// 假如你是Leo,你喜欢收藏漫画书(comic books)。今年你加入了学校的收藏社,请你根据提示内容,写一篇英语短文,向收藏社的其他成员介绍你的收藏爱好。要求:60词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:
1. 收藏品:漫画书
2. 时间:从九岁开始收集
3. 数量:300多本
4. 收藏原因:喜欢里面的故事和图画
5. 最喜欢的收藏品:爷爷在我11岁生日时送给我的一本漫画书
6. 其他:希望长大后成为一名漫画家
Hi, everyone. I'm Leo. Today, I want to tell you something about my collection.
提示:
1. 收藏品:漫画书
2. 时间:从九岁开始收集
3. 数量:300多本
4. 收藏原因:喜欢里面的故事和图画
5. 最喜欢的收藏品:爷爷在我11岁生日时送给我的一本漫画书
6. 其他:希望长大后成为一名漫画家
Hi, everyone. I'm Leo. Today, I want to tell you something about my collection.
答案
I like collecting comic books. I started to collect them when I was 9 years old, and now I have more than 300 comic books. I love the interesting stories and lovely pictures in them. My favorite one is a comic book my grandpa gave me on my 11th birthday. I hope to be a cartoonist when I grow up.
解析
【分析】这是一篇英语介绍类写作题,需结合给定开头,根据6个提示要点完成60词左右的短文。解题思路:1. 梳理所有必须包含的信息:收藏品为漫画书、9岁开始收集、300多本、因故事和图画喜欢、最喜欢爷爷11岁生日送的、梦想当漫画家;2. 匹配对应时态:过去式描述开始收集和爷爷送书的经历,一般现在时说明现状,将来时表达梦想;3. 用简单句串联内容,确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】写作步骤:① 承接开头点明收藏品:I like collecting comic books.;② 说明收集时间和数量:I started to collect them when I was 9 years old, and now I have more than 300 comic books.;③ 阐述喜欢的原因:I love the interesting stories and lovely pictures in them.;④ 介绍最喜欢的收藏品:My favorite one is a comic book my grandpa gave me on my 11th birthday.;⑤ 表达梦想:I hope to be a cartoonist when I grow up.。将上述内容按逻辑串联,形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】I like collecting comic books. I started to collect them when I was 9 years old, and now I have more than 300 comic books. I love the interesting stories and lovely pictures in them. My favorite one is a comic book my grandpa gave me on my 11th birthday. I hope to be a cartoonist when I grow up.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语时态运用、英语词汇运用
【点评】本题为初中英语基础写作题,提示明确,要点清晰,结构简单,能有效考查学生对介绍类文体的掌握,适合日常练习。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】写作步骤:① 承接开头点明收藏品:I like collecting comic books.;② 说明收集时间和数量:I started to collect them when I was 9 years old, and now I have more than 300 comic books.;③ 阐述喜欢的原因:I love the interesting stories and lovely pictures in them.;④ 介绍最喜欢的收藏品:My favorite one is a comic book my grandpa gave me on my 11th birthday.;⑤ 表达梦想:I hope to be a cartoonist when I grow up.。将上述内容按逻辑串联,形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】I like collecting comic books. I started to collect them when I was 9 years old, and now I have more than 300 comic books. I love the interesting stories and lovely pictures in them. My favorite one is a comic book my grandpa gave me on my 11th birthday. I hope to be a cartoonist when I grow up.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语时态运用、英语词汇运用
【点评】本题为初中英语基础写作题,提示明确,要点清晰,结构简单,能有效考查学生对介绍类文体的掌握,适合日常练习。
【难度系数】0.3
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