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76. 假设你是李华，正在社交媒体上直播分享你的旅行经历。你的外国好友们纷纷留言“The West Lake is amazing! Tell us more!”请你根据图片提示，用英语为他们进行实时解说。
参考词汇:sunny，ride a bike，take photos
要求:(1)从天气、活动和感受等方面描述图中所给信息，可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)70词左右;(4)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Now I'm visiting the West Lake.
参考词汇:sunny，ride a bike，take photos
要求:(1)从天气、活动和感受等方面描述图中所给信息，可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)70词左右;(4)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Now I'm visiting the West Lake.
答案
One possible version:
Now I'm visiting the West Lake. It is sunny and the sun shines brightly. As you can see, some visitors are rowing their boats in the centre of the lake while other tourists are watching them on the bank. But some visitors are doing something different. A young woman with a black bag is taking a photo of the natural beauty. Meanwhile, a man is riding past her on his bicycle. On the right, a couple sitting on the mat are having a picnic with delicious food.
Everyone is having great fun around the lake.
(89 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】本文是一篇看图作文,先描写天气,接着具体描写人们正在进行的活动和感受,最后总结。主要以“现在进行时”和第三人称为主。
【提纲演示】
引入话题 I'm visiting the West Lake.
具体展开 rowing their boats
watching them on the bank
taking a photo of the natural beauty
riding past her on his bicycle
sitting on the mat
having a picnic
总结点题 Everyone is having great fun.
Now I'm visiting the West Lake. It is sunny and the sun shines brightly. As you can see, some visitors are rowing their boats in the centre of the lake while other tourists are watching them on the bank. But some visitors are doing something different. A young woman with a black bag is taking a photo of the natural beauty. Meanwhile, a man is riding past her on his bicycle. On the right, a couple sitting on the mat are having a picnic with delicious food.
Everyone is having great fun around the lake.
(89 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】本文是一篇看图作文,先描写天气,接着具体描写人们正在进行的活动和感受,最后总结。主要以“现在进行时”和第三人称为主。
【提纲演示】
引入话题 I'm visiting the West Lake.
具体展开 rowing their boats
watching them on the bank
taking a photo of the natural beauty
riding past her on his bicycle
sitting on the mat
having a picnic
总结点题 Everyone is having great fun.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语看图写作任务，要求以李华的身份进行西湖旅行的直播解说，需结合图片内容、提示词（sunny, ride a bike, take photos），从天气、活动、感受三方面写作，使用现在进行时，避免真实信息，控制字数。解题时先确定时态，再按顺序描述天气、图中人物的不同活动，最后表达游玩的感受，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头Now I'm visiting the West Lake. 1. 描述天气：It is sunny and the sun shines brightly. 2. 描述活动：As you can see, some visitors are rowing their boats in the centre of the lake while other tourists are watching them on the bank. A young woman is taking a photo of the natural beauty, and a man is riding past her on his bicycle. A couple are having a picnic on the right. 3. 表达感受：Everyone is having great fun around the lake. 全程使用现在进行时，符合直播的实时语境，内容贴合图片，符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version: Now I'm visiting the West Lake. It is sunny and the sun shines brightly. As you can see, some visitors are rowing their boats in the centre of the lake while other tourists are watching them on the bank. But some visitors are doing something different. A young woman with a black bag is taking a photo of the natural beauty. Meanwhile, a man is riding past her on his bicycle. On the right, a couple sitting on the mat are having a picnic with delicious food. Everyone is having great fun around the lake.
【知识点】
英语看图写作，现在进行时，话题写作
【点评】
本题结合真实场景图片，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求学生能准确运用现在进行时描述画面内容，话题贴近学生生活，易于学生发挥，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语看图写作任务，要求以李华的身份进行西湖旅行的直播解说，需结合图片内容、提示词（sunny, ride a bike, take photos），从天气、活动、感受三方面写作，使用现在进行时，避免真实信息，控制字数。解题时先确定时态，再按顺序描述天气、图中人物的不同活动，最后表达游玩的感受，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头Now I'm visiting the West Lake. 1. 描述天气：It is sunny and the sun shines brightly. 2. 描述活动：As you can see, some visitors are rowing their boats in the centre of the lake while other tourists are watching them on the bank. A young woman is taking a photo of the natural beauty, and a man is riding past her on his bicycle. A couple are having a picnic on the right. 3. 表达感受：Everyone is having great fun around the lake. 全程使用现在进行时，符合直播的实时语境，内容贴合图片，符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version: Now I'm visiting the West Lake. It is sunny and the sun shines brightly. As you can see, some visitors are rowing their boats in the centre of the lake while other tourists are watching them on the bank. But some visitors are doing something different. A young woman with a black bag is taking a photo of the natural beauty. Meanwhile, a man is riding past her on his bicycle. On the right, a couple sitting on the mat are having a picnic with delicious food. Everyone is having great fun around the lake.
【知识点】
英语看图写作，现在进行时，话题写作
【点评】
本题结合真实场景图片，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求学生能准确运用现在进行时描述画面内容，话题贴近学生生活，易于学生发挥，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
