写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D9
一位英国网友Richard在网络上发了一个交友帖子，他想结交一位中国朋友，假如你是李华，请你阅读他的帖子并用英语给他写一封信。
Making New Friends
Hi, I am Richard Miller. I am 13 years old. I want to make friends with you. How old are you? Can you tell me something about yourself and your favourite things? Do you want to be my friend?

要求:1.语言流畅、书写规范,词数不少于70；
2.文章中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Dear Richard,






I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua

第5课时 主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Richard,
Hi! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to be your new friend. Now let me tell you something about myself.
I'm also 13 years old, just like you! I come from Nanjing, but now I live in Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China. It is a beautiful city.
I have some favourites. My favourite food is beef noodles. My favourite colour is blue. I like sports and my favourite sport is basketball. I like listening to music. I also like reading books.
That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Richard,
Hi! I'm Li Hua. It's great to know that you want to have a new friend. I'd like to. Now I'd like to introduce myself first.
I'm a boy of your age. I come from Nanjing, but now I live in Beijing, the capital of China. It is a beautiful city with lots of places of interest.
There are a lot of things I like best. My favourite food is beef noodles. My favourite colour is blue because it can make me calm. I like sports and my favourite sport is basketball. I like listening to music. I also like reading books. The hobbies can make me happy.
That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua

【分析】本题要求以李华的身份给英国网友Richard写交友回信，需遵循英语书信格式，回应Richard帖子中的问题（年龄、个人情况、喜好）并表达交友意愿。解题思路：①开头问候并表明想成为朋友的意愿；②介绍自身基本信息（年龄、居住地）；③说明自己的喜好（食物、颜色、运动、爱好等）；④结尾表达期待回信，确保词数不少于70，不出现真实校名、姓名。
【解析】按照英语书信的规范格式，依次完成各部分内容，确保语言流畅、要点齐全：
1. 开头：问候并表明交友意愿；
2. 主体：介绍年龄、居住地，再列举自身喜好；
3. 结尾：表达期待回信。
具体内容如下：
Dear Richard,
Hi! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to be your new friend. Now let me tell you something about myself.
I'm also 13 years old, just like you! I come from Nanjing, but now I live in Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China. It is a beautiful city.
I have some favourites. My favourite food is beef noodles. My favourite colour is blue. I like sports and my favourite sport is basketball. I like listening to music. I also like reading books.
That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Richard,
Hi! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to be your new friend. Now let me tell you something about myself.
I'm also 13 years old, just like you! I come from Nanjing, but now I live in Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China. It is a beautiful city.
I have some favourites. My favourite food is beef noodles. My favourite colour is blue. I like sports and my favourite sport is basketball. I like listening to music. I also like reading books.
That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作；个人情况介绍
【点评】
本题为英语应用文写作题，考查学生对书信格式的掌握及个人情况介绍的语言表达能力，是初中英语常见写作题型，贴近学生生活，易于上手。
【难度系数】
0.6