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有一句英语谚语叫“East or west, home is best.”。家是我们休憩的港湾,请以“My Home”为题,用英文写一篇80词左右的短文来谈谈你对家的理解。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。要点如下:
1. 家不仅是我们生活的地方,更是一个充满爱的地方(当开心或失意时……);
2. 家也是一个学习之余放松的地方(一边品尝妈妈做的可口饭菜,一边交流学习生活,使自己得到放松……)。
My Home
Home is not just a place where we live,
有一句英语谚语叫“East or west, home is best.”。家是我们休憩的港湾,请以“My Home”为题,用英文写一篇80词左右的短文来谈谈你对家的理解。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。要点如下:
1. 家不仅是我们生活的地方,更是一个充满爱的地方(当开心或失意时……);
2. 家也是一个学习之余放松的地方(一边品尝妈妈做的可口饭菜,一边交流学习生活,使自己得到放松……)。
My Home
Home is not just a place where we live,
but a place where family support or show their love to each other. When we have something happy, we first look forward to sharing it with our family. Also, when we get into trouble, home is the first place where we look for support and comfort. In short, home is not only a house we live in, but also our home of spirit.
Home is also the place where we can relax ourselves after a busy day. Sharing school life with family is what we often do at the dinner table. Mum's tasty meals can make us happy and relaxed. We are always happy with ourselves at home.
Just as the saying goes, "East or west, home is the best. "I love my home!
答案
【参考范文】
My Home
Home is not just a place where we live, but a place where family support or show their love to each other. When we have something happy, we first look forward to sharing it with our family. Also, when we get into trouble, home is the first place where we look for support and comfort. In short, home is not only a house we live in, but also our home of spirit.
Home is also the place where we can relax ourselves after a busy day. Sharing school life with family is what we often do at the dinner table. Mum's tasty meals can make us happy and relaxed. We are always happy with ourselves at home.
Just as the saying goes, "East or west, home is the best. "I love my home!
My Home
Home is not just a place where we live, but a place where family support or show their love to each other. When we have something happy, we first look forward to sharing it with our family. Also, when we get into trouble, home is the first place where we look for support and comfort. In short, home is not only a house we live in, but also our home of spirit.
Home is also the place where we can relax ourselves after a busy day. Sharing school life with family is what we often do at the dinner table. Mum's tasty meals can make us happy and relaxed. We are always happy with ourselves at home.
Just as the saying goes, "East or west, home is the best. "I love my home!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题作文，要求以“My Home”为题，围绕“家是充满爱的地方”和“家是放松的地方”两个要点写作。需先承接给定开头，分别阐述两个要点，最后用谚语收尾，注意词数要求，语言要通顺自然，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 承接开头句，用“but a place full of love”引出第一个要点：当有开心的事时，会和家人分享；遇到困难时，家是寻求支持和安慰的地方。
2. 接着阐述第二个要点：忙碌一天后，家是放松的地方，和家人交流校园生活，妈妈做的美食能让人放松。
3. 最后引用谚语“East or west, home is the best.”点题，表达对家的热爱。
【答案】
My Home
Home is not just a place where we live, but a place where family support or show their love to each other. When we have something happy, we first look forward to sharing it with our family. Also, when we get into trouble, home is the first place where we look for support and comfort. In short, home is not only a house we live in, but also our home of spirit.
Home is also the place where we can relax ourselves after a busy day. Sharing school life with family is what we often do at the dinner table. Mum's tasty meals can make us happy and relaxed. We are always happy with ourselves at home.
Just as the saying goes, "East or west, home is the best. "I love my home!
【知识点】英语话题写作；家的主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，围绕家的两个核心要点展开，结构清晰，语言流畅，结尾引用谚语升华主题，符合80词左右的要求，准确表达了对家的理解。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题作文，要求以“My Home”为题，围绕“家是充满爱的地方”和“家是放松的地方”两个要点写作。需先承接给定开头，分别阐述两个要点，最后用谚语收尾，注意词数要求，语言要通顺自然，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 承接开头句，用“but a place full of love”引出第一个要点：当有开心的事时，会和家人分享；遇到困难时，家是寻求支持和安慰的地方。
2. 接着阐述第二个要点：忙碌一天后，家是放松的地方，和家人交流校园生活，妈妈做的美食能让人放松。
3. 最后引用谚语“East or west, home is the best.”点题，表达对家的热爱。
【答案】
My Home
Home is not just a place where we live, but a place where family support or show their love to each other. When we have something happy, we first look forward to sharing it with our family. Also, when we get into trouble, home is the first place where we look for support and comfort. In short, home is not only a house we live in, but also our home of spirit.
Home is also the place where we can relax ourselves after a busy day. Sharing school life with family is what we often do at the dinner table. Mum's tasty meals can make us happy and relaxed. We are always happy with ourselves at home.
Just as the saying goes, "East or west, home is the best. "I love my home!
【知识点】英语话题写作；家的主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，围绕家的两个核心要点展开，结构清晰，语言流畅，结尾引用谚语升华主题，符合80词左右的要求，准确表达了对家的理解。
【难度系数】
0.5
