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第5课时 主题写作专项 练写作 答案D9
主题词网
优选词汇
个人信息
• name • first name • last name • full name • English name
• Chinese name • family name • middle name • information • phone number
学校
• school • grade • class • classmate • middle school
• lesson • subject • class teacher • at school • have classes/lessons
爱好
• run • sing • dance • play the guitar • play the piano
• swim • paint • read books • watch TV • listen to music
• play games • play sports • play tennis • play football • play basketball
写作实例
•审主题 •审人称：以第一人称为主 •审时态：一般现在时
假设你是北京阳光中学（Sunshine Middle School）的六年级学生李华，今天你要参加学校举办的主题为“This is me!”的演讲比赛。请写一篇自我介绍的演讲稿，内容包括个人信息和爱好等。
注意：1.必须包含上述要点，可以适当发挥想象；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3.词数70左右。
•审词数
写作支架
教材原文
P30▶ I'm 13 years old.
P30▶ Now, I live in Beijing with my family.
P30▶ My favourite sport is tennis.
P30▶ I like music, and I play the guitar in the school band.
优秀范文
Hello everyone,①
I'd like to introduce myself first.②
My name is Li Hua. I'm 13 years old. I am a student in Beijing Sunshine Middle School.
There are three people in my family.② Now, I live in Beijing with my family. I have some different hobbies.③ I like all kinds of sports. My favourite sport is tennis. I like music, and I play the guitar in the school band.④ I also like reading books.
This is me.⑤ Do you want to make friends with me?
初中英语 六年级 上册 鲁教版
亮点评析
①开头语符合演讲稿的格式。
②以I'd like to...句式引出下文中的自我介绍；there be句型使文章句式更丰富。
③该句是总述句，引出对爱好的具体描述。
④并列句的使用丰富了文章的句式。
⑤做到了首尾呼应。
主题词网
优选词汇
个人信息
• name • first name • last name • full name • English name
• Chinese name • family name • middle name • information • phone number
学校
• school • grade • class • classmate • middle school
• lesson • subject • class teacher • at school • have classes/lessons
爱好
• run • sing • dance • play the guitar • play the piano
• swim • paint • read books • watch TV • listen to music
• play games • play sports • play tennis • play football • play basketball
写作实例
•审主题 •审人称：以第一人称为主 •审时态：一般现在时
假设你是北京阳光中学（Sunshine Middle School）的六年级学生李华，今天你要参加学校举办的主题为“This is me!”的演讲比赛。请写一篇自我介绍的演讲稿，内容包括个人信息和爱好等。
注意：1.必须包含上述要点，可以适当发挥想象；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3.词数70左右。
•审词数
写作支架
教材原文
P30▶ I'm 13 years old.
P30▶ Now, I live in Beijing with my family.
P30▶ My favourite sport is tennis.
P30▶ I like music, and I play the guitar in the school band.
优秀范文
Hello everyone,①
I'd like to introduce myself first.②
My name is Li Hua. I'm 13 years old. I am a student in Beijing Sunshine Middle School.
There are three people in my family.② Now, I live in Beijing with my family. I have some different hobbies.③ I like all kinds of sports. My favourite sport is tennis. I like music, and I play the guitar in the school band.④ I also like reading books.
This is me.⑤ Do you want to make friends with me?
初中英语 六年级 上册 鲁教版
亮点评析
①开头语符合演讲稿的格式。
②以I'd like to...句式引出下文中的自我介绍；there be句型使文章句式更丰富。
③该句是总述句，引出对爱好的具体描述。
④并列句的使用丰富了文章的句式。
⑤做到了首尾呼应。
答案
优秀范文
Hello everyone,
I'd like to introduce myself first.
My name is Li Hua. I'm 13 years old. I am a student in Beijing Sunshine Middle School.
There are three people in my family. Now, I live in Beijing with my family. I have some different hobbies. I like all kinds of sports. My favourite sport is tennis. I like music, and I play the guitar in the school band. I also like reading books.
This is me. Do you want to make friends with me?
