人打扫房间,给老人讲故事,给小孩
辅导作业,传播民间传统艺术……
(3) 希望你能来参加这次活动,度过愉快的时光。
注意:
(1) 短文应包含所有要点,可作适当发挥,要求意思连贯、语句
通顺；
(2) 词数70左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数；
(3) 不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
Dear friends,
We'll be volunteers at the community centre this weekend.
Yours,
Suzy
答案
One possible version:
Dear friends,
We'll be volunteers at the community centre this weekend. We will meet at the school gate at 8
o'clock in the morning. And then it will take us half an hour to get to the community centre by bus. Our
activities are colourful. We will help repair bikes and help the old people clean their rooms. At the same
time, we'll also tell stories to the old. What's more, we need to help children with their homework.
Besides, we can teach the children to make paper-cuts of animals and plants. It's very interesting and
meaningful. Or we can introduce the history of paper-cutting and its meaning to the children at the
community centre.
I hope you can come. I believe we will have a pleasant time.
Yours,
Suzy
Dear friends,
We'll be volunteers at the community centre this weekend. We will meet at the school gate at 8
o'clock in the morning. And then it will take us half an hour to get to the community centre by bus. Our
activities are colourful. We will help repair bikes and help the old people clean their rooms. At the same
time, we'll also tell stories to the old. What's more, we need to help children with their homework.
Besides, we can teach the children to make paper-cuts of animals and plants. It's very interesting and
meaningful. Or we can introduce the history of paper-cutting and its meaning to the children at the
community centre.
I hope you can come. I believe we will have a pleasant time.
Yours,
Suzy
解析
【分析】
拿到这道提纲类邀请信写作题，首先第一步先圈出所有题干给出的必写要点，避免内容遗漏：一是早上8点校门口集合、乘公交半小时到社区中心的出行安排；二是修自行车、帮老人打扫房间、给老人讲故事、辅导孩子作业、传播民间传统艺术的所有活动内容；三是发出参与邀请、祝愿大家度过愉快时光的收尾内容。第二步确定文章时态，本次活动是本周末将要开展的，统一使用一般将来时will+动词原形的结构即可。第三步梳理行文逻辑：先写出行集合相关安排，再依次介绍各类志愿活动，给“传播民间传统艺术”补充合理的具象细节比如剪纸相关内容让内容更饱满，最后衔接已给出的结尾发出邀请，同时注意用简单的连接词串联语句，控制正文词数符合70左右的要求，不出现真实人名校名。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 交代出行安排：紧接给出的开头，先写明集合的时间地点，再说明交通方式和抵达耗时，对应第一个要点：We will meet at the school gate at 8 o'clock in the morning. And then it will take us half an hour to get to the community centre by bus.
2. 介绍志愿活动：用连接词串联所有提示的活动，补充民间传统艺术的具体内容，覆盖第二个要点：Our activities are colourful. We will help repair bikes and help the old people clean their rooms. At the same time, we'll also tell stories to the old. What's more, we need to help children with their homework. Besides, we can teach the children to make paper-cuts, a traditional Chinese folk art, to pass on our traditional culture.
3. 收尾发出邀请：对应第三个要点，写明期待大家参与，共度愉快时光，衔接好已给出的结尾部分。最后通读全文检查所有要点是否覆盖、语法是否正确、词数是否符合要求，调整语句让行文更通顺连贯。
【答案】
Dear friends,
We'll be volunteers at the community centre this weekend. We will meet at the school gate at 8 o'clock in the morning. And then it will take us half an hour to get to the community centre by bus. Our activities are colourful. We will help repair bikes and help the old people clean their rooms. At the same time, we'll also tell stories to the old. What's more, we need to help children with their homework. Besides, we can teach the children to make paper-cuts of animals and plants. It's very interesting and meaningful. Or we can introduce the history of paper-cutting and its meaning to the children at the community centre.
I hope you can come. I believe we will have a pleasant time.
Yours,
Suzy
【知识点】
一般将来时，应用文写作，提纲作文
【点评】
本题是基础的提纲类邀请信写作，所有核心要点都已明确给出，学生只需要将提示信息用正确的英语表达串联，适当补充合理细节即可完成，难度较低，写作时注意不要遗漏要点，行文加入少量衔接词就能让语句更流畅自然，拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道提纲类邀请信写作题，首先第一步先圈出所有题干给出的必写要点，避免内容遗漏：一是早上8点校门口集合、乘公交半小时到社区中心的出行安排；二是修自行车、帮老人打扫房间、给老人讲故事、辅导孩子作业、传播民间传统艺术的所有活动内容；三是发出参与邀请、祝愿大家度过愉快时光的收尾内容。第二步确定文章时态，本次活动是本周末将要开展的，统一使用一般将来时will+动词原形的结构即可。第三步梳理行文逻辑：先写出行集合相关安排，再依次介绍各类志愿活动，给“传播民间传统艺术”补充合理的具象细节比如剪纸相关内容让内容更饱满，最后衔接已给出的结尾发出邀请，同时注意用简单的连接词串联语句，控制正文词数符合70左右的要求，不出现真实人名校名。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 交代出行安排：紧接给出的开头，先写明集合的时间地点，再说明交通方式和抵达耗时，对应第一个要点：We will meet at the school gate at 8 o'clock in the morning. And then it will take us half an hour to get to the community centre by bus.
2. 介绍志愿活动：用连接词串联所有提示的活动，补充民间传统艺术的具体内容，覆盖第二个要点：Our activities are colourful. We will help repair bikes and help the old people clean their rooms. At the same time, we'll also tell stories to the old. What's more, we need to help children with their homework. Besides, we can teach the children to make paper-cuts, a traditional Chinese folk art, to pass on our traditional culture.
3. 收尾发出邀请：对应第三个要点，写明期待大家参与，共度愉快时光，衔接好已给出的结尾部分。最后通读全文检查所有要点是否覆盖、语法是否正确、词数是否符合要求，调整语句让行文更通顺连贯。
【答案】
Dear friends,
We'll be volunteers at the community centre this weekend. We will meet at the school gate at 8 o'clock in the morning. And then it will take us half an hour to get to the community centre by bus. Our activities are colourful. We will help repair bikes and help the old people clean their rooms. At the same time, we'll also tell stories to the old. What's more, we need to help children with their homework. Besides, we can teach the children to make paper-cuts of animals and plants. It's very interesting and meaningful. Or we can introduce the history of paper-cutting and its meaning to the children at the community centre.
I hope you can come. I believe we will have a pleasant time.
Yours,
Suzy
【知识点】
一般将来时，应用文写作，提纲作文
【点评】
本题是基础的提纲类邀请信写作，所有核心要点都已明确给出，学生只需要将提示信息用正确的英语表达串联，适当补充合理细节即可完成，难度较低，写作时注意不要遗漏要点，行文加入少量衔接词就能让语句更流畅自然，拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7
