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Ⅴ.书面表达
去年春季学期开学，多地中小学将课间时长由10分钟延长至15分钟，切实把时间和空间还给了学生。请根据你的真实感受，以“What Longer Break Time Brings Me”为题，谈谈你对这一改变的看法。
要求:1.字迹工整,段落清晰,表达清楚,语法正确,行文连贯；
2.要点必须包含所有相关信息,并适当发挥；
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数；
4.词数:80—100。
What Longer Break Time Brings Me
Since last year, we have had five more minutes for break time. During the longer break time, I can
去年春季学期开学，多地中小学将课间时长由10分钟延长至15分钟，切实把时间和空间还给了学生。请根据你的真实感受，以“What Longer Break Time Brings Me”为题，谈谈你对这一改变的看法。
要求:1.字迹工整,段落清晰,表达清楚,语法正确,行文连贯；
2.要点必须包含所有相关信息,并适当发挥；
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数；
4.词数:80—100。
What Longer Break Time Brings Me
Since last year, we have had five more minutes for break time. During the longer break time, I can
do more sports and have a better rest. Basketball is my favourite sport. I have more time to practise it with my friends. It's a good time for me to take in some fresh air and enjoy the sunshine.
Sports make me stronger and healthier. Besides, enough rest makes me more relaxed,
so I can study more carefully than before. I even have time to share something interesting
with my classmates. I'm more outgoing and happier now.
I like the longer break time because it not
only makes my school life colorful, but also helps me keep healthy.
答案
Ⅴ. What Longer Break Time Brings Me
Since last year, we have had five more minutes for break time. During the longer break time, I can do more sports and have a better rest. Basketball is my favourite sport. I have more time to practise it with my friends. It's a good time for me to take in some fresh air and enjoy the sunshine.
Sports make me stronger and healthier. Besides, enough rest makes me more relaxed, so I can study more carefully than before. I even have time to share something interesting with my classmates. I'm more outgoing and happier now.
I like the longer break time because it not only makes my school life colorful, but also helps me keep healthy.
Since last year, we have had five more minutes for break time. During the longer break time, I can do more sports and have a better rest. Basketball is my favourite sport. I have more time to practise it with my friends. It's a good time for me to take in some fresh air and enjoy the sunshine.
Sports make me stronger and healthier. Besides, enough rest makes me more relaxed, so I can study more carefully than before. I even have time to share something interesting with my classmates. I'm more outgoing and happier now.
I like the longer break time because it not only makes my school life colorful, but also helps me keep healthy.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达，要求以“What Longer Break Time Brings Me”为题，结合延长课间时间的真实感受写作。需承接给定开头，围绕延长的5分钟课间，涵盖做更多运动、充分休息、与同学交流等要点，表达连贯、语法正确，词数80-100，需体现对这一改变的积极看法。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，说明延长课间后的具体活动：可进行更多运动（如练习篮球）、呼吸新鲜空气享受阳光；
2. 阐述带来的益处：运动让身体更强健，充足休息使学习更专注，还能和同学分享趣事；
3. 总结观点：延长的课间让校园生活更丰富，助力健康成长。
【答案】
What Longer Break Time Brings Me
Since last year, we have had five more minutes for break time. During the longer break time, I can do more sports and have a better rest. Basketball is my favourite sport. I have more time to practise it with my friends. It's a good time for me to take in some fresh air and enjoy the sunshine.
Sports make me stronger and healthier. Besides, enough rest makes me more relaxed, so I can study more carefully than before. I even have time to share something interesting with my classmates. I'm more outgoing and happier now.
I like the longer break time because it not only makes my school life colorful, but also helps me keep healthy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、校园生活话题写作
【点评】
题目结合学生真实校园经历，既考查英语语言的组织与运用能力，又引导学生关注校园生活的积极变化，贴近学生实际，便于学生结合自身感受完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语话题书面表达，要求以“What Longer Break Time Brings Me”为题，结合延长课间时间的真实感受写作。需承接给定开头，围绕延长的5分钟课间，涵盖做更多运动、充分休息、与同学交流等要点，表达连贯、语法正确，词数80-100，需体现对这一改变的积极看法。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，说明延长课间后的具体活动：可进行更多运动（如练习篮球）、呼吸新鲜空气享受阳光；
2. 阐述带来的益处：运动让身体更强健，充足休息使学习更专注，还能和同学分享趣事；
3. 总结观点：延长的课间让校园生活更丰富，助力健康成长。
【答案】
What Longer Break Time Brings Me
Since last year, we have had five more minutes for break time. During the longer break time, I can do more sports and have a better rest. Basketball is my favourite sport. I have more time to practise it with my friends. It's a good time for me to take in some fresh air and enjoy the sunshine.
Sports make me stronger and healthier. Besides, enough rest makes me more relaxed, so I can study more carefully than before. I even have time to share something interesting with my classmates. I'm more outgoing and happier now.
I like the longer break time because it not only makes my school life colorful, but also helps me keep healthy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、校园生活话题写作
【点评】
题目结合学生真实校园经历，既考查英语语言的组织与运用能力，又引导学生关注校园生活的积极变化，贴近学生实际，便于学生结合自身感受完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