初中英语 六年级 上册 鲁教版
亮点评析
①开头语符合演讲稿的格式。
②以I'd like to...句式引出下文中的自我介绍；there be句型使文章句式更丰富。
③该句是总述句，引出对爱好的具体描述。
④并列句的使用丰富了文章的句式。
⑤做到了首尾呼应。
Hello everyone,
I'd like to introduce myself first.
My name is Li Hua. I'm 13 years old. I am a student in Beijing Sunshine Middle School.
There are three people in my family. Now, I live in Beijing with my family. I have some different hobbies. I like all kinds of sports. My favourite sport is tennis. I like music, and I play the guitar in the school band. I also like reading books.
This is me. Do you want to make friends with me?
初中英语 六年级 上册 鲁教版
亮点评析
①开头语符合演讲稿的格式。
②以I'd like to...句式引出下文中的自我介绍；there be句型使文章句式更丰富。
③该句是总述句，引出对爱好的具体描述。
④并列句的使用丰富了文章的句式。
⑤做到了首尾呼应。
解析
【分析】
本题是六年级英语主题写作题，要求以第一人称、一般现在时完成题为“This is me!”的演讲稿，需包含个人信息、家庭情况、爱好等要点。解题思路：1. 审清要求：人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时，符合演讲稿格式，词数70左右；2. 按“开头问候+开篇点题→中间介绍个人信息、家庭、爱好→结尾总结+发出邀请”的结构组织内容，运用高分句式（如I'd like to...、There are...），覆盖所有要点，适当发挥，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头：用Hello everyone问候，以高分句式I'd like to introduce myself first开篇点题，符合演讲稿格式；2. 中间：依次介绍个人信息（姓名、年龄、学校），家庭情况（人数、居住情况），爱好（总述后具体说明运动、音乐、阅读等爱好），运用There are...等丰富句式；3. 结尾：用This is me总结，以Do you want to make friends with me?发出邀请，首尾呼应，符合要求。
【答案】
Hello everyone,
I'd like to introduce myself first.
My name is Li Hua. I'm 13 years old. I am a student in Beijing Sunshine Middle School.
There are three people in my family. Now, I live in Beijing with my family. I have some different hobbies. I like all kinds of sports. My favourite sport is tennis. I like music, and I play the guitar in the school band. I also like reading books.
This is me. Do you want to make friends with me?
【知识点】
英语写作、一般现在时、演讲稿格式
【点评】
本题紧扣单元主题，考查学生自我介绍类写作的基本能力，要求掌握常用句式和写作结构，符合六年级学生的英语水平，注重语言准确性与句式多样性，是基础且典型的写作训练题。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是六年级英语主题写作题，要求以第一人称、一般现在时完成题为“This is me!”的演讲稿，需包含个人信息、家庭情况、爱好等要点。解题思路：1. 审清要求：人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时，符合演讲稿格式，词数70左右；2. 按“开头问候+开篇点题→中间介绍个人信息、家庭、爱好→结尾总结+发出邀请”的结构组织内容，运用高分句式（如I'd like to...、There are...），覆盖所有要点，适当发挥，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头：用Hello everyone问候，以高分句式I'd like to introduce myself first开篇点题，符合演讲稿格式；2. 中间：依次介绍个人信息（姓名、年龄、学校），家庭情况（人数、居住情况），爱好（总述后具体说明运动、音乐、阅读等爱好），运用There are...等丰富句式；3. 结尾：用This is me总结，以Do you want to make friends with me?发出邀请，首尾呼应，符合要求。
【答案】
Hello everyone,
I'd like to introduce myself first.
My name is Li Hua. I'm 13 years old. I am a student in Beijing Sunshine Middle School.
There are three people in my family. Now, I live in Beijing with my family. I have some different hobbies. I like all kinds of sports. My favourite sport is tennis. I like music, and I play the guitar in the school band. I also like reading books.
This is me. Do you want to make friends with me?
【知识点】
英语写作、一般现在时、演讲稿格式
【点评】
本题紧扣单元主题，考查学生自我介绍类写作的基本能力，要求掌握常用句式和写作结构，符合六年级学生的英语水平，注重语言准确性与句式多样性，是基础且典型的写作训练题。
【难度系数】
0.3
