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61. 某英语报正在举办以“Tell a traditional Chinese story”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华,请根据下面的四幅图片,写一篇英语短文投稿。
注意:
(1) 文中必须包含图片所示情节,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等相关信息;
(3) 词数:80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
Long long ago, there was a fox in a forest.
注意:
(1) 文中必须包含图片所示情节,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等相关信息;
(3) 词数:80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
Long long ago, there was a fox in a forest.
答案
61. One possible version:
Long long ago, there was a fox in a forest. One day, a hungry tiger caught the fox and wanted to eat him. The fox was very scared but he had a clever idea quickly. He told the tiger that he was the king of animals. If the tiger ate him, the tiger would get punishment. The tiger didn't believe what the fox said. Thus, the fox asked the tiger to follow him and walk around the forest. As soon as the animals saw them, they were so afraid that they ran away at once. Seeing this, the tiger believed what the fox said and let him go.
Long long ago, there was a fox in a forest. One day, a hungry tiger caught the fox and wanted to eat him. The fox was very scared but he had a clever idea quickly. He told the tiger that he was the king of animals. If the tiger ate him, the tiger would get punishment. The tiger didn't believe what the fox said. Thus, the fox asked the tiger to follow him and walk around the forest. As soon as the animals saw them, they were so afraid that they ran away at once. Seeing this, the tiger believed what the fox said and let him go.
解析
【分析】本题为英语看图续写短文题，主题是中国传统故事《狐假虎威》。解题时需先对应四幅图的关键词梳理情节：第一幅图对应“hungry, catch”，即饥饿的老虎抓住狐狸；第二幅图对应“clever, king of animals”，即狐狸谎称自己是百兽之王；第三幅图对应“follow, walk around”，即狐狸让老虎跟随自己在森林行走；第四幅图对应“afraid, run away”，即动物们见它们就害怕逃跑。需将这些情节连贯融入短文，结合给定首句续写，保证用词准确、语篇连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】首先承接首句，续写对应第一幅图的情节：One day, a hungry tiger caught the fox and wanted to eat him. 接着对应第二幅图：The fox was very scared but he had a clever idea. He told the tiger that he was the king of animals. 再对应第三幅图：He asked the tiger to follow him and walk around the forest. 最后对应第四幅图：As soon as the animals saw them, they were so afraid that they ran away at once. Seeing this, the tiger believed what the fox said and let him go. 这样既覆盖所有图片情节，又逻辑连贯，符合写作要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Long long ago, there was a fox in a forest. One day, a hungry tiger caught the fox and wanted to eat him. The fox was very scared but he had a clever idea quickly. He told the tiger that he was the king of animals. If the tiger ate him, the tiger would get punishment. The tiger didn't believe what the fox said. Thus, the fox asked the tiger to follow him and walk around the forest. As soon as the animals saw them, they were so afraid that they ran away at once. Seeing this, the tiger believed what the fox said and let him go.
【知识点】英语看图写作，故事叙述，词汇运用
【点评】本题结合传统故事与图片提示，考查学生将图片信息转化为连贯英语短文的能力，同时融入指定关键词，是对基础写作能力的综合考查，符合英语写作题的常见命题形式。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先承接首句，续写对应第一幅图的情节：One day, a hungry tiger caught the fox and wanted to eat him. 接着对应第二幅图：The fox was very scared but he had a clever idea. He told the tiger that he was the king of animals. 再对应第三幅图：He asked the tiger to follow him and walk around the forest. 最后对应第四幅图：As soon as the animals saw them, they were so afraid that they ran away at once. Seeing this, the tiger believed what the fox said and let him go. 这样既覆盖所有图片情节，又逻辑连贯，符合写作要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Long long ago, there was a fox in a forest. One day, a hungry tiger caught the fox and wanted to eat him. The fox was very scared but he had a clever idea quickly. He told the tiger that he was the king of animals. If the tiger ate him, the tiger would get punishment. The tiger didn't believe what the fox said. Thus, the fox asked the tiger to follow him and walk around the forest. As soon as the animals saw them, they were so afraid that they ran away at once. Seeing this, the tiger believed what the fox said and let him go.
【知识点】英语看图写作，故事叙述，词汇运用
【点评】本题结合传统故事与图片提示，考查学生将图片信息转化为连贯英语短文的能力，同时融入指定关键词，是对基础写作能力的综合考查，符合英语写作题的常见命题形式。
【难度系数】0.5
