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Ⅶ. 书面表达(共15分)
假如你叫王华，你校将开展“最美青年”评选活动，你班决定推选 Sandy 参加本次评选，你草拟了介绍 Sandy 的思维导图，请根据下图用英文写一封推荐信。
注意事项:1. 推荐信内容须根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 100 词左右，推荐信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
We are writing to recommend Sandy in our class as "The Most Beautiful Youth" in our school.
We think Sandy is the most suitable person for this award. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
假如你叫王华，你校将开展“最美青年”评选活动，你班决定推选 Sandy 参加本次评选，你草拟了介绍 Sandy 的思维导图，请根据下图用英文写一封推荐信。
注意事项:1. 推荐信内容须根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 100 词左右，推荐信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
We are writing to recommend Sandy in our class as "The Most Beautiful Youth" in our school.
As the monitor in our class, Sandy often wears a smile on her face and looks very confident, and she is always ready to help other students. She is interested in films and she is good at decorating the house. Meanwhile, she has a strong sense of duty. Several months ago, after we finished the final exam, our teacher asked some volunteers to clean the classroom. She stood up immediately, and began to clean the classroom. Then it was certain that we were so touched by her unselfish behaviour that almost all of my classmates began to help her to clean the classroom. Her sense of duty is the most important thing that a good monitor should have. Her motto is "Plan for the worst and hope for the best".
We think Sandy is the most suitable person for this award. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
答案
Ⅶ. One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
We are writing to recommend Sandy in our class as "The Most Beautiful Youth" in our school.
As the monitor in our class, Sandy often wears a smile on her face and looks very confident, and she is always ready to help other students. She is interested in films and she is good at decorating the house. Meanwhile, she has a strong sense of duty. Several months ago, after we finished the final exam, our teacher asked some volunteers to clean the classroom. She stood up immediately, and began to clean the classroom. Then it was certain that we were so touched by her unselfish behaviour that almost all of my classmates began to help her to clean the classroom. Her sense of duty is the most important thing that a good monitor should have. Her motto is "Plan for the worst and hope for the best".
We think Sandy is the most suitable person for this award. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
思路梳理 审题:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文。文章的主要时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。因为是描写他人的性格、爱好、座右铭以及优秀事迹,文章以第三人称为主。
写作步骤:第一步,开头已给出;第二步,根据提示介绍Sandy 的个人信息;第三步,最后希望对方可以同意自己的请求。
Dear Sir or Madam,
We are writing to recommend Sandy in our class as "The Most Beautiful Youth" in our school.
As the monitor in our class, Sandy often wears a smile on her face and looks very confident, and she is always ready to help other students. She is interested in films and she is good at decorating the house. Meanwhile, she has a strong sense of duty. Several months ago, after we finished the final exam, our teacher asked some volunteers to clean the classroom. She stood up immediately, and began to clean the classroom. Then it was certain that we were so touched by her unselfish behaviour that almost all of my classmates began to help her to clean the classroom. Her sense of duty is the most important thing that a good monitor should have. Her motto is "Plan for the worst and hope for the best".
We think Sandy is the most suitable person for this award. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
思路梳理 审题:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文。文章的主要时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。因为是描写他人的性格、爱好、座右铭以及优秀事迹,文章以第三人称为主。
写作步骤:第一步,开头已给出;第二步,根据提示介绍Sandy 的个人信息;第三步,最后希望对方可以同意自己的请求。
解析
【分析】
这是一篇应用文类的推荐信写作，解题时首先要明确核心要求：第一，必须完整覆盖思维导图给出的四个写作维度：Sandy的性格、爱好、座右铭、优秀事迹，不能遗漏要点；第二，确定人称和时态规则：介绍人物常态的性格、日常爱好使用一般现在时，讲述过往发生的优秀事迹使用一般过去时，全程以第三人称she指代Sandy；第三，梳理行文逻辑，先介绍人物的性格特质，再自然带出她的日常爱好，之后引出她的座右铭，最后用具体的小事例支撑她的优秀品质，符合推荐信的正式表达逻辑，控制正文内容词数在100左右，顺畅衔接题目已经给出的首尾段落即可。
【解析】
写作按照清晰的步骤推进：
1. 承接题目给出的开头，首先介绍Sandy的性格：点明她是本班班长，性格开朗自信，总是面带微笑，一贯热心主动帮助身边的同学，拥有很强的责任感。
2. 接着补充她的爱好：说明她平时喜爱电影，也擅长做家居布置相关的事，让人物形象更鲜活立体。
3. 之后自然引出她的座右铭：她一直信奉“做最坏的打算，抱最大的希望”的人生准则。
4. 最后叙述具体的优秀事迹：几个月前期末考试结束后，老师招募志愿者打扫教室，Sandy第一时间主动举手留下打扫，她无私的举动打动了全班同学，大家都主动上前帮忙，这件事充分体现了她的优秀品质，完全符合“最美青年”的评选标准，顺畅衔接题目给出的结尾段落。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
We are writing to recommend Sandy in our class as "The Most Beautiful Youth" in our school.
