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五、书面表达(满分20分)
45.假如你是李辉,你的朋友Nathan听说你最近换了一台新笔记本电脑,来信询问你相关情况。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)新笔记本电脑的基本信息;
(2)(与旧电脑对比)新电脑优势;
(3)对新电脑的希望与期待。
注意:
(1)词数为80—100;文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
Dear Nathan,
I am so happy that I had a new laptop last month. Let me introduce it to you.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
45.假如你是李辉,你的朋友Nathan听说你最近换了一台新笔记本电脑,来信询问你相关情况。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)新笔记本电脑的基本信息;
(2)(与旧电脑对比)新电脑优势;
(3)对新电脑的希望与期待。
注意:
(1)词数为80—100;文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
Dear Nathan,
I am so happy that I had a new laptop last month. Let me introduce it to you.
It has a golden keyboard and looks modern with the thin body.
Although my new laptop is more expensive, it’s much better than the old one. First, the larger screen allows me to see pictures and articles more clearly.
Second, it weighs lighter so that I can carry it anywhere easily. Third, it runs faster. So surfing the internet is smoother now.
In addition, the battery lasts much longer. I don’t need to charge it very often.
I’m really excited about using it and hope it will help me study better. Maybe you can see it next time we meet.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
答案
45.
Dear Nathan,
I am so happy that I had a new laptop last month. Let me introduce it to you. It has a golden keyboard and looks modern with the thin body.
Although my new laptop is more expensive, it’s much better than the old one. First, the larger screen allows me to see pictures and articles more clearly. Second, it weighs lighter so that I can carry it anywhere easily. Third, it runs faster. So surfing the internet is smoother now. In addition, the battery lasts much longer. I don’t need to charge it very often.
I’m really excited about using it and hope it will help me study better. Maybe you can see it next time we meet.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
Dear Nathan,
I am so happy that I had a new laptop last month. Let me introduce it to you. It has a golden keyboard and looks modern with the thin body.
Although my new laptop is more expensive, it’s much better than the old one. First, the larger screen allows me to see pictures and articles more clearly. Second, it weighs lighter so that I can carry it anywhere easily. Third, it runs faster. So surfing the internet is smoother now. In addition, the battery lasts much longer. I don’t need to charge it very often.
I’m really excited about using it and hope it will help me study better. Maybe you can see it next time we meet.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书信写作题，需根据给定要求完成回信。解题思路：1. 明确书信格式，开头和结尾已给出，只需补充中间内容；2. 围绕三个要求的要点展开：先介绍新笔记本电脑的基本信息（外观等），再对比旧电脑说明其优势（分点阐述更清晰），最后表达对新电脑的希望与期待；3. 使用合适的衔接词使内容连贯，控制词数在80-100之间，避免出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【解析】
写作时按以下步骤进行：1. 补充新电脑基本信息：描述外观，如金色键盘、轻薄机身，体现现代感；2. 对比旧电脑说明优势：从屏幕大小、重量、运行速度、续航四个方面展开，使用first、second、third、in addition等衔接词，使逻辑清晰；3. 表达对新电脑的希望：说明希望其帮助学习，增加细节（下次见面可展示）使内容更丰富；最终形成连贯、符合要求的书信内容。
【答案】
Dear Nathan,
I am so happy that I had a new laptop last month. Let me introduce it to you. It has a golden keyboard and looks modern with the thin body.
Although my new laptop is more expensive, it’s much better than the old one. First, the larger screen allows me to see pictures and articles more clearly. Second, it weighs lighter so that I can carry it anywhere easily. Third, it runs faster. So surfing the internet is smoother now. In addition, the battery lasts much longer. I don’t need to charge it very often.
I’m really excited about using it and hope it will help me study better. Maybe you can see it next time we meet.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】
英语书信写作、要点式书面表达、形容词比较级
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求学生围绕指定要点完成书信，需兼顾内容完整性、语言连贯性和格式规范性，是常见的英语写作题型，注重考查学生的语言组织和运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书信写作题，需根据给定要求完成回信。解题思路：1. 明确书信格式，开头和结尾已给出，只需补充中间内容；2. 围绕三个要求的要点展开：先介绍新笔记本电脑的基本信息（外观等），再对比旧电脑说明其优势（分点阐述更清晰），最后表达对新电脑的希望与期待；3. 使用合适的衔接词使内容连贯，控制词数在80-100之间，避免出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【解析】
写作时按以下步骤进行：1. 补充新电脑基本信息：描述外观，如金色键盘、轻薄机身，体现现代感；2. 对比旧电脑说明优势：从屏幕大小、重量、运行速度、续航四个方面展开，使用first、second、third、in addition等衔接词，使逻辑清晰；3. 表达对新电脑的希望：说明希望其帮助学习，增加细节（下次见面可展示）使内容更丰富；最终形成连贯、符合要求的书信内容。
【答案】
Dear Nathan,
I am so happy that I had a new laptop last month. Let me introduce it to you. It has a golden keyboard and looks modern with the thin body.
Although my new laptop is more expensive, it’s much better than the old one. First, the larger screen allows me to see pictures and articles more clearly. Second, it weighs lighter so that I can carry it anywhere easily. Third, it runs faster. So surfing the internet is smoother now. In addition, the battery lasts much longer. I don’t need to charge it very often.
I’m really excited about using it and hope it will help me study better. Maybe you can see it next time we meet.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】
英语书信写作、要点式书面表达、形容词比较级
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求学生围绕指定要点完成书信，需兼顾内容完整性、语言连贯性和格式规范性，是常见的英语写作题型，注重考查学生的语言组织和运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
