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十二、书面表达。(10 分)(2024·金华浦江)
分享了“Changes around us”后，老师让同学们分享小学六年时光中自己的成长变化以及记忆深刻的往事。请根据表格提供的信息补全空格并以“Changes in me”为主题进行仿写。不少于三句话。
| Name | Sarah | Wu Binbin | You |
| ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- |
| Changes | short hair → long hair | short → tall | ... |
| | swim | play badminton | ... |
| Special things | the zoo
Robin
see many animals | Xinjiang
uncle
go camping, eat fresh food | ...
...
...（此表为草稿，不计分） |
Word bank: long hair, short hair, thin, strong, quiet, active... play basketball, play football, play ping-pong, play the erhu, play the pipa, play the piano, ride a horse, ride a bike, cook, ice-skate...
How time flies! I changed a lot. Before, I had short hair. Now, I have long hair. Before, I couldn't swim. Now, I like 1
How time flies! I changed a lot. Before, I was short. Now I'm tall. Before, I couldn't play badminton. Now I like playing badminton. I often play badminton after school. Last Labour Day holiday, I went to Xinjiang with my uncle. We 3
How time flies! I changed a lot. Before, I 5
10
分享了“Changes around us”后，老师让同学们分享小学六年时光中自己的成长变化以及记忆深刻的往事。请根据表格提供的信息补全空格并以“Changes in me”为主题进行仿写。不少于三句话。
| Name | Sarah | Wu Binbin | You |
| ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- |
| Changes | short hair → long hair | short → tall | ... |
| | swim | play badminton | ... |
| Special things | the zoo
Robin
see many animals | Xinjiang
uncle
go camping, eat fresh food | ...
...
...（此表为草稿，不计分） |
Word bank: long hair, short hair, thin, strong, quiet, active... play basketball, play football, play ping-pong, play the erhu, play the pipa, play the piano, ride a horse, ride a bike, cook, ice-skate...
How time flies! I changed a lot. Before, I had short hair. Now, I have long hair. Before, I couldn't swim. Now, I like 1
swimming
. I often go swimming on the weekend. One year ago, I went to the zoo with Robin. We 2 saw
many animals. That was so fun!How time flies! I changed a lot. Before, I was short. Now I'm tall. Before, I couldn't play badminton. Now I like playing badminton. I often play badminton after school. Last Labour Day holiday, I went to Xinjiang with my uncle. We 3
went camping
and 4 ate fresh food
. That was so cool!How time flies! I changed a lot. Before, I 5
was quiet
. Now I 6 am active
. Before, I couldn't 7 ride a bike
. Now I 8 like cycling
. 9 I often go cycling on the weekend with my father.
10
Last weekend, I had a cycling race and won. I was exciting.
答案
1. swimming 2. saw 3. went camping 4. ate fresh food
5—10.参考范文：
How time flies! I changed a lot. Before, I was quiet. Now I am active. Before, I couldn't ride a bike. Now I like cycling. I often go cycling on the weekend with my father. Last weekend, I had a cycling race and won. I was exciting.
5—10.参考范文：
How time flies! I changed a lot. Before, I was quiet. Now I am active. Before, I couldn't ride a bike. Now I like cycling. I often go cycling on the weekend with my father. Last weekend, I had a cycling race and won. I was exciting.
解析
【分析】
解题时，先明确题目要求：围绕“Changes in me”主题补全空格并仿写，需结合示例的一般过去时时态和语境。第一步处理前4个空格：根据Sarah的变化（不会游泳→喜欢游泳），第一空用动名词swimming；第二空对应“看动物”的过去动作，用see的过去式saw；再根据Wu Binbin的经历，第三、四空对应表格里的活动，用过去式went camping和ate fresh food。第二步仿写部分：需围绕自身成长变化，用Word bank的词汇（如性格、技能变化），结合具体事例，确保语句通顺、不少于三句话。
【解析】
1. 补全空格：①第一空：前句“Before, I couldn't swim. Now, I like...”，like后接动名词，故填swimming；②第二空：“去动物园看动物”是过去的动作，用see的过去式saw；③第三、四空：对应Wu Binbin去新疆的活动，表格中“go camping, eat fresh food”的过去式为went camping和ate fresh food。2. 仿写部分：需结合自身实际，用一般过去时描述变化，如性格从安静到活跃、技能从不会骑车到喜欢骑车，添加具体经历（如周末骑车、比赛），符合要求即可。
【答案】
1. swimming 2. saw 3. went camping 4. ate fresh food
5—10.参考范文：
How time flies! I changed a lot. Before, I was quiet. Now I am active. Before, I couldn't ride a bike. Now I like cycling. I often go cycling on the weekend with my father. Last weekend, I had a cycling race and won. I was exciting.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、一般过去时、词汇运用
【点评】
本题以“成长变化”为话题，贴近学生生活，既考查了一般过去时的正确运用，又锻炼了学生的语言组织和表达能力，要求学生结合自身实际仿写，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
解题时，先明确题目要求：围绕“Changes in me”主题补全空格并仿写，需结合示例的一般过去时时态和语境。第一步处理前4个空格：根据Sarah的变化（不会游泳→喜欢游泳），第一空用动名词swimming；第二空对应“看动物”的过去动作，用see的过去式saw；再根据Wu Binbin的经历，第三、四空对应表格里的活动，用过去式went camping和ate fresh food。第二步仿写部分：需围绕自身成长变化，用Word bank的词汇（如性格、技能变化），结合具体事例，确保语句通顺、不少于三句话。
【解析】
1. 补全空格：①第一空：前句“Before, I couldn't swim. Now, I like...”，like后接动名词，故填swimming；②第二空：“去动物园看动物”是过去的动作，用see的过去式saw；③第三、四空：对应Wu Binbin去新疆的活动，表格中“go camping, eat fresh food”的过去式为went camping和ate fresh food。2. 仿写部分：需结合自身实际，用一般过去时描述变化，如性格从安静到活跃、技能从不会骑车到喜欢骑车，添加具体经历（如周末骑车、比赛），符合要求即可。
【答案】
1. swimming 2. saw 3. went camping 4. ate fresh food
5—10.参考范文：
How time flies! I changed a lot. Before, I was quiet. Now I am active. Before, I couldn't ride a bike. Now I like cycling. I often go cycling on the weekend with my father. Last weekend, I had a cycling race and won. I was exciting.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、一般过去时、词汇运用
【点评】
本题以“成长变化”为话题，贴近学生生活，既考查了一般过去时的正确运用，又锻炼了学生的语言组织和表达能力，要求学生结合自身实际仿写，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