As the monitor in our class, Sandy often wears a smile on her face and looks very confident, and she is always ready to help other students. She is interested in films and she is good at decorating the house. Meanwhile, she has a strong sense of duty. Several months ago, after we finished the final exam, our teacher asked some volunteers to clean the classroom. She stood up immediately, and began to clean the classroom. Then it was certain that we were so touched by her unselfish behaviour that almost all of my classmates began to help her to clean the classroom. Her sense of duty is the most important thing that a good monitor should have. Her motto is "Plan for the worst and hope for the best".
We think Sandy is the most suitable person for this award. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
【知识点】
英语推荐信写作，人物描写，时态正确运用
【点评】
本题属于提示类人物介绍书面表达，思维导图已经明确给出所有写作要点，不需要学生自行构思人物设定，难度较低，重点考察学生对叙事逻辑的梳理能力，以及不同场景下时态切换的熟练度，只要做到要点全覆盖、语句通顺连贯，就能拿到较高分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇应用文类的推荐信写作，解题时首先要明确核心要求：第一，必须完整覆盖思维导图给出的四个写作维度：Sandy的性格、爱好、座右铭、优秀事迹，不能遗漏要点；第二，确定人称和时态规则：介绍人物常态的性格、日常爱好使用一般现在时，讲述过往发生的优秀事迹使用一般过去时，全程以第三人称she指代Sandy；第三，梳理行文逻辑，先介绍人物的性格特质，再自然带出她的日常爱好，之后引出她的座右铭，最后用具体的小事例支撑她的优秀品质，符合推荐信的正式表达逻辑，控制正文内容词数在100左右，顺畅衔接题目已经给出的首尾段落即可。
【解析】
写作按照清晰的步骤推进：
1. 承接题目给出的开头，首先介绍Sandy的性格：点明她是本班班长，性格开朗自信，总是面带微笑，一贯热心主动帮助身边的同学，拥有很强的责任感。
2. 接着补充她的爱好：说明她平时喜爱电影，也擅长做家居布置相关的事，让人物形象更鲜活立体。
3. 之后自然引出她的座右铭：她一直信奉“做最坏的打算，抱最大的希望”的人生准则。
4. 最后叙述具体的优秀事迹：几个月前期末考试结束后，老师招募志愿者打扫教室，Sandy第一时间主动举手留下打扫，她无私的举动打动了全班同学，大家都主动上前帮忙，这件事充分体现了她的优秀品质，完全符合“最美青年”的评选标准，顺畅衔接题目给出的结尾段落。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
We are writing to recommend Sandy in our class as "The Most Beautiful Youth" in our school.
As the monitor in our class, Sandy often wears a smile on her face and looks very confident, and she is always ready to help other students. She is interested in films and she is good at decorating the house. Meanwhile, she has a strong sense of duty. Several months ago, after we finished the final exam, our teacher asked some volunteers to clean the classroom. She stood up immediately, and began to clean the classroom. Then it was certain that we were so touched by her unselfish behaviour that almost all of my classmates began to help her to clean the classroom. Her sense of duty is the most important thing that a good monitor should have. Her motto is "Plan for the worst and hope for the best".
We think Sandy is the most suitable person for this award. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
【知识点】
英语推荐信写作，人物描写，时态正确运用
【点评】
本题属于提示类人物介绍书面表达，思维导图已经明确给出所有写作要点，不需要学生自行构思人物设定，难度较低，重点考察学生对叙事逻辑的梳理能力，以及不同场景下时态切换的熟练度，只要做到要点全覆盖、语句通顺连贯，就能拿到较高分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
